chiraag....sheba

by Sheba on February 24, 2011, 06:56:14 AM
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                        lutaaye jo jaan mujh pe  raqeeb ho gaye...,
                        sataaye jo saari zindagi habib ho gaye...,


                        hanste hain zakham bhi kushion pe sabke,
                        dard  mere dahleez ke  naseeb ho gaye,


                        phailaya daaman apna sab ki khushi ke liye,
                        rahe khushaal sabb hum  ghareeb ho gaye,

                        
                        shiqwa kuch bhi nahin tujh se mere khuda,
                        yahi kaafi hai hum tere  qareeb ho gaye,


                        na rahi ragbat roshni se ab sheba....!
                        darmeyaan chiraagon ke hum  ajeeb ho gaye..!!


raqeeb= dushman

habib= dost

ragbat=attachement, lagaao
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«Reply #1 on: February 24, 2011, 07:21:40 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on February 24, 2011, 06:56:14 AM


                        muskuraye jo mere ghum mein aaj raqeeb ho gaye...,
                        sataaye jo saari zindagi aaj qareeb ho gaye...,


                        hanste hain zakham bhi kushion pe aaj,
                        dard hi mere dahleez ke naseeb ho gaye,


                        phailaya daaman apna sab ki khushi ke liye,
                        rahe khushaal sabb hum hi ghareeb ho gaye,

                       
                        shiqwa kuch bhi nahin tujh se mere khuda,
                        yahi kaafi hai hum tere habib ho gaye,


                        na rahi raqbat roshni se ab sheba....!
                        darmeyaan chiraagon ke hum ajeeb ho gaye..!!


raqeeb= dost

habib= pyara

raqbat=attachement, lagaao

Pehle aap "Raqeeb" ka meaning pata kare phir baat karte hai aapke kalam par..........aur sath hi sath habib ka bhi meaning pata kare.

Aur yeh bhi pata kare sahi lafz raqbat hai ya ragbat........

Main sab aapko isiliye karne ke liye keh raha hu qke aapko thodi si aadat ho research karne ki........thoda sa intrest paida ho aapke andar urdu shayri ko seekhne aur samajhne ka.
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«Reply #2 on: February 24, 2011, 08:20:40 AM »
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wah Sheba ji--
aapka peshkash achha laga.
mujhe Urdu shabd ki jaankari nahi lekin aapka nagma parhkar achha laga.
word by word nhi samjha lekin nagme ke bhaw ko samjh gaya.
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thanx
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«Reply #3 on: February 24, 2011, 08:43:27 AM »
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Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on February 24, 2011, 07:21:40 AM
Pehle aap "Raqeeb" ka meaning pata kare phir baat karte hai aapke kalam par..........aur sath hi sath habib ka bhi meaning pata kare.

Aur yeh bhi pata kare sahi lafz raqbat hai ya ragbat........

Main sab aapko isiliye karne ke liye keh raha hu qke aapko thodi si aadat ho research karne ki........thoda sa intrest paida ho aapke andar urdu shayri ko seekhne aur samajhne ka.



bahut bahut shukria sajid ghayal sahab guide karne ka
main iss baat ke liye aapki mashkoor hoon. aur aainda bhi meri khamion ko bataate chalein.waise mujhe bahr ki bhi samajh nahin hai.
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«Reply #4 on: February 24, 2011, 08:57:46 AM »
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Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on February 24, 2011, 07:21:40 AM
Pehle aap "Raqeeb" ka meaning pata kare phir baat karte hai aapke kalam par..........aur sath hi sath habib ka bhi meaning pata kare.

Aur yeh bhi pata kare sahi lafz raqbat hai ya ragbat........

