CHOONE SE BIKHAR JAUNGA....

by pandit on May 13, 2009, 12:48:34 AM
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FRIENDS...!..AGAIN THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVOURITE.....!!!!!!!! (INSPIRED BY GHULAM ALI)..


ITNA TOOTA HOON KI CHOONE SE BIKHAR JAUNGA,
AB AGAR AUR MUJHE TADPAAOGE TO MAR JAUNGAA.

DEKH LE MERA HASHAR EK BAAR MERI KASHTI ME AAJA,
TERI KASAM HAI MUJHE, TU JAHA KAHEGI MAIN UTAR JAUNGA.

NA KAR FIKRA TU MERE BARBAADI KA,MUJE AAWAZ TO DE,
KHUD APNI KABRA SE BHI NIKAL K AA JAUNGAA.

MIT GAYA HOON TERE MOHABBAT ME,TUJHE ILM HO GAR,
EK JANAM TO KYA, SAOO BAAR BHI MAR JAUNGAA.




....PANDIT.......
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«Reply #1 on: May 13, 2009, 01:02:24 AM »
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Pandit ji ko jai shree ram ! Bas kya yaar aakhein num kar di na.........very nice jee.
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«Reply #2 on: May 13, 2009, 01:07:56 AM »
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Quote from: Sager4u on May 13, 2009, 01:02:24 AM
Pandit ji ko jai shree ram ! Bas kya yaar aakhein num kar di na.........very nice jee.

THANKS SAGER JEE...

AAP K LIYEA KHAAAS.....

AANKHO KA KOI KASOOR NAHI, WO TO HUMESHA HE NAM REHTI HAIN,
CHOOT DIL PE LAGATE HAIN LOG, DARD AANKEIN SEHTI REHTI HAIN.

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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #3 on: May 13, 2009, 01:20:16 AM »
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Waah Pandit Ji, kya likha hai, kya dedication hai
Very Good.  Matla to wakai bada khubsurat hai. 
Isi per apni ek ghazal yaad aa gai:

JAHAN KI HAR KHUSHI KO CHHOD SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO
HAR EK TOOFAN KA MUH MOD SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO

YAHAN TO PYAR KI BHI HAD MUKARRAR KI ZAMANE NE
ZAMANE KI HADON KO TOD SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO

ZAMIN SE AASMA TAK KA SAFAR MUMKIN NAHIN PHIR BHI
SITARE TODNE KI SOCH SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO

UMAR AB TAK GUZARI BAS BAHARON KI GULAMI MAIN
BACHI JO SHESH TUMKO SAUP SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO

SUNA HAI ZINDAGI KE SAAZ KI DUSHWAR SANGAT HAI
KOI NAGMA SURILA CHHED SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO

KABHI BHOOLE SE HUMKO BHOOLNE KI YAAD AA JAYE
TUMHARI BHOOL PER MAIN JHOOL SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO

SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #4 on: May 13, 2009, 01:23:33 AM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on May 13, 2009, 01:20:16 AM
Waah Pandit Ji, kya likha hai, kya dedication hai
Very Good.  Matla to wakai bada khubsurat hai. 
Isi per apni ek ghazal yaad aa gai:

JAHAN KI HAR KHUSHI KO CHHOD SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO
HAR EK TOOFAN KA MUH MOD SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO

YAHAN TO PYAR KI BHI HAD MUKARRAR KI ZAMANE NE
ZAMANE KI HADON KO TOD SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO

ZAMIN SE AASMA TAK KA SAFAR MUMKIN NAHIN PHIR BHI
SITARE TODNE KI SOCH SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO

UMAR AB TAK GUZARI BAS BAHARON KI GULAMI MAIN
BACHI JO SHESH TUMKO SAUP SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO

SUNA HAI ZINDAGI KE SAAZ KI DUSHWAR SANGAT HAI
KOI NAGMA SURILA CHHED SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO

KABHI BHOOLE SE HUMKO BHOOLNE KI YAAD AA JAYE
TUMHARI BHOOL PER MAIN JHOOL SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO

SARVESH RASTOGI

THANKS SARVESH JEE....

AAPNE BHI BAHUT ACCHA LIHA HAI..
ISSKA JAWAAB DENE KI KOSHISH KARTA HOON...
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«Reply #5 on: May 13, 2009, 01:28:55 AM »
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SARVESH JEE..


SUNA HAI GEHRE PAANI ME LOG DOOB JAATE HAIN,
SHAUK SE TERI AANKHO ME DOOB SAKTA HOO JO TUM CHAHO.

LOG KEHTE HAIN AASHIQ HOTA HAI DEEWANA HAR HUSN KA,
HAR HUSN KO THUKRAA SAKTA HOON JO TUM CHAHO.

