SURESH SANGWAN
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छोड़ा हाथ हौसले ने न डरूँ तो क्या करूं खुद पर नहीं जब इख्तियार करूं तो क्या करूं
मिला नहीं अभी हवा को रही ज़ुस्तज़ू जिसकी इठला के पूछती है ना फिरूँ तो क्या करूं
डूबा है सारा शहर जब समंदर-ए-सोज़ में सोचूँ हूँ तन्हा तन्हा मैं तरूँ तो क्या करूं
इस क़दर कशिश है इसके ग़मों में ए ख़ुदाया मौज-ए-दुनियाँ में बता ना घिरूँ तो क्या करूं सोच में बैठा है आज जुनूं -ए- अश्क़ मेरा अटके पलक पर कैसे ना गिरूँ तो क्या करूं
जब तलक कच्चा रहा सहारे पेड़ के रहे पाक गया पेड़ से ना गिरूँ तो क्या करूं
लाख हसरतें उठी दिल में कोशिशें हज़ार कीं हाथों की लकीरों में नहीं 'सरु' तो क्या करूं
Chhodaa haath hausle ne na darooN to kya karooN Khud par nahiN jab ikhtiyaar karooN to kya karooN
Mila nahiN abhi hawaa ko rahi justju jiski Ithala ke poochti hai naa firooN to kya karooN
Dooba hai sara shahar jab samandar-e-soz meiN SochuN hooN tanha tanha meiN tarooN to kya karooN
Iss kadar kashish hai iske ghamoN mein e khudaya Mauz-e-duniaN meiN bata na ghirooN to kya karooN
Soch meiN baitha hai aaj junooN-e-shaq mera AtkooN palak par kaise na girooN to kya karooN
Jab talak kachha rahaa sahaare peid ke rahe Pa gaya peid se na girooN to kya karooN
Lakh hasratein uthi dil mein koshisheN hazaar ki haathoN ki lakeeroN mein nahiN ‘saru’to kya karooN
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sksaini4
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«Reply #1 on: March 03, 2014, 06:30:10 PM » |
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beautiful dheron daad
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«Reply #2 on: March 03, 2014, 06:36:38 PM » |
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wah wah dhero daad
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«Reply #3 on: March 03, 2014, 07:16:22 PM » |
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«Reply #4 on: March 03, 2014, 08:43:50 PM » |
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वाह....वाह....बहुत ही खूब....ढेरों दाद और तहे दिल से मुबारकबाद.....
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«Reply #6 on: March 03, 2014, 09:59:05 PM » |
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बहुत खूब
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #7 on: March 03, 2014, 11:38:30 PM » |
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #8 on: March 03, 2014, 11:40:13 PM » |
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bahut 2 shukriya saini ji beautiful dheron daad
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #9 on: March 04, 2014, 12:03:36 AM » |
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thanks a lot amit ji वाह....वाह....बहुत ही खूब....ढेरों दाद और तहे दिल से मुबारकबाद.....
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #10 on: March 04, 2014, 12:09:28 AM » |
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #11 on: March 04, 2014, 12:10:06 AM » |
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thanks a lot nandbahu ji wah wah dhero daad
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #12 on: March 04, 2014, 12:20:35 AM » |
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thanks a lot sir beautiful dheron daad
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«Reply #13 on: March 04, 2014, 04:02:07 AM » |
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Suresh Jee Aadaab... !
Waah Waah Waah jee Waah kia kahne behad khoob aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai jee...
Aap jis tarhaa se tarha se naye naye radiff O kafiyoN ko baqubi anjaam deti hai dekhkar yaqeen nahi hota ke in radiff O kafiyoN par aik mukammal kalaam ho sakti hai... realy just mindblowing and hats of you...
Likhte rahiye.. bazm meiN aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...
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RAJAN KONDAL
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«Reply #14 on: March 04, 2014, 04:12:11 AM » |
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waah waah bahot khub
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