Choti si gudiya...Abul Asad

by Abul Asad on May 02, 2012, 07:20:20 AM
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Daughter's, they are honey and the bees don't know it
A daughter is one of the most beautiful gifts this world has to give..
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This is dedicated to my little daughter Noor...
. who i miss badly, haven't seen her for the last 3 years


Choti si gudiya, jaadu ki purdiya
shararat ki phirki- mithai ki tikya

Baaton ki masti, haton ki chutki, naani ki laadli, daadi ki pyaari
Ammi ki bitiya, behna ki didee, baba ki laddu, uske ankhon ki chamki
 
Daikhay jo koi chehra tera,
Mitjae saare chehre ki jhurriyan
 
Hansi teri veeranay dil main mere laadey bahaar,
Sharaat teri ladey budhape main jawani sa qarar.
 
Woh baten teri, meri nanhi si gudiya, Voh masoom si nazren teri, meri dil ki tikya
Voh nanhe se paiband ki chaapein teri, voh chaal men bachpan kay tamashay tere
 
Voh Chudiyon keh toothnay par motay say ansoon, Phir chehray par pareshani ki lehrain teri
Jitni jaldi aateen utni jaldi jaatin, kanhaan se aateen kanhaan ko jaateen
 
Door kanhin maghribi gaon mein akela-pan, siah saye ki tarha jo daray mujhe
Raton ki andheri khamoshi main, Dil ki dhadkan yadon se, ladkhadaye mere
 
Choti si gudiya, baba ki chidiya, Aake phir apna jaadu chala mujh pe
Choti si gudiya, jaadu ki purdiya, shararat ki phirki, mithai ki tikiya
Abul Asad
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«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2012, 07:39:14 AM »
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Nice
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«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2012, 07:55:53 AM »
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beautifulll...ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2012, 08:37:59 AM »
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betee se door hone kaa ehsaas mujhe bhee bahut hotaa hai aapne ek sachhaai bayaan kee hai aapkee is peshkash ko slaam kartaa hoon
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«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2012, 08:39:01 AM »
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 Applause Applause
good omposition . Love  to Noor !!
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«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2012, 08:52:45 AM »
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Asad Sahaab Aadaab!

Behad pyaari kalaam hai janab... Allaah aapki pyaari
bitiyaa ko humesha khush O aabaad rakhe... Usual Smile

Aur aapke dil ke sabar ka aur bhi mitha phal mile aapko... Usual Smile

Is khoob kalaam par humari daad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye.. Usual Smile

Shaad O aabaad rahiye.. Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: May 02, 2012, 09:17:43 AM »
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Daughter's, they are honey and the bees don't know it
A daughter is one of the most beautiful gifts this world has to give..
authors unknown
 
This is dedicated to my little daughter Noor...
. who i miss badly, haven't seen her for the last 3 years


Choti si gudiya, jaadu ki purdiya
shararat ki phirki- mithai ki tikya

Baaton ki masti, haton ki chutki, naani ki laadli, daadi ki pyaari
Ammi ki bitiya, behna ki didee, baba ki laddu, uske ankhon ki chamki
 
Daikhay jo koi chehra tera,
Mitjae saare chehre ki jhurriyan
 
Hansi teri veeranay dil main mere laadey bahaar,
Sharaat teri ladey budhape main jawani sa qarar.
 
Woh baten teri, meri nanhi si gudiya, Voh masoom si nazren teri, meri dil ki tikya
Voh nanhe se paiband ki chaapein teri, voh chaal men bachpan kay tamashay tere
 
Voh Chudiyon keh toothnay par motay say ansoon, Phir chehray par pareshani ki lehrain teri
Jitni jaldi aateen utni jaldi jaatin, kanhaan se aateen kanhaan ko jaateen
 
Door kanhin maghribi gaon mein akela-pan, siah saye ki tarha jo daray mujhe
Raton ki andheri khamoshi main, Dil ki dhadkan yadon se, ladkhadaye mere
 
Choti si gudiya, baba ki chidiya, Aake phir apna jaadu chala mujh pe
Choti si gudiya, jaadu ki purdiya, shararat ki phirki, mithai ki tikiya
Abul Asad

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bohot khub
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«Reply #8 on: May 02, 2012, 01:57:16 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Abul ji.....!!!
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«Reply #9 on: May 02, 2012, 07:30:09 PM »
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Daughter's, they are honey and the bees don't know it
A daughter is one of the most beautiful gifts this world has to give..
authors unknown
 
This is dedicated to my little daughter Noor...
. who i miss badly, haven't seen her for the last 3 years


Choti si gudiya, jaadu ki purdiya
shararat ki phirki- mithai ki tikya

Baaton ki masti, haton ki chutki, naani ki laadli, daadi ki pyaari
Ammi ki bitiya, behna ki didee, baba ki laddu, uske ankhon ki chamki
 
Daikhay jo koi chehra tera,
Mitjae saare chehre ki jhurriyan
 
Hansi teri veeranay dil main mere laadey bahaar,
Sharaat teri ladey budhape main jawani sa qarar.
 
Woh baten teri, meri nanhi si gudiya, Voh masoom si nazren teri, meri dil ki tikya
Voh nanhe se paiband ki chaapein teri, voh chaal men bachpan kay tamashay tere
 
Voh Chudiyon keh toothnay par motay say ansoon, Phir chehray par pareshani ki lehrain teri
Jitni jaldi aateen utni jaldi jaatin, kanhaan se aateen kanhaan ko jaateen
 
Door kanhin maghribi gaon mein akela-pan, siah saye ki tarha jo daray mujhe
Raton ki andheri khamoshi main, Dil ki dhadkan yadon se, ladkhadaye mere
 
Choti si gudiya, baba ki chidiya, Aake phir apna jaadu chala mujh pe
Choti si gudiya, jaadu ki purdiya, shararat ki phirki, mithai ki tikiya
Abul Asad

soooooooooooo cute.........!

 love and doa to your gudiya abul sahab

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«Reply #10 on: May 02, 2012, 07:35:17 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Abul Asad saheb. Bahut achha laga aap ka kalam, magar aapke apni beti se door hone ka gham dekh kar mujhe bhi takleef hui.
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«Reply #11 on: July 15, 2012, 11:40:34 AM »
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Masoom ji,

Shukriya, maazarath ke kuch dari laga diya jawab dene men
safar men tha..
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«Reply #12 on: January 04, 2013, 06:53:55 PM »
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beautifulll...ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause

thank you soo much dolly ji,
I am sorry i am replying a little late
but i have been absent for sometime now
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choti si guddia, lal gulabi chuniya
telo vala sut narsry mai padte
sabko tata karte
Aman Tak
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choti si guddia, lal gulabi chuniya
telo vala sut narsry mai padte
sabko tata karte
Aman Tak


Aman ji,

Shukriya ji, aapke jawab ka tareekha acha laga
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