Chend Rubaieeya.......( Ghayel )

by sajid_ghayel on May 20, 2009, 12:44:19 PM
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Aaye huye to muddat hui

Teri mehfil me kismet aazmaye muddat hui

Is kadar kiya tha paraya kabhi kisi ne

Kisi ko apna banaye muddat hui...




Char kandho ki zarurat se badhkar koi zarurat nahi

Tere dard mile aasoo mile khushiyo ki zarurat nahi

Jinki khatir humne chodi duniya sari

Who kehte hain ab Ghayel ki zarurat nahi...




Diya jala sirf ujalo ka tazkira na kar

Kisi ke kam aa sirf hausla na kar

Tere shero me ho khoobi to koi baat nahi Ghayel

Bevajah mehfil me shayro ki islah na kar



-Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2009, 12:46:59 PM »
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ghazab likha hai ghayel ji!  bahut khoob!
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«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2009, 12:48:42 PM »
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Mashallah Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Bhai,.
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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2009, 04:51:36 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: May 22, 2009, 10:23:16 AM »
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Aaye huye to muddat hui

Teri mehfil me kismet aazmaye muddat hui

Is kadar kiya tha paraya kabhi kisi ne

Kisi ko apna banaye muddat hui...



Char kandho ki zarurat se badhkar koi zarurat nahi

Tere dard mile aasoo mile khushiyo ki zarurat nahi

Jinki khatir humne chodi duniya sari

Who kehte hain ab Ghayel ki zarurat nahi...



Diya jala sirf ujalo ka tazkira na kar

Kisi ke kam aa sirf hausla na kar

Tere shero me ho khoobi to koi baat nahi Ghayel

Bevajah mehfil me shayro ki islah na kar


-Sajid Ghayel-

bahut khoob Sajid sahab Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: May 25, 2009, 09:02:55 AM »
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Aaye huye to muddat hui

Teri mehfil me kismet aazmaye muddat hui

Is kadar kiya tha paraya kabhi kisi ne

Kisi ko apna banaye muddat hui...



Char kandho ki zarurat se badhkar koi zarurat nahi

Tere dard mile aasoo mile khushiyo ki zarurat nahi

Jinki khatir humne chodi duniya sari

Who kehte hain ab Ghayel ki zarurat nahi...



Diya jala sirf ujalo ka tazkira na kar

Kisi ke kam aa sirf hausla na kar

Tere shero me ho khoobi to koi baat nahi Ghayel

Bevajah mehfil me shayro ki islah na kar


-Sajid Ghayel-

ZORDAAR LIKHAA HAI BHAI..S_G
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«Reply #6 on: May 25, 2009, 09:17:26 PM »
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Aaye huye to muddat hui

Teri mehfil me kismet aazmaye muddat hui

Is kadar kiya tha paraya kabhi kisi ne

Kisi ko apna banaye muddat hui...



Char kandho ki zarurat se badhkar koi zarurat nahi

Tere dard mile aasoo mile khushiyo ki zarurat nahi

Jinki khatir humne chodi duniya sari

Who kehte hain ab Ghayel ki zarurat nahi...



Diya jala sirf ujalo ka tazkira na kar

Kisi ke kam aa sirf hausla na kar

Tere shero me ho khoobi to koi baat nahi Ghayel

Bevajah mehfil me shayro ki islah na kar


-Sajid Ghayel-
Applause Applause bahaut bahaut acha likha hai Ghayel Saheb...
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«Reply #7 on: May 25, 2009, 09:28:06 PM »
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beautiful work sajid ji,very very nice. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: May 26, 2009, 02:18:33 AM »
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Kya baat hai Ghayal Ji
Bahut bahut Khoooooob
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«Reply #9 on: June 12, 2009, 03:37:31 AM »
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ghazab likha hai ghayel ji!  bahut khoob!

Thank You Vitasta for your time and comment.
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«Reply #10 on: July 06, 2009, 05:47:34 AM »
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 Bahut khoob Ghayal ji  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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