charcha bahut hua.....

by SURESH SANGWAN on August 26, 2013, 09:59:08 PM
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Jaane do usse, vo gujra hua waqt tha
aage kadam badhao,peeche mud jana bahut hua

shor iss dil mein akhir utha hai kyun
Andar hi dekha jaye ab baahar bahut hua.

Dard hota hai ismeiN,aankhoN se ashaq behne do
Zinda jism ko pathhar banana bahut hua.

Koi muraad subh-o-sham karti hai bekaraar
chalo ab dua ko haath uthaya jaaye bahut hua

Din nikla ab ujalon ki kami kya hai
Jaane do,uss chiraag ka charcha bahut hua.
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«Reply #1 on: August 26, 2013, 10:36:41 PM »
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bahut khoob , sangwan ji . mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #2 on: August 26, 2013, 10:48:58 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 26, 2013, 11:09:47 PM »
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bahot khoob, dheron daad  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #4 on: August 26, 2013, 11:58:39 PM »
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thanks siddique ji for your compliments
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bahut khoob , sangwan ji . mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #5 on: August 27, 2013, 12:00:00 AM »
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 a lot of thanks hrday ji.
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thanks a lotIqtedar ji
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«Reply #7 on: August 27, 2013, 01:57:36 AM »
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Sahi Kaha Aapne Sureshji Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #8 on: August 27, 2013, 08:36:14 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: August 27, 2013, 11:03:24 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: August 27, 2013, 11:54:45 AM »
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Waah .... Bad hi sundar vichaar hain Suresh ji....
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«Reply #11 on: August 27, 2013, 12:59:27 PM »
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waaaaaah.. bahut khoob suresh ji... dheron daad...
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«Reply #12 on: August 27, 2013, 02:59:27 PM »
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Koi muraad subh-o-sham karti hai bekaraar
chalo ab dua ko haath uthaya jaaye bahut hua

waah waah bahut bahut khoob suresh ji.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #13 on: August 27, 2013, 04:06:05 PM »
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waah waah bahutkhoobsoorat kalaam dheron daad
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«Reply #14 on: August 27, 2013, 04:58:22 PM »
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 icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower bahut 2 shukriya Ravindera ji
Sahi Kaha Aapne Sureshji Bahut Khoob.
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