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by aankhain on October 06, 2007, 08:07:35 PM
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ye kuch likh rahi hoon aor pta nai kya likh rahi hoon:) ager koi galti ho kuch galat likha ho koi adhora pen ho to plz  bta di jiye ga..


teri chahet main jis ny jaha ko bhula diya
tu ny usy chahet ka kesa sila diya........!
teri by rukhi ka na jis ny koi gila kiya...!
tu ny ik pel main usy by waffa bna diya

teri raho main roshni k liye jis ny khud ko jala diya
tu ny bun ker hwa. usi shma ko jala diya
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aankhain
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«Reply #1 on: October 06, 2007, 08:09:43 PM »
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zindagi kuch is tara hum sy ho gai khfa
k moot b na hum sy ker saki waffa
tujh ko khony ki hum sy hoi jo khta
umer bher k liye bun gai wi ik saza
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aankhain
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«Reply #2 on: October 06, 2007, 08:13:21 PM »
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aarzo jis sheks ki, ki thi hum ny umr bher
jub mila to is tara,k aarzo hi cheen li
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aankhain
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«Reply #3 on: October 06, 2007, 08:16:58 PM »
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aadaz e mohabbt kisi ko kya sikhlaty
andaz e mohabbt khud seekh na paay
kisi aor k dil ko hum kya samjhaty
jub apny hi men ko samjha nai paay

plz ye meri khwahish ha k kahi kuch kisi ko galat lagy to plz bta dena... ap sub koi galti hi nai niklaty Puzzled !
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aankhain
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«Reply #4 on: October 06, 2007, 08:27:21 PM »
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kabi ilfaz nahi milty, kabi andaz nahi milty
ajeb ha zindagi k kisi k khyalat nahi milty

milty to hain sabi muskura ker ik dojy sy
lakin dilo main suchy juzbat nai milty

yo.n to sabi fasly mita k milty hain
lakin dilo ki dewary hta k nahi milty

kabi halaat nahi milty. kabi khyalat nahi milty
ajeb hain insan k mil ker b mill nahi paty
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«Reply #5 on: October 07, 2007, 05:18:39 PM »
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Well i like ur efforts and words too...Just improve ur spells only....like

aapne kaha by waffa...isko aise kaho be waffa...aise kisi ko padne me koi takleef nahi hogi..!!!

Baaki likha bahut accha hai...Keep writing.....!!!!
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Roja
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«Reply #6 on: October 07, 2007, 06:19:52 PM »
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Quote from: "aankhain"
ye kuch likh rahi hoon aor pta nai kya likh rahi hoon:) ager koi galti ho kuch galat likha ho koi adhora pen ho to plz  bta di jiye ga..


teri chahet main jis ny jaha ko bhula diya
tu ny usy chahet ka kesa sila diya........!
teri by rukhi ka na jis ny koi gila kiya...!
tu ny ik pel main usy by waffa bna diya

teri raho main roshni k liye jis ny khud ko jala diya
tu ny bun ker hwa. usi shma ko jala diya


Acchi koshish hai Aankhain ji..aur bahut accha bhi
aap likh leti ho. Yu hi likhte rehna...

Aapko bura na lage to aapka hi likha mai yahan pe likh rahi hu

Teri chahat main jis ne jahan ko bhula diya
Tune ussi chahat ka kaisa sila diya..
Tune ek pal main usse be-wafa bana diya

Teri rahon main roshni k liye jisne khud ko jala diya
Tune bankar hawa, ussi shamma ko jala diya...
 
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Roja
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«Reply #7 on: October 07, 2007, 06:24:31 PM »
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aadaz e mohabbt kisi ko kya sikhlaty
andaz e mohabbt khud seekh na paay
kisi aor k dil ko hum kya samjhaty
jub apny hi men ko samjha nai paay

plz ye meri khwahish ha k kahi kuch kisi ko galat lagy to plz bta dena... ap sub koi galti hi nai niklaty Puzzled !


Zarur zarur batayenge sis...Galati kahi nazar nahi aaye
Aapka yeh wala poem bi bahut accha laga padkar.

Mai again aapka likha hua poem ko rewrite karti hu. Plz dont mind.

Andaz-e-Mohabbat kisii ko kya sikhalate
Andaz-e-mohabbat khud seekh na paye
Kisii aur ke dil ko hum kya samjhate
Jab apne hi mann ko samjha nahi paye..!!


Beautiful Aankhein... very good keep up...... dear
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Roja
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«Reply #8 on: October 07, 2007, 06:27:28 PM »
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Zaruri to nahi jine ke liye Sahara ho,
Zaruri to nahi hum jinke hai who humara ho,
Kuch kashtiya doob bhi jaya karti hai,
Zaruri to nahi har kashti ka kinara ho..
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Shikha12
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«Reply #9 on: October 08, 2007, 11:13:55 AM »
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Very nice Aankhain... Nice thoughts..
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Talat
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«Reply #10 on: October 11, 2007, 08:59:23 AM »
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Very nice lines, Aankhain and Roja
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