Bolta Sannataa.... manjum

by manjum on April 27, 2011, 05:07:59 AM
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Bolta Sannataa....

bahut roka,
mana kiya,
samjhaya, danta dapta...
     fir bhi na mana
     hamko satata raha
     jane kya kya
     yad dilata raha
     beete lamhon ke
     kisse dohrata raha....

chup kiya,
ruthhe,
naraz hu...
     fir bhi na mana
     shor machata raha
     hamko rulata raha
     dil par yadon ke
     nashtar chubhata raha...

pyar se samjhaya,
puchkara,
manaya...
     fir bhi na mana
     cheekhta chillata raha
     jeena mushkil banata raha
     ajeeb-o-gareeb se
     sapne dikhata raha....

haar kar
rakh lin hamne
apne kano par hathelian
aur koshish ki
na sun payen
kuchh aur
ek shabd bhi
         Uffff.........
         kitna bolta hai...
         ye sannata.........


manju ”mann”
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«Reply #1 on: April 27, 2011, 05:22:58 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai.. Bht hi khob likha hai ap ne Manju ji..
Nice Creation.. Dil se daad..

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-SKY-
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«Reply #2 on: April 27, 2011, 05:24:48 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya... skyji.....
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«Reply #3 on: April 27, 2011, 05:25:42 AM »
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uff…
ye kaisa sannata…
are wo sannata nai
wo to mere dil ki awaz hai…

mast likha hai manju ji…
daad dil se
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«Reply #4 on: April 27, 2011, 05:27:09 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya kbji.......

sath rahie....
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«Reply #5 on: April 27, 2011, 05:30:01 AM »
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Quote from: manjum on April 27, 2011, 05:07:59 AM
Bolta Sannataa....

bahut roka,
mana kiya,
samjhaya, danta dapta...
     fir bhi na mana
     hamko satata raha
     jane kya kya
     yad dilata raha
     beete lamhon ke
     kisse dohrata raha....

chup kiya,
ruthhe,
naraz hu...
     fir bhi na mana
     shor machata raha
     hamko rulata raha
     dil par yadon ke
     nashtar chubhata raha...

pyar se samjhaya,
puchkara,
manaya...
     fir bhi na mana
     cheekhta chillata raha
     jeena mushkil banata raha
     ajeeb-o-gareeb se
     sapne dikhata raha....

haar kar
rakh lin hamne
apne kano par hathelian
aur koshish ki
na sun payen
kuchh aur
ek shabd bhi
         Uffff.........
         kitna bolta hai...
         ye sannata.........


manju ”mann”



waah waah waah waah kya khoob byaan kiya hai sannate ke baare mein manjum ji kya falsafa hai ek lajawaab tehreer. ek gehra ehsaas.khubsoorat lafzon mein piroya hua kalaam. great defination. main nahin samajhti kisi taarif ka mohtaaj hai. bahut khoob ji
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«Reply #6 on: April 27, 2011, 05:34:05 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya shebaji.....

likhte waqt socha nahin tha ki kya ban raha hai.. bs likh diya...

hame lagta hai ki diniyan ki kisi bhid main itna shor nahin hota jitna sannate main hota hai.. bs...

sath rahie......
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«Reply #7 on: April 27, 2011, 07:45:44 AM »
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accha wala sannata he ye to.........

aacha khayal he manju ji........aacha lag padkar........

aur ye bhi sahi he ki sabse jayda shor sanaate me hi hota he.....
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«Reply #8 on: April 27, 2011, 08:52:54 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya matrixji...

hunn... sath rahie....
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«Reply #9 on: April 27, 2011, 01:07:59 PM »
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bht khoob manju ji...
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«Reply #10 on: April 27, 2011, 01:46:27 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah!!!!

 Bahut Bahut Khoob Anju Ji..lajawaab!!!!

Aur Bilkul Sach kaha aapne Duniya Ki bheed mein Utna Shor nahi Hota Jitna 

Sanatte Ki Shor Mein Hota..Gehri baat Kahi Aapne..

Yuhi Likhte Rahiye.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: April 27, 2011, 06:22:17 PM »
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NICE ONE
Quote from: manjum on April 27, 2011, 05:07:59 AM
Bolta Sannataa....

bahut roka,
mana kiya,
samjhaya, danta dapta...
     fir bhi na mana
     hamko satata raha
     jane kya kya
     yad dilata raha
     beete lamhon ke
     kisse dohrata raha....

chup kiya,
ruthhe,
naraz hu...
     fir bhi na mana
     shor machata raha
     hamko rulata raha
     dil par yadon ke
     nashtar chubhata raha...

pyar se samjhaya,
puchkara,
manaya...
     fir bhi na mana
     cheekhta chillata raha
     jeena mushkil banata raha
     ajeeb-o-gareeb se
     sapne dikhata raha....

haar kar
rakh lin hamne
apne kano par hathelian
aur koshish ki
na sun payen
kuchh aur
ek shabd bhi
         Uffff.........
         kitna bolta hai...
         ye sannata.........


manju ”mann”
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«Reply #12 on: April 27, 2011, 08:11:13 PM »
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Wah Wah Wah..
San'nata..mere liye toh yeh ek lafz nahin balke aadat hai..
Aj yeh kalam ne woh sab bol diya jo main aksar mehsoos karta hoon..
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aur sahi gehri baat kahi..Bahaut shor hai iss khamosh
ehsaas main..!

Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #13 on: April 28, 2011, 01:03:05 AM »
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Manju jee ! sannate kee cheekheN sun paanaa aasaan naheeN........ye aisaa hai jaise kisee andhe gahare kuNae se aatee koi bedum see aawaaz...aap kaa ye kalaam aap kee gahree soch kaa muzaahiraa hai .......
ek sher isee soch kaa muzahiraa kartaa huaameri or se bhee...

khaamoshee ne sun lee hai tanhaai kee sab baateN
hai ishq bahut inme yaaree ye puraanee hai
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«Reply #14 on: April 28, 2011, 02:28:58 AM »
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