"" Bikhre pal ""

by nirala on March 15, 2011, 12:04:56 PM
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bikhar gaye wo pal na jaane kahan
kho gaye saare wo sapney na jaane kahan------

kabhi rahtey the chupp kar in aankhon me
bah gaye wo ashq na jaane kahan---

kabhi saath hua karta tha apna iss qadar jaise
nadiya dariya ki mauj wo , simat gaye na jaane kahan---
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be happy aal
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«Reply #1 on: March 15, 2011, 12:06:07 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 15, 2011, 12:07:27 PM »
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Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: March 15, 2011, 12:09:27 PM »
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kya baat hai nirala ji....
Kya khoob kaha hai...
Bht bht khoob...
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«Reply #4 on: March 15, 2011, 12:11:36 PM »
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aapka dhanyabaad----
wo aaj ol aya to yo ko miss krte hue yun hi achanak likh gaya.
isme meri koi galti nhi.
aur haan aap hame maaf kariyega aapka b koi post nahi padh paya so reply b nhi kiya sad5
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«Reply #5 on: March 15, 2011, 12:13:21 PM »
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wah wah bahut khub niralaji.... bahut dinon ke baad aapka likha kuchh padne mila hai... laut aaye na ab to.........

bahut badiya....
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«Reply #6 on: March 15, 2011, 12:16:44 PM »
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na ji lauta nhi hun isslie to ye likha mene sad5
lautta to khusi ke kuch pal likhta jai ye dekho
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botalon se kya gila hai doston
bhagya me to pauwa likha hai dosto

aurato ne ghas daali fas gaya
aadmi bhi kitna gadha hai dosto
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thanx Manju
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«Reply #7 on: March 15, 2011, 12:19:31 PM »
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hahaha.... niralaji... aap bhi....

kab tak lautenge..... ab kahan jaiyega.... chhodiye na...
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«Reply #8 on: March 15, 2011, 12:25:10 PM »
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hahaha
aisi baat nhi.
agr yahan hota hun to sab ko padhta hun aur kuch bhi ulta seedha likh ke pareshan krta hun ab wo nhi ho pa rha :
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«Reply #9 on: March 15, 2011, 12:27:29 PM »
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waaaaaahhhhhhhh kya baat he nirala ji........

badle balde se lag raho ho yaar.....

kisi ne fir dil chura liya kya apka ?
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«Reply #10 on: March 15, 2011, 12:31:48 PM »
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' yaara ab to Seena khali hai--koi aaye to hawa hi churayega Usual Smile
hehehe
bahut saara thanx yaara.
dil to ek baar churta hai
bas ham jaise pagal hai jo har baar mudta hai Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: March 15, 2011, 02:43:55 PM »
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bikhar gaye wo pal na jaane kahan
kho gaye saare wo sapney na jaane kahan------

kabhi rahtey the chupp kar in aankhon me
bah gaye wo ashq na jaane kahan---

kabhi saath hua karta tha apna iss qadar jaise
nadiya dariya ki mauj wo , simat gaye na jaane kahan---
""

be happy aal

Good One .... Nirala Ji !
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«Reply #12 on: March 15, 2011, 04:42:42 PM »
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MISSING U NIRALA MASTANA JI...SUNA SUNA HO GAYA AAPKE REPLIES K BINA YO KA SAMA...
AAJAIYE JALDI SE JAHAN BHI GAYE HAIN WAHAN SE....

YE SARE SHER KAMAAL LIKHE HAIN AAPNE..BHT KHUB JI....
JALDI LAUTIEGA
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«Reply #13 on: March 16, 2011, 11:46:05 AM »
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bahut saara thnq Anshuji--
aapka bhi dhanyabaad Kmam Usual Smile
wo ham aa jayenge jaldi hi kuch dino me.
actually aap logo se jada mai khud missing YO ko___
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«Reply #14 on: March 16, 2011, 01:00:18 PM »
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Bikhre bikhre hain ye pal....Niraalaaji.....mast poem...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Kahaan ho aap aaj kal....kya mobile problem hai ?

















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