chhipa ke rakhne ko.........ss

by SURESH SANGWAN on June 28, 2011, 01:22:46 PM
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Tumhen zikr karna kya zarooro tha jahan mein.
Humne kaha tha seene mein chipa ke rakhne ko.

Tum apni fitrat se mazboor the jaane kyun.
Humne kaha tha mazbooriyon se uupar uthne ko.

Ab kahan rahi wo rasmo raah,wo ummeede wafa.
Zayaz hai ke badal dalo,ummedon ki galiyon ko.
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«Reply #1 on: June 28, 2011, 01:35:47 PM »
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bahot khub ss ji…
ye poetry kuch hattke hai…
daad daad aur daad
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«Reply #2 on: June 28, 2011, 01:55:14 PM »
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khub  ss ji sahi hi hai aaj apne raste hi badal lene chahiye
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«Reply #3 on: June 28, 2011, 02:35:52 PM »
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bht bht khoob suresh ji...
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«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2011, 02:44:10 PM »
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boht emotional likha hai apne sangwan ji
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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2011, 04:07:35 PM »
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shukriya NIRALA JI.
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Quote from: nirala on June 28, 2011, 01:35:47 PM
bahot khub ss ji…
ye poetry kuch hattke hai…
daad daad aur daad
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«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2011, 04:08:33 PM »
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SHUKRIYA KAMAL JI.
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Quote from: kamal aggarwal on June 28, 2011, 01:55:14 PM
khub  ss ji sahi hi hai aaj apne raste hi badal lene chahiye
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SAAHIL JI HAUSALA AFZAHI KA BAHUT 2 SHUKRIYA.
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«Reply #8 on: June 28, 2011, 04:10:15 PM »
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THANKS A LOT manzil e ishaq ji.
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«Reply #9 on: June 28, 2011, 04:23:44 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on June 28, 2011, 01:22:46 PM
Tumhen zikr karna kya zarooro tha jahan mein.
Humne kaha tha seene mein chipa ke rakhne ko.

Tum apni fitrat se mazboor the jaane kyun.
Humne kaha tha mazbooriyon se uupar uthne ko.

Ab kahan rahi wo rasmo raah,wo ummeede wafa.
Zayaz hai ke badal dalo,ummedon ki galiyon ko.

Bahut bahut  Khoob Sureshji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Sureshji, iss Leh Mein Aapko aur bhi kuch likhna chaahiye,koshish kijiye 2 aur sher aad kijiye.. icon_flower
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«Reply #10 on: June 28, 2011, 06:03:45 PM »
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main kuch isi andaaz me naraz hoti hun....yun laga mere dil ki bat keh di aapne....
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«Reply #11 on: June 29, 2011, 01:31:12 PM »
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 WAH JI WAH Sureshji achha likha hai aapne... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Yu tou aadat nahi hai Dil k jakhmo ko deekhane ki
 Par diye they jakhm jisne wahi marham le k aa gaya

 Bahut arse tak teri bewafai-berukhi ko seene mai dabaaye rakha
 Nahi hai fitrat meri par aaj ye Ashqon ka samundar roke na ruka

 Unke naaraaz hone ka andaaz bhee khoob samajhte hai hum
 Kab tak rokte khud ko hum bhi jab nikalne lagaa tha dum




Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on June 28, 2011, 01:22:46 PM
Tumhen zikr karna kya zarooro tha jahan mein.
Humne kaha tha seene mein chipa ke rakhne ko.

Tum apni fitrat se mazboor the jaane kyun.
Humne kaha tha mazbooriyon se uupar uthne ko.

Ab kahan rahi wo rasmo raah,wo ummeede wafa.
Zayaz hai ke badal dalo,ummedon ki galiyon ko.
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«Reply #12 on: June 29, 2011, 01:49:00 PM »
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Suresh Ji bhuat khoob...
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«Reply #13 on: July 16, 2011, 08:44:52 AM »
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SHUKRIYA ANU JI.
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aap bhi meri hi tarha sochti hain.
Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on June 28, 2011, 06:03:45 PM
main kuch isi andaaz me naraz hoti hun....yun laga mere dil ki bat keh di aapne....
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«Reply #14 on: July 16, 2011, 08:45:52 AM »
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anam ji aapka bahut sa shukriya.
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aapne bhi bahut achha likha hai.
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Quote from: ANAAM on June 29, 2011, 01:31:12 PM
WAH JI WAH Sureshji achha likha hai aapne... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Yu tou aadat nahi hai Dil k jakhmo ko deekhane ki
 Par diye they jakhm jisne wahi marham le k aa gaya

 Bahut arse tak teri bewafai-berukhi ko seene mai dabaaye rakha
 Nahi hai fitrat meri par aaj ye Ashqon ka samundar roke na ruka

 Unke naaraaz hone ka andaaz bhee khoob samajhte hai hum
 Kab tak rokte khud ko hum bhi jab nikalne lagaa tha dum
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