child turns criminal

by unicorn_girl on July 19, 2005, 08:22:25 AM
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His mother was dead
he did not know
what future he had ahead
his father came drunken
and beat him up every night
and the room was always
filled with cries
not a single day passed
without fear and fright
The child knew
that his mother was killed
by his own father’s deed
his mother always
had to keep her mouth stapled
as She was threatened
or else your son would be killed
she was beaten to death
and she breathed her last breath
but he never was unashamed of
his beastly action
he loved his alcohol
and hated his family
one day the child thought
he had enough
he had to put a stop
and free his life
and that day when
Father returned home
before he took the stick
to beat him up
the child
was ready with a knife
stabbed him repeatedly
and took his life
he had to pay for his freedom
Be imprisoned ,
or be a criminal
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«Reply #1 on: July 19, 2005, 08:35:56 AM »
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WHATS THE STORY ALL ABOUT ANYWAYS . . . . ?

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«Reply #2 on: July 19, 2005, 08:46:38 AM »
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WHATS THE STORY ALL ABOUT ANYWAYS . . . . ?

hahaha..............good question well this is one of the worst poem i ever wrote........lol but still thought of sharing it with you all.........ok the story is the father comes drunken beats up the child every day.......the child comes to know its his own father who has killed his mother........after being drunken.......she has to keep quiet as she was threatened not to open her mouth or else her son would be killed........one day the child thought he cannot bear more of this injustice and that day when his father  returned he stabbed him to death.........he turned a criminal then , just for his freedom
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«Reply #3 on: July 21, 2005, 09:39:54 AM »
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 O I C . . . . . .



ANYWAYS KEEP WRITING POEMS . . . . .


MAY BE BETTER THAN THIS ONE . . . . .  yom



:best wishes:



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«Reply #4 on: July 21, 2005, 10:38:43 AM »
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 O I C . . . . . .



ANYWAYS KEEP WRITING POEMS . . . . .


MAY BE BETTER THAN THIS ONE . . . . .  yom



:best wishes:



................................................y up!! thanks again
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