~*~ Chalta jaye musafir ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on January 19, 2012, 08:13:09 PM
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Galat beimani raahon par, khud ko chalaye musafir,
Nadan itna kay, Khuda ko bhi bhool jaye musafir..

Akele aye hai.. akele hi laut jana hai hume,
Yeh jante hue bhi, bas gunah hi gunah kamaye musafir..

Kaante dard zaroor dete hai mager insaan se behtar hai,
Ek dusre ko nuksan pohchane kay, naye raaste banaye musafir..

Dusron kay dard ko kuch lavzon se halka kare bas,
Khud kay dard pe hi, bas ansoo khoob bahaye musafir..

Insaan kaise fakr se jee leta hai, samaj nahin ata mujhe,
Jis’se be-inteha mohobat kare, ussi ko kaise bewaffa bulaye musafir..

Kabhi iman toh kabhi jism, sab kuch hi loota deta hai bandya tu,
‘Khamosh’ kehta hai, bikne se acha yeh, kay mar jaye musafir..

Lakh khamiyan sahi mager, ek baat ki daad deni parregi,
Yeh baat kya bahaduri se kam hai ‘Khamosh’,
Apnon ko dafna kar bhi bas chalta jaye musafir..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: January 19, 2012, 08:19:14 PM »
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Musafir !

Very Well written and described Rahim.. Bahoot Bahoot Sach aur Bahoot Umda Likha hai ...

I have just found that Musafir seems like ur favorite Topic! Usual Smile

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«Reply #2 on: January 19, 2012, 08:24:03 PM »
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Quote from: Nysha on January 19, 2012, 08:19:14 PM
Musafir !

Very Well written and described Rahim.. Bahoot Bahoot Sach aur Bahoot Umda Likha hai ...

I have just found that Musafir seems like ur favorite Topic! Usual Smile

Like it


Nysha
Hmm mera fav topic..Hamesha sa Zindagi rahi hai..
Aur kyun ki hum sab iss zindagi kay musafir hai, toh bas ispe likhna mujhe acha lagta hai..
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya..
Bas yunhi apna saath banaye rakhiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #3 on: January 20, 2012, 06:24:27 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: January 20, 2012, 07:19:44 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on January 20, 2012, 06:24:27 AM
Applause Applause Applause
Teh teh dil se shukriya SkSaini jee..
Yunhi saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: January 20, 2012, 07:39:08 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on January 19, 2012, 08:13:09 PM
Galat beimani raahon par, khud ko chalaye musafir,
Nadan itna kay, Khuda ko bhi azmaye musafir..

Akele aye hai.. akele hi laut jana hai hume,
Yeh jante hue bhi, bas gunah hi gunah kamaye musafir..

Kaante dard zaroor dete hai mager insaan se behtar hai,
Ek dusre ko nuksan pohchane kay, naye raaste banaye musafir..

Dusron kay dard ko kuch lavzon se halka kare bas,
Khud kay dard pe hi, bas ansoo khoob bahaye musafir..

Insaan kaise fakr se jee leta hai, samaj nahin ata mujhe,
Jis’se be-inteha mohobat kare, ussi ko kaise bewaffa bulaye musafir..

Kabhi iman toh kabhi jism, sab kuch hi loota deta hai bandya tu,
‘Khamosh’ kehta hai, bikne se acha yeh, kay mar jaye musafir..

Lakh khamiyan sahi mager, ek baat ki daad deni parregi,
Yeh baat kya bahaduri se kam hai ‘Khamosh’,
Apnon ko dafna kar bhi bas chalta jaye musafir..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Bahut bahut Khoooob Dost Rahim

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat zazbaat..Bahut Ache

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«Reply #6 on: January 20, 2012, 09:52:45 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahut khub rahim ji
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«Reply #7 on: January 20, 2012, 11:44:39 AM »
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wah dost--
kya kamaal ki haqeeqat bayan ki aapne--
ek ek alfaaz sach bayan karta hua
jada kuch kahne ko hai hi nhi post par.
just awsome!!

god bless u dost
khus rahie
muskurate rahie
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«Reply #8 on: January 20, 2012, 12:24:53 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause wah rahimji
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«Reply #9 on: January 20, 2012, 01:15:34 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 20, 2012, 07:39:08 AM
Bahut bahut Khoooob Dost Rahim

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat zazbaat..Bahut Ache

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Teh teh dil se shukriya Khwaish dost..
Bas yunhi apna saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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Quote from: sunildehgawani on January 20, 2012, 09:52:45 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahut khub rahim ji
Sunil jee,
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya..
Saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: January 20, 2012, 01:17:51 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on January 20, 2012, 11:44:39 AM
wah dost--
kya kamaal ki haqeeqat bayan ki aapne--
ek ek alfaaz sach bayan karta hua
jada kuch kahne ko hai hi nhi post par.
just awsome!!

god bless u dost
khus rahie
muskurate rahie
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Dost,
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya..
Bas yunhi apna saath banaye rakhiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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Quote from: mann.mann on January 20, 2012, 12:24:53 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause wah rahimji
Mann.mann jee,
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya..
Saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #13 on: January 20, 2012, 02:19:42 PM »
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«Reply #14 on: January 20, 2012, 04:03:22 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on January 20, 2012, 02:19:42 PM
Applause Applause
Teh teh dil se shukriya FH Siddiqui jee..
Bas yunhi apna saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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