chen o sukoon e karaar,,,,,,,,jeet jainam

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umer bit gayi saari or kitna kare intezaar,
mera haal e dil janker bhi na kiya tune ikraar,

woh anjaani samjh jati ager mere zajbaato ko,
bas yahi umeed me dil se niklti rahi pukaar,

saddaa,o se cheen leta me woh haseen lamhe,
ager mere pyaar per woh kar leta atbaar,

woh meri zindagi ka ek adhura khuwaab raha,
jo mere dil ka le gya chen o sukoon e karaar,

na gila hai koi na shikwa hai bas yahi armaan,
ke ek baar aaker apni jubaani woh kardte izhaar,

apne ap ko kosta hu akser,hath ki lakeere dekhker,
kiyon khuda ki nazar mera hi adhura raha kirdaar,

pyaar saato janam ka rishta hai,sab kehte hai akser,
fir kiyon dua mangta raha meri mout ki mera dildaar,

yoh hijar ki lau jalaker dil tapadta na[jeet] kabhi,
ager pehle jaan jata ki judaai ka naam hai pyaar,

                         jj saini
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«Reply #1 on: June 26, 2014, 12:16:46 AM »
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Quote from: jeet jainam on June 26, 2014, 12:00:13 AM
umer bit gayi saari or kitna kare intezaar,
mera haal e dil janker bhi na kiya tune ikraar,

woh anjaani samjh jati ager mere zajbaato ko,
bas yahi umeed me dil se niklti rahi pukaar,

saddaa,o se cheen leta me woh haseen lamhe,
ager mere pyaar per woh kar leta atbaar,

woh meri zindagi ka ek adhura khuwaab raha,
jo mere dil ka le gya chen o sukoon e karaar,

na gila hai koi na shikwa hai bas yahi armaan,
ke ek baar aaker apni jubaani woh kardte izhaar,

apne ap ko kosta hu akser,hath ki lakeere dekhker,
kiyon khuda ki nazar mera hi adhura raha kirdaar,

pyaar saato janam ka rishta hai,sab kehte hai akser,
fir kiyon dua mangta raha meri mout ki mera dildaar,

yoh hijar ki lau jalaker dil tapadta na[jeet] kabhi,
ager pehle jaan jata ki judaai ka naam hai pyaar,

                          jj saini






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Jeet Sahib bahut umdah qalaam hai...dheron daad.
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Waah bahut khoob kaha aapne jeet ji...
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