!!!..Chehra ek jaana pehchana dhoondh liya..!!!

by nashwani on September 11, 2013, 11:03:07 PM
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Desh begaana dhoondh liya, maahaul anjaana dhoondh liya,,
To kaise nazaro me chehra ek jaana pehchana dhoondh liya..

Chhor aaye the ham jo galiya.N, kabhi naa laut jaane ke liye,,
Khwabo.N me unhi raasto.N kaa phir thikaana dhoondh liya..

Tasveer kya dekh li uss shaqs ki tanha raat ke uss aalam me,,
Nashe me doob jaane kaa phirr se ikk bahaana dhoondh liya..

Yaado.N ke uss daldal se kitni mushkil se nikal kar aaye the,,
Aur dekho phir, dil jalaane ka anchaha khajana dhoondh liya..

Murat-e-patthar ki tarah dhadkan thaam ke nikale the ham to,,
Teer bhi tera kamaal kaa tha, phir bhi nishaana dhoondh liya..

Na khushnaseeb na badnaseeb, thoda ajeeb hai tera 'deewana',,
Dekh bhulaate bhulaate khoyaa hua wo fasaana dhoondh liya..!!! Ñ
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«Reply #1 on: September 11, 2013, 11:24:34 PM »
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Bahut Khoobsurat kalaam pesh kiya aapne Nshwani ji.
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«Reply #3 on: September 12, 2013, 12:43:21 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: September 12, 2013, 01:45:46 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: September 12, 2013, 01:55:25 PM »
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Chhor aaye the ham jo galiya.N, kabhi naa laut jaane ke liye,,
Khwabo.N me unhi raasto.N kaa phir thikaana dhoondh liya..

Tasveer kya dekh li uss shaqs ki tanha raat ke uss aalam me,,
Nashe me doob jaane kaa phirr se ikk bahaana dhoondh liya..
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«Reply #11 on: September 13, 2013, 01:53:09 AM »
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Aap sabhi ka tahe dil se shukriya..

Yun hi aage bhi ssath banae rakhe..happy9

Thankyou !
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