chalay jain gay jub yaan say (NM)

by vb on October 23, 2010, 12:06:14 PM
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«Reply #1 on: October 23, 2010, 08:30:24 PM »
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har bar ki tarah jo feel kiya wo likh diya..umeed hai aapko bura nahin lagega...

Haan jao iss kamre se chale jao tum
sang apne yaadein bhi le jao tum
ye jo dard aur aansu diye tumne
inhe bhi sang apne le jao

iss kamrey me jisme tum rehte the
 hum ghanto baatein karte the
isme gunjegi baatein wo
unko kaise chup karaungi
mere kanon me jab gunjegi
teri awaz ye bolo main
kaise use khanosh kar paungi

iss deewaar k sat ke hi
tumne pehli bar chhua tha mujhe
 main jab yahn aaungi
 ye mujhe paas bulayengi
 bolo kaise mana kar paungi
isko bhi sang apne le jao tum

ye jo iss kamre me teri khushbu hai
 jo sang mere hi rehti hai
 meri saanson me jo basti hai
 isko kaise  khudse alag kar paungi
isko bhi sang apne le jao tum
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«Reply #2 on: October 24, 2010, 09:18:23 PM »
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bahut bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Vb ji.. bahut hi pyaara aur dil ko chhuta hua sa...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: October 26, 2010, 06:36:21 PM »
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Bahot khoob VB Ji. Bahot achhi nazm likhi hai aapne. Congratulation for such nice creation.
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«Reply #4 on: October 27, 2010, 09:11:05 AM »
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nazme badi achhi pesh karte he aap vb jii bahut badhiya achha lagta he..padhne me...lage rahiye ..dgher saari dad ke sath`
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