ChaaNd par jab ghataa ghir ke chhaayee ...............Mamta Bajpai

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ChaaNd par jab ghataa ghir ke chhaayee bahut
yaad mujhko teree phir rulaayee bahut

saath jab tak thaa mujhko naa ahasaas thaa
door tujh se teree yaad aayee bahut

woh meree rooh thee meree pahchaan thee
berukhee uskee mujhko sataayee bahut

tu kahaaN hai chhupaa mere lakht e jigar
ho chukee ab meree jag-hNsaayee bahut

jab se milke gayee mujhse baad e sabaa
baagh me har kalee muskaraayee bahut

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: June 05, 2011, 05:10:53 PM »
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raha jabtak raj tera mere dil pe
tune apni haqumat chalayee bahut

khud ko kahte the jo ke bebaak* hai we                *frank,/khule vicharowale
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on June 05, 2011, 03:11:26 PM
ChaaNd par jab ghataa ghir ke chhaayee bahut
yaad mujhko teree phir rulaayee bahut

saath jab tak thaa mujhko naa ahasaas thaa
door tujh se teree yaad aayee bahut

woh meree rooh thee meree pahchaan thee
berukhee uskee mujhko sataayee bahut

tu kahaaN hai chhupaa mere lakht e jigar
ho chukee ab meree jag-hNsaayee bahut

jab se milke gayee mujhse baad e sabaa
baagh me har kalee muskaraayee bahut

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #2 on: June 05, 2011, 05:47:03 PM »
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Bahut Achchhee ghazal hai Mamta Ji !

khas taur par ye she'r..

too chhupa hai kahaaN mere lakhat-e-jigar
ho chukee ab meree jag-haNsaayee bahut

waah maza aa gaya..

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«Reply #3 on: June 05, 2011, 06:06:04 PM »
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bahoot khoob mamta ji ...dosara sher dil ko bahooooot hi bheetar tak choo gaya....daad kabool karen
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bht bht khoob mamta di....
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wah wah mamtaji.... bahut khub....

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«Reply #6 on: June 06, 2011, 08:20:48 AM »
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mamta sahibah aadab ,,

wah kya ghazal kahi hai ...mashallah ... ghazal ki pazirai ke liye mai alfazo.N se qaasir hon .. sar se paa tak lajawab hai ..ghazal ki ghinaiyat mutacir karti hai .. dad ki degchi ke saat mubarak baad ka dunga bhi hazir hai khubool kare.N ..allah apko mazeed nawaze ..filbeedah ashar apki nazr  

ye bhr ye zamee dil ko bhayee bahot
humne teri ghazal gungunayee bahut

kaun sunta hai maine yahi sunch ke
daastan khud ko apni sunayee bahut


lafz zamee ke liye mazrat


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«Reply #7 on: June 22, 2011, 11:02:09 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on June 05, 2011, 03:11:26 PM
ChaaNd par jab ghataa ghir ke chhaayee bahut
yaad mujhko teree phir rulaayee bahut

saath jab tak thaa mujhko naa ahasaas thaa
door tujh se teree yaad aayee bahut

woh meree rooh thee meree pahchaan thee
berukhee uskee mujhko sataayee bahut

tu kahaaN hai chhupaa mere lakht e jigar
ho chukee ab meree jag-hNsaayee bahut

jab se milke gayee mujhse baad e sabaa
baagh me har kalee muskaraayee bahut

Mamta Bajpai


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«Reply #8 on: June 22, 2011, 08:25:42 PM »
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waah Manoj jee! khoob likaa hai jee.........
tune mujh pe hukoomat chalaayee bahut........
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«Reply #9 on: June 23, 2011, 03:43:17 AM »
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waah Manoj jee! khoob likaa hai jee.........
tune mujh pe hukoomat chalaayee bahut........
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Shukriyaa K A jee!
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shukriyaa Priyaa!
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Shukriyaa Manju jee!
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«Reply #13 on: June 23, 2011, 03:09:52 PM »
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kamaal ka kalaam hai maate…
bht bht acha laga…
aapko mera pranaam aur khus rahne ki bht saari duayen…
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Khush raho bachche! jahaaN raho safaltaa tumhaare qadam choome.......inhee duaaoN ke saath .....
mamta bhare dulaar ke saath ........
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