~*~ Chalta jaye musafir ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on January 19, 2012, 08:13:09 PM
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«Reply #15 on: January 20, 2012, 06:33:37 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Rahim bhai
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«Reply #16 on: January 21, 2012, 08:13:14 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Rahim bhai
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Teh teh dil se shukriya dost..
Bas yunhi apna saath banaye rakhiyega..
Khush rahiye.!
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«Reply #17 on: January 21, 2012, 08:26:40 AM »
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Galat beimani raahon par, khud ko chalaye musafir,
Nadan itna kay, Khuda ko bhool jaaye musafir..
 
Akele aye hai.. akele hi laut jana hai hume,
Yeh jante hue bhi, bas gunah hi gunah kamaye musafir..

Kaante dard zaroor dete hai mager insaan se behtar hai,
Ek dusre ko nuksan pohchane kay, naye raaste banaye musafir..

Dusron kay dard ko kuch lavzon se halka kare bas,
Khud kay dard pe hi, bas ansoo khoob bahaye musafir..

Insaan kaise fakr se jee leta hai, samaj nahin ata mujhe,
Jis’se be-inteha mohobat kare, ussi ko kaise bewaffa bulaye musafir..

Kabhi iman toh kabhi jism, sab kuch hi loota deta hai bandya tu,
‘Khamosh’ kehta hai, bikne se acha yeh, kay mar jaye musafir..

Lakh khamiyan sahi mager, ek baat ki daad deni parregi,
Yeh baat kya bahaduri se kam hai ‘Khamosh’,
Apnon ko dafna kar bhi bas chalta jaye musafir..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

JANAAB RAHIM SAHAB,
                  SALAAM-ALAIKUM,

                  MATLE MEIN JO DOOSRA MISRA HAI...KHUDA KO AAZMAAYE MUSAFIR.YE EK KHUFRIYA  KALAAM HAI. MERE BHAI, KHUDA KO BHULNA EK NADAANI HO SAKTI HAI PER DUNIYA KI KOI SHAY KHUDA KO AZMA NAHIN SAKTI.SIRF KHUDA HI AAZMATA HAI HAMEIN AUR USKE EVAZ MEIN SAZA AUR JAZAA MONTAKHIB KIYA HAI. AAP EK PADHE LIKHE DANISHWAR HAI. KALAAM KE MAANE PER BHI DHYAAN RAKHA KAREIN..MERI BAAT KA BURA MAT MAANEIN.!
SHUKRIYA.
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«Reply #18 on: January 21, 2012, 08:54:33 AM »
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JANAAB RAHIM SAHAB,
                  SALAAM-ALAIKUM,

                  MATLE MEIN JO DOOSRA MISRA HAI...KHUDA KO AAZMAAYE MUSAFIR.YE EK KHUFRIYA  KALAAM HAI. MERE BHAI, KHUDA KO BHULNA EK NADAANI HO SAKTI HAI PER DUNIYA KI KOI SHAY KHUDA KO AZMA NAHIN SAKTI.SIRF KHUDA HI AAZMATA HAI HAMEIN AUR USKE EVAZ MEIN SAZA AUR JAZAA MONTAKHIB KIYA HAI. AAP EK PADHE LIKHE DANISHWAR HAI. KALAAM KE MAANE PER BHI DHYAAN RAKHA KAREIN..MERI BAAT KA BURA MAT MAANEIN.!
SHUKRIYA.

Hmm apki raaye apki..
Kehne ka matlab yeh tha kay insaan aisi bhool kar jata hai..
Khair, woh Rabb janta hai maine kis niyat se likha hai aur woh niyatein dekhta hai..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #19 on: January 21, 2012, 09:20:50 AM »
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wah wah wah
sachhaiyon ko badi sunderta se prastut kiya hai.
rahin ji daad hazir hai,
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«Reply #20 on: January 21, 2012, 09:27:47 AM »
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Hmm apki raaye apki..
Kehne ka matlab yeh tha kay insaan aisi bhool kar jata hai..
Khair, woh Rabb janta hai maine kis niyat se likha hai aur woh niyatein dekhta hai..
Khush rahiye..!


ALLAH SAARE GAIB KA ILM RAKHNE WALA HAI. WOH DIL KI BAAT JAANTA HAI. MAIN EK INSAAN HOON. AAPNE JO LIKHA MAINE APNE NAZARIYE SE PADHA. RAHIM BHAI MEHARBAANI KAR KE ISS KALAAM MEIN AAPKA 'AAZMAANE' LAFZ SE MURAAD KYA HAI .TASHRIH KAR DEIN. TAKI KAHNE KI BAARIKI SAMAJH AA JAAYE MERE KUND ZEHAN MEIN
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«Reply #21 on: January 21, 2012, 07:47:04 PM »
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ALLAH SAARE GAIB KA ILM RAKHNE WALA HAI. WOH DIL KI BAAT JAANTA HAI. MAIN EK INSAAN HOON. AAPNE JO LIKHA MAINE APNE NAZARIYE SE PADHA. RAHIM BHAI MEHARBAANI KAR KE ISS KALAAM MEIN AAPKA 'AAZMAANE' LAFZ SE MURAAD KYA HAI .TASHRIH KAR DEIN. TAKI KAHNE KI BAARIKI SAMAJH AA JAAYE MERE KUND ZEHAN MEIN

Khair, maine woh lavz badal diya hai..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #22 on: January 21, 2012, 07:48:29 PM »
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wah wah wah
sachhaiyon ko badi sunderta se prastut kiya hai.
rahin ji daad hazir hai,
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Suresh jee,
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya..
Apne parra aur samjha..
Saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #23 on: January 22, 2012, 05:06:39 PM »
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bahut khoob likhaa hai aap ne Rahim jee! ek musafir kee kahaanee ek musaafir kee zubaanee.....waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #24 on: January 23, 2012, 08:14:05 AM »
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bahut khoob likhaa hai aap ne Rahim jee! ek musafir kee kahaanee ek musaafir kee zubaanee.....waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!!!!!
Mamta jee,
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya..
Apne waqt diya aur samjha..
Bas yunhi saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #25 on: January 26, 2012, 04:09:46 AM »
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Wah Kya Baat Hai Rahim Mere Bhai.. Humesha Ki Tarah Lajawab aur Behad umda.. Jazzbaaton Ko Behad Sanjidgi se Alfaazon me sameta hai.. Daad hi daaaaaaaaaad.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #26 on: January 26, 2012, 01:07:00 PM »
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Wah Kya Baat Hai Rahim Mere Bhai.. Humesha Ki Tarah Lajawab aur Behad umda.. Jazzbaaton Ko Behad Sanjidgi se Alfaazon me sameta hai.. Daad hi daaaaaaaaaad.. Applause Applause



**~** Mann **~**
Vikas bhaiiiii,
Apka comment hamesha dil main ek special hulchul kar jata hai..
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya..
Yunhi saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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