BRASHTACHAR....!!

by ghayal_shayar on June 25, 2010, 11:30:38 PM
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mera janam
kisi aspatal ya
prashav grih me nahiN,
balki samaj ki
oopri manjil mein
hua tha.

mera laalan paalan
kisi maa ne nahi
balki samaj ki
beechwali manjil ne
kiya tha.

main
ab tandurust aur
jawan hoon.

mera vichran sthal
neechli manjil se
oopari manjil tak faila hua hai
meri maan aur maryadaa
aakash choom rahi hai.

log bhagwan ke bina
reh sakte hain,par
mere bina nahi.
Meri pahuNch,
panditoN ki shikhaoN,
aur mullaoN ki dadhiyon me,
samaan roop se hai.

mai saapekch hoon
dharm nirpekch hoon
meri gandh lagte he
khushali fail jati hai
aur jahan mein nahi hota
wahan badhali fail jati hai.

main yug ki pukar hoon
samay ki dhaar hoon
najuk sukumar hoon
desh ka bharshtachar hoon.
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #1 on: June 26, 2010, 06:15:38 AM »
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Nice...
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ghayal_shayar
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«Reply #2 on: June 26, 2010, 09:12:56 PM »
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rajesh sahab pasnd karne ka shukriya, bas aage v yuNhi saath nibhaate rahiye...!!
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mamta bajpai
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«Reply #3 on: July 02, 2010, 06:02:33 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
BHRASHTACHAR PAR IS SE ZYADA SATEEK PRAHAAR OR KYA HO SAKTA HAI.DESH KI YE AISI SANTAN HAI JISKI GARBHAVASTHA ME KOI SONOGRAPHY BHI NAHI HOTI.
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«Reply #4 on: July 02, 2010, 07:54:47 AM »
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Nice expression....Ghayal-ji... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Man mei hai apne rosh bahut...
Shabdo mai bhi hai josh bahut...

Kaun hai jimmewaar iska ? kiska hai dosh bahut....
Aur kyu dekhkar bhi sara Bharat hai khamosh bahut...
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«Reply #5 on: July 02, 2010, 11:03:21 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on July 02, 2010, 06:02:33 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
BHRASHTACHAR PAR IS SE ZYADA SATEEK PRAHAAR OR KYA HO SAKTA HAI.DESH KI YE AISI SANTAN HAI JISKI GARBHAVASTHA ME KOI SONOGRAPHY BHI NAHI HOTI.

isi baat ka to dukh hai ki humne khud ise banay hai aur ab kud iska rona ro rahe haiN ki ye nahin ho paya vo nahiN ho paya, bas apna kaam sugam tareeke se aur jaldi ho jaaye chaahe vo galat hi kyuN na ho, isi soch ne bhrastachar ko itna vikraal ban diya hai....!!
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«Reply #6 on: August 18, 2011, 06:20:24 PM »
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 :icon_salut:jisme na ho sochne ki shakti apaar..
jo kar na paye tark-vichar...
aur sahayta karte hai ye samachar...
isi se faile bhrastachar
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«Reply #7 on: August 18, 2011, 06:33:04 PM »
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bahut sundar! apne samaaj ki kadvi sachchaai,sateek vyangya.ghayal ji,badhai ho.
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«Reply #8 on: August 18, 2011, 06:35:02 PM »
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Quote from: ghayal_shayar on June 25, 2010, 11:30:38 PM
mera janam
kisi aspatal ya
prashav grih me nahiN,
balki samaj ki
oopri manjil mein
hua tha.

mera laalan paalan
kisi maa ne nahi
balki samaj ki
beechwali manjil ne
kiya tha.

main
ab tandurust aur
jawan hoon.

mera vichran sthal
neechli manjil se
oopari manjil tak faila hua hai
meri maan aur maryadaa
aakash choom rahi hai.

log bhagwan ke bina
reh sakte hain,par
mere bina nahi.
Meri pahuNch,
panditoN ki shikhaoN,
aur mullaoN ki dadhiyon me,
samaan roop se hai.

mai saapekch hoon
dharm nirpekch hoon
meri gandh lagte he
khushali fail jati hai
aur jahan mein nahi hota
wahan badhali fail jati hai.

main yug ki pukar hoon
samay ki dhaar hoon
najuk sukumar hoon
desh ka bharshtachar hoon.



bahut Bahutttttttt Khooob!!!

Khoobsurat Andaaz-e-Bayaan.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: August 18, 2011, 06:46:59 PM »
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lajawaab creation Shayar ji--
mind blowing peshkash--

jai ho bhrastachar maharaaj ki sad5
sahi kaha iske bina jeena naa-mumkin hai aaj hamare desh me--iske bina badhaali cha jati hai--bhagwaan ke bager rah skte hain lekin iske bager nahi--

hazaaron daad
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«Reply #10 on: January 10, 2012, 10:33:22 AM »
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fantastic . i am creating a site against curruption in india and i am posting your poem on my site my website- indipendentindia.com
email- mitesh_soni@rocketmail.com
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«Reply #11 on: October 29, 2012, 01:44:24 AM »
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sare paathakoN ko aur daad dene waaloN ka maiN shukra guzaar hun, bas umeed karuNga ki aage v aapki hausla afzaayi yuNhi milti rahe....
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«Reply #12 on: October 29, 2012, 02:22:10 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

aap har topic mein bahut shandar likhne ka hunar hai yeh sabit kardiya hai.

bahut umda peshkash.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: October 29, 2012, 03:22:37 AM »
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sunita ji bas kosish karta a huN ki likh pauN vo to aap logoN ki nazar hai jise ye pasand aa jaati hai.... shukriya...
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