Main sab aapko isiliye karne ke liye keh raha hu qke aapko thodi si aadat ho research karne ki........thoda sa intrest paida ho aapke andar urdu shayri ko seekhne aur samajhne ka.



once again many many thanks to guide me to correct the poems. now i think its delivers a slight sense.
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«Reply #5 on: February 24, 2011, 12:41:18 PM »
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Bahut Khub Sheba Ji
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«Reply #6 on: February 24, 2011, 12:56:54 PM »
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accha likha he sheba ji......

ese hi likhtey rahiye......
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«Reply #7 on: February 24, 2011, 03:26:03 PM »
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good one sheeba ji...
sply 2nd one...
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«Reply #8 on: March 03, 2011, 09:00:01 PM »
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on February 24, 2011, 12:41:18 PM
Bahut Khub Sheba Ji

THANK YOU RISHI JI
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«Reply #9 on: March 03, 2011, 09:29:55 PM »
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Sheba Sahibaa Aadaab!

Waah mohtarma aap yo gazab ki fankaar hai... Usual Smile
Kafi dilkash aur dilfareb kalaam se nawaaza hai aapne Usual Smile

Dili daad O mubarakbaad kabul kijiye Usual Smile         



Quote from: Sheba on February 24, 2011, 06:56:14 AM
                        lutaaye jo jaan mujh pe  raqeeb ho gaye...,
                        sataaye jo saari zindagi habib ho gaye...,

Kia kahne Masha Allah gazab ka matla kaha hai aapne daad daad daad Usual Smile         


                        hanste hain zakham bhi kushion pe sabke,
                        dard  mere dahleez ke  naseeb ho gaye,


Waah jee waah dilfareb sher kaha hai bahut umdaa Usual Smile         

                        phailaya daaman apna sab ki khushi ke liye,
                        rahe khushaal sabb hum  ghareeb ho gaye,

                      khayaal khoob raha jee... Par ghareebi se auroN ki khushhaali jachti nazar nahi aayi.. ?         
 
                        shiqwa kuch bhi nahin tujh se mere khuda,
                        yahi kaafi hai hum tere  qareeb ho gaye,

Oye hoye kia khoob kaha jee daad daad daad Usual Smile         

                        na rahe raqabat roshni se ab sheba....!
                        darmeyaan chiraagon ke hum  ajeeb ho gaye..!!

Bahut khoob achcha Maqta raha daad Usual Smile         


raqeeb= dushman

habib= dost

ragbat=attachement, lagaao

Behad khoob Sheba jee ..... kafi achche ashaar rahe... aur aapki khoob zahiniyat ka bhi muzahera yahaaN ho gaya hume.... Usual Smile

Aise hi umdaa se umdaa likhane ki koshish jari rakhiye..
Aati rahiye...

Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #10 on: March 05, 2011, 07:20:18 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on March 03, 2011, 09:29:55 PM
Sheba Sahibaa Aadaab!

Waah mohtarma aap yo gazab ki fankaar hai... Usual Smile
Kafi dilkash aur dilfareb kalaam se nawaaza hai aapne Usual Smile

Dili daad O mubarakbaad kabul kijiye Usual Smile         



Behad khoob Sheba jee ..... kafi achche ashaar rahe... aur aapki khoob zahiniyat ka bhi muzahera yahaaN ho gaya hume.... Usual Smile

Aise hi umdaa se umdaa likhane ki koshish jari rakhiye..
Aati rahiye...

Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         


thank you parwaaz sahab
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«Reply #11 on: March 05, 2011, 07:38:17 AM »
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sach kahu shebaji... aapki pahli do line par to ham kurban ho gaye... baki sab bhi bahu khub hai...
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«Reply #12 on: April 30, 2011, 10:52:33 AM »
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Quote from: manjum on March 05, 2011, 07:38:17 AM
sach kahu shebaji... aapki pahli do line par to ham kurban ho gaye... baki sab bhi bahu khub hai...

thank u manjum
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«Reply #13 on: May 04, 2011, 07:52:45 AM »
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on February 24, 2011, 12:41:18 PM
Bahut Khub Sheba Ji

thank u rishi ji
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«Reply #14 on: May 04, 2011, 08:01:16 AM »
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Bahut bahut AUr Bhaut Khoob Shebaji..

"Phailaya Daaman Apna Sab Ki Khushi Ke Liye
 Rahe Khushaal Sab Hum gareeb Ho gaye"

 "Shikwa Kuch Bhi nahi Tuhjse Mere Khuda
 Yehi kaafi hai hum Tere Kareeb Ho gaye"

Waah waah Waah!!!!

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