** Chalai Usne Jab Tiir** RH

by Rajesh Harish on April 25, 2010, 04:52:46 AM
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Chalai usne jab  tiir
Gayee paar seena chiir
Ba.dh gayee hai dil ki piir
Na nikli hai aankho.n se niir
Ab tu  dhar lo mann mein dhiir
Sahan sakti rakhta hai tera yeh viir
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«Reply #1 on: April 25, 2010, 06:31:14 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai           Rajesh Harish ji.....

Tu de jitna bhi dard
sahelega ye mard....
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«Reply #2 on: April 25, 2010, 07:55:53 AM »
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Wah Rajesh ji bahut khoob lovely creation,beautiful lines by Cara ji. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause :icon_thumleft:keep it up
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«Reply #3 on: April 25, 2010, 11:02:21 AM »
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Quote from: cara on April 25, 2010, 06:31:14 AM
Wah kya baat hai           Rajesh Harish ji.....

Tu de jitna bhi dard
sahelega ye mard....

Shukriya Cara Ji
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«Reply #4 on: April 25, 2010, 11:02:53 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on April 25, 2010, 07:55:53 AM
Wah Rajesh ji bahut khoob lovely creation,beautiful lines by Cara ji. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause :icon_thumleft:keep it up

Thanx Madhu Ji
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«Reply #5 on: April 25, 2010, 11:11:12 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Rajesh ji... baut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: April 25, 2010, 11:15:24 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: April 25, 2010, 08:59:41 PM »
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WAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kya baat hai bhut himat rekhte ho ...
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«Reply #8 on: April 26, 2010, 05:01:43 AM »
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Quote from: neelgold on April 25, 2010, 08:59:41 PM
WAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kya baat hai bhut himat rekhte ho ...

Shukriya Neel Ji
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«Reply #9 on: April 26, 2010, 10:07:57 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 25, 2010, 04:52:46 AM
Chalai usne jab  tiir
Gayee paar seena chiir
Ba.dh gayee hai dil ki piir
Na nikli hai aankho.n se niir
Ab tu  dhar lo mann mein dhiir
Sahan sakti rakhta hai tera yeh viir


Wah! Nice creations. keep it up dear.
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«Reply #10 on: April 26, 2010, 12:50:11 PM »
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Bahot khoob Rajesh ji. Nice creation.
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«Reply #11 on: April 28, 2010, 05:46:12 AM »
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Quote from: waquif ansari on April 26, 2010, 10:07:57 AM
Wah! Nice creations. keep it up dear.
Thanks Ansari Ji
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«Reply #12 on: April 28, 2010, 05:46:47 AM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on April 26, 2010, 12:50:11 PM
Bahot khoob Rajesh ji. Nice creation.

Shukriya Riyaz Ji
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