Buhat maghroor ho larki ! (by vb)

by vb on July 04, 2012, 02:49:34 PM
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Buhat Maghroor ho larki !
Buhat maghroor larki ho…

Na meri baat sunti ho
Na mujh say baat karti ho
Yunhi baton he baton men
Ishaaron men kanaaiyon men
Tumhen apna banaanay ki
Agar main baat karta hoon
Tumhen achha nahi lagta…
Kabhi madhoshe ho kar main
Tumharay narm honton ki
Agar kuchh baat kar bethoon
Tu mujh say rooth jaati ho…
Kabhi geeton ki chilman say
Dabay paaun agar chal kar
Tumharay paas aa jaaun
Mujhay dhutkaar deti ho…

Chalo men maan leta hoon
Main ik bay-kaar shaair hoon
Mujhay dhutkaar denay say
Tumhen taskeen milti hay
Tu ye sub theek hay lekin
Tumhen itna bata doon men
K is duniya k banenay say
Meray is nazm likhnay tak
Kisi bay-kaar shaair ne
Kisi maghroor larki ko
Kabhi itna nahi chaaha

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«Reply #1 on: July 04, 2012, 03:33:54 PM »
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waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: July 04, 2012, 03:47:13 PM »
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VB Jee Aadaab!


Waah waaH waaH janab kia kahne .... waqai aapke nazmoN meiN
gazab kaa andaaz hota hai... alag hi ahsaas hote hai alag hi
khayaal hote hai .... behad dilkash nazm kahi hai janab.. Usual Smile

Is khoobsurat aur umdaa nazm par humari dheroN dili daad O
mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                 
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«Reply #3 on: July 04, 2012, 04:05:02 PM »
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 Applause :clap:clap: Applause Applause
Bahut achchhi  nazm. Mubarakbad evam shubhkamnayen.
-Arun Mishra.
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«Reply #4 on: July 04, 2012, 06:41:19 PM »
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Parwaaz bhai ne bilkul sach likha hai..
aapka andaaj niraala hai..
aur ehsaaso ko jis gahraai aur tarteeb se jis tarah se pesh karte hai..uska javaab nahee.
duaayen aapke liye..
yun hi chaltee rahe aapki kalam VB jee.
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«Reply #5 on: July 05, 2012, 05:29:06 AM »
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thanx....
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«Reply #6 on: July 06, 2012, 01:52:53 AM »
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bahut khub creation........ bbahut hi shandar vb ji..........
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«Reply #7 on: July 06, 2012, 01:58:53 AM »
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totally very different creation... shuru se aakhir lines tak. bahut badiya  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: July 06, 2012, 05:41:13 AM »
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g... sahi...

thanx...
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«Reply #9 on: July 13, 2012, 11:43:32 AM »
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mujhe to dar lagta hai
teri  inhi pyari baaton se
kahin main kho  na baithun
khudko teri gazlon mein
main inhe roz padhti hun
aur har bar ye kehti hun
ke ye kabhi ho nahin sakta
koi kisiko iss tarah chahe
kisi ki chaahat me apni
har khwaish ko dafnaye ..
lekin main ye janti bhi hun
ke tum jo kuch bhi kehte ho
wo sab sach hi  hota hai
tum mujhpe ab bhi marte ho
magar mujhe magroor kehte ho
kyunki main ikraar se darkar
tumse dur rehti hun
dil hi dil me magar har pal
main ye kehti rehti hun
k main tumpe marti hun
main bas tumpe marti hun......
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«Reply #10 on: July 14, 2012, 08:21:07 AM »
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kya in fazooliyaat ki taareef aur phir in ka reply ....

soch rakha tha qalam ko chalnay say roken.. just thanx, thanx kehtay rahay... lekin lagta hay koshish naakaam he gai hamaari...


thanx anyhow...


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