CHOONE SE BIKHAR JAUNGA....

by pandit on May 13, 2009, 12:48:34 AM
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«Reply #30 on: May 13, 2009, 06:54:53 AM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on May 13, 2009, 05:48:21 AM
bohut khoob pandit ji kya khoob likha hai aapne  Applause
aapne bhi khoob saath nibhaya hai sarvesh ji Applause

THANKS AGAIN BHAWANA JEE....

 
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«Reply #31 on: May 13, 2009, 06:55:36 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on May 13, 2009, 06:47:56 AM
Subhan_allah kya mehfil sajayee hain sabne. Bohat bohat khoob Pandit and equally beautiful addition by Sarvesh....sabhi ne achcha likha hain Maza aa gaya.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

DHANYAWAAD SAJID BHAI..
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«Reply #32 on: May 13, 2009, 07:08:29 AM »
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ITNA TOOTA HOON KI CHOONE SE BIKHAR JAUNGA,
AB AGAR AUR TADPAAOGE TO MAR JAUNGAA.

SUNA HAI TERI GALI ME AAJ-KAL CHAYA HAI ANDHERA,
TU KAR EK ISHARA, KHUD KO JALA TERI DUNIYA ROSHAN KAR JAUNGA.

NA SOCH KI TERI BEWAFAI SE HOON MAIN AAJ BHI KHAFA,
TUJHE ILM HO SHAYAD, KHAFA HUA TUJHSE TO KIDHER JAUNGA.

AYE KHUDA NA DE MUJHE AB KOI MEHBOOB "KASAM SE",
GAR MILA BHI KOI TO, PYAAR USE ITNA NA KAR PAAUNGA.




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«Reply #33 on: May 13, 2009, 07:10:16 AM »
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bahut khoob sanju.. keep up the wonderful work Usual Smile...

Quote from: pandit on May 13, 2009, 07:08:29 AM
ITNA TOOTA HOON KI CHOONE SE BIKHAR JAUNGA,
AB AGAR AUR TADPAAOGE TO MAR JAUNGAA.

SUNA HAI TERI GALI ME AAJ-KAL CHAYA HAI ANDHERA,
TU KAR EK ISHARA, KHUD KO JALA TERI DUNIYA ROSHAN KAR JAUNGA.

NA SOCH KI TERI BEWAFAI SE HOON MAIN AAJ BHI KHAFA,
TUJHE ILM HO SHAYAD, KHAFA HUA TUJHSE TO KIDHER JAUNGA.

AYE KHUDA NA DE MUJHE AB KOI MEHBOOB "KASAM SE",
GAR MILA BHI KOI TO, PYAAR USE ITNA NA KAR PAAUNGA.




......PANDIT.......
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«Reply #34 on: May 13, 2009, 07:11:32 AM »
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Quote from: Sonu on May 13, 2009, 07:10:16 AM
bahut khoob sanju.. keep up the wonderful work Usual Smile...


THANKS SONU....
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«Reply #35 on: May 13, 2009, 06:26:29 PM »
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THANKS A LOT SONU..
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«Reply #36 on: May 14, 2009, 01:41:03 AM »
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SHUKRIYA SHUKRIYA
SABHI DOSTON KA SHUKRIYA JINHONE MERE JODE HUE
CHAND ASHAR KO PASAND KIYA AUR RESPOND KIYA.
THANKS TO ALL
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #37 on: May 14, 2009, 01:42:45 AM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on May 14, 2009, 01:41:03 AM
SHUKRIYA SHUKRIYA
SABHI DOSTON KA SHUKRIYA JINHONE MERE JODE HUE
CHAND ASHAR KO PASAND KIYA AUR RESPOND KIYA.
THANKS TO ALL
SARVESH RASTOGI

SARVESH JEE..
BOOND-BOOND SE HE SAGAR BHARTA HAI..
AUR AAP K TUKADO NE GAJALO SAGAR BANA DIYA...
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«Reply #38 on: May 14, 2009, 02:40:40 AM »
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Pandit ji ko jai shree ram ! Pandit ji aap bahut badiya likhte hai. Wel done....
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«Reply #39 on: May 14, 2009, 02:57:41 AM »
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Quote from: Sager4u on May 14, 2009, 02:40:40 AM
Pandit ji ko jai shree ram ! Pandit ji aap bahut badiya likhte hai. Wel done....

Thanks Sager jee..
buss aap unn he hausalafzai karte raho..........
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«Reply #40 on: May 14, 2009, 04:39:01 AM »
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Sanju your mostttttttt welcome bus yeo hi likhte rahow..

Quote from: pandit on May 13, 2009, 07:11:32 AM
THANKS SONU....
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«Reply #41 on: May 14, 2009, 04:41:19 AM »
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Sarvesh ji pandit ji ne bilkol sahi kha hai... apki jode huye chand akshro ne bahut kmal kea hai or usi se ab yea samender ben gaya hai Usual Smile to yeo hi likhte rahow...

Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on May 14, 2009, 01:41:03 AM
SHUKRIYA SHUKRIYA
SABHI DOSTON KA SHUKRIYA JINHONE MERE JODE HUE
CHAND ASHAR KO PASAND KIYA AUR RESPOND KIYA.
THANKS TO ALL
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #42 on: May 14, 2009, 04:44:00 AM »
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Mohhabat Ka ghum hota bohut Hai,
Ke ab Ye Lafz Bhi Ruswa bohut Hai,
Udasi Ka Sabab Main Kiya Bataon?
Gali Kochon Mein sannata bohut Hai,
Na milne Ki qasam Kha Ke Bhi Main Ne,
Tujhe Har Raah Mein dhunda bohut Hai,
Ye Aankhein Aur Kiya Dekhein Kisi Ko,
Inn Aankhon Ne tujhe Dekha bohut Hai,
Na Jaane Kyun Bacha Rakhe Hein Aanso,
Shayid mujhe Rona bohut hai,
Tujhe maloom To hoga mere humdum,
Tujhe Aik Shakhs Ne Chaha bohut hai.!
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«Reply #43 on: May 14, 2009, 05:08:37 AM »
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Quote from: Sonu on May 14, 2009, 04:44:00 AM
Mohhabat Ka ghum hota bohut Hai,
Ke ab Ye Lafz Bhi Ruswa bohut Hai,
Udasi Ka Sabab Main Kiya Bataon?
Gali Kochon Mein sannata bohut Hai,
Na milne Ki qasam Kha Ke Bhi Main Ne,
Tujhe Har Raah Mein dhunda bohut Hai,
Ye Aankhein Aur Kiya Dekhein Kisi Ko,
Inn Aankhon Ne tujhe Dekha bohut Hai,
Na Jaane Kyun Bacha Rakhe Hein Aanso,
Shayid mujhe Rona bohut hai,
Tujhe maloom To hoga mere humdum,
Tujhe Aik Shakhs Ne Chaha bohut hai.!






wow sonu..
bahut khoob,..........
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«Reply #44 on: May 14, 2009, 05:16:35 AM »
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Ur welcome pandit ji !!
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