GAR YE ZINDAGI KHUDA KI AMANAT HAI TO SUN,
MAUT KO BHI GALE LAGA SAKTA HOON GAR TUM CHAHO.



...PANDIT.........
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #6 on: May 13, 2009, 01:36:13 AM »
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Bhai kya fatafat reply aaya hai Pandit Ji
Kya koi machine laga rakhi hai sher kahne ki
Very nice
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #7 on: May 13, 2009, 01:48:23 AM »
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Thanks pandit ji ! Pandit ji ! Main apni shop se abhi aaya hoon, thoda refresh hona chahta hoon. I will be back within 1/2 & hour. Thanks  & sarvesh sahab ji aapka bhi jawab nahin...... Very nice.
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«Reply #8 on: May 13, 2009, 02:23:48 AM »
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Quote from: Sager4u on May 13, 2009, 01:48:23 AM
Thanks pandit ji ! Pandit ji ! Main apni shop se abhi aaya hoon, thoda refresh hona chahta hoon. I will be back within 1/2 & hour. Thanks  & sarvesh sahab ji aapka bhi jawab nahin...... Very nice.

SAGER JEE...
MAIN AAPKA KAYAL HO GAYA HOON YAAR...
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Roja
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«Reply #9 on: May 13, 2009, 02:29:07 AM »
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Quote from: pandit on May 13, 2009, 12:48:34 AM
FRIENDS...!..AGAIN THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVOURITE.....!!!!!!!! (INSPIRED BY GHULAM ALI)..


ITNA TOOTA HOON KI CHOONE SE BIKHAR JAUNGA,
AB AGAR AUR MUJHE TADPAAOGE TO MAR JAUNGAA.

DEKH LE MERA HASHAR EK BAAR MERI KASHTI ME AAJA,
TERI KASAM HAI MUJHE, TU JAHA KAHEGI MAIN UTAR JAUNGA.

NA KAR FIKRA TU MERE BARBAADI KA,MUJE AAWAZ TO DE,
KHUD APNI KABRA SE BHI NIKAL K AA JAUNGAA.

MIT GAYA HOON TERE MOHABBAT ME,TUJHE ILM HO GAR,
EK JANAM TO KYA, SAOO BAAR BHI MAR JAUNGAA.


....PANDIT.......


Wah kya khoob likha aapne. This has become my fav Pandit ji... Very good Thumbs UP
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«Reply #10 on: May 13, 2009, 02:30:28 AM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on May 13, 2009, 01:20:16 AM
Waah Pandit Ji, kya likha hai, kya dedication hai
Very Good.  Matla to wakai bada khubsurat hai. 
Isi per apni ek ghazal yaad aa gai:

JAHAN KI HAR KHUSHI KO CHHOD SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO
HAR EK TOOFAN KA MUH MOD SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO

YAHAN TO PYAR KI BHI HAD MUKARRAR KI ZAMANE NE
ZAMANE KI HADON KO TOD SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO

ZAMIN SE AASMA TAK KA SAFAR MUMKIN NAHIN PHIR BHI
SITARE TODNE KI SOCH SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO

UMAR AB TAK GUZARI BAS BAHARON KI GULAMI MAIN
BACHI JO SHESH TUMKO SAUP SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO

SUNA HAI ZINDAGI KE SAAZ KI DUSHWAR SANGAT HAI
KOI NAGMA SURILA CHHED SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO

KABHI BHOOLE SE HUMKO BHOOLNE KI YAAD AA JAYE
TUMHARI BHOOL PER MAIN JHOOL SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO

SARVESH RASTOGI

Wah wah bahut acche.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #11 on: May 13, 2009, 02:31:26 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 13, 2009, 02:29:07 AM
Wah kya khoob likha aapne. This has become my fav Pandit ji... Very good Thumbs UP

ROJA JEE..
AAPNE HUME APNE KADRA SE NAWAZA, BADI MEHARBAANI JEEE...


THNAKS YAAR.. icon_salut
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«Reply #12 on: May 13, 2009, 02:33:40 AM »
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bahut khoob pandit ji.. kea bat hai

sarvesh ji bahut khoob... bahut acha reply kea hai apne keep up the wonderful work..
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«Reply #13 on: May 13, 2009, 02:35:00 AM »
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Quote from: Sonu on May 13, 2009, 02:33:40 AM
bahut khoob pandit ji.. kea bat hai

sarvesh ji bahut khoob... bahut acha reply kea hai apne keep up the wonderful work..

THANKS SONU....
AAP UNN HE HAUSALAFZAI KARTE JAYEA....
PHIR DEKHIYEA....JALWAA..
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«Reply #14 on: May 13, 2009, 02:40:32 AM »
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Jab hum akele hote hain ..
Sab kitne begaine sae ho jate hain
Jo apne nahin thae woh bhi
Asaani sae ansu de jaate hain !
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