*~*Chunri Ka Andaz*~*

by Roja on August 04, 2009, 05:23:34 PM
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Chunari piya ke vasl mein lahuluhan ho gayi
Be-daag zindagi meri qurbaan ho gayi

Tapte labon ko naz se chune ki vo ada,
Bahon mein aa simat.the hi jawan ho gayi

Kamsin mang pe meri hasta hai aaina,
Kehne ko apna dard be-juban ho gayi

Rukh se naqab utne ka andaz kya kahu,
Banke mai chand EID ka Ramzan ho gayi

Husn aur Ishq ki karvat pe jaan-e-jaana
Saari khudayi mujhpe meherbaan ho gayi

Isko khata kahu ya naseeba ki dillagi,
Anbyahe "Roja" ko bauron se pehchan ho gayi.



anbyahe = unmarried

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angel4u
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«Reply #1 on: August 05, 2009, 02:57:26 AM »
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Wah bahut khoobsurat likha hai Roja.. Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: August 05, 2009, 04:58:27 PM »
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Waah Waah Roja Dear ... Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai  Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: August 05, 2009, 05:05:04 PM »
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Wow.. Kya baat hai Roja.. Bahut Hi Pyara Likha hai aapne. Lajawab Likha hai.. Beautiful words.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #4 on: August 05, 2009, 11:13:54 PM »
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Wah wah Roja ji,bahut khoob,very beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent
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«Reply #5 on: August 06, 2009, 11:44:25 AM »
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Chunari piya ke vasl mein lahuluhan ho gayi
Be-daag zindagi meri qurbaan ho gayi

Tapte labon ko naz se chune ki vo ada,
Bahon mein aa simat.the hi jawan ho gayi

Kamsin mang pe meri hasta hai aaina,
Kehne ko apna dard be-juban ho gayi

Rukh se naqab utne ka andaz kya kahu,
Banke mai chand EID ka Ramzan ho gayi

Husn aur Ishq ki karvat pe jaan-e-jaana
Saari khudayi mujhpe meherbaan ho gayi

Isko khata kahu ya naseeba ki dillagi,
Anbyahe "Roja" ko bauron se pechan ho gayi.



anbyahe = unmarried


KYA BAAT HAI    ROJA JI..........

AB TAK JO DIL MAIN NA LAGI THI,WOH AAG LAG GAYI,
BE DAAG THI CHUNARI MERI,PIYA KE HAATHON DAAG LAG GAYI.

NAADAN THI, KAMSIN THI, NA SAMAJH THI AB TAK,
PIYA NE JO LIYA APNI BHAHON MEIN MUJHKO,MAIN JAWAAN HOGAYI.

THANDE PADE THEY JO DIL AUR JIGAR AB TAK,
PIYA NE JO CHUME MERE HONTH,HUL-CHAL SI MACH GAYI.

JO AB TAK NA SAMAJH PAYI THI "ROJA",
PIYA SE MILNE KE BAAD,BAURON KO SAMAJH GAYI.

 

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«Reply #6 on: August 21, 2009, 05:18:02 PM »
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Wah bahut khoobsurat likha hai Roja.. Clapping Smiley

Thank you very much dear hasina
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Roja
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«Reply #7 on: August 21, 2009, 05:18:32 PM »
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Waah Waah Roja Dear ... Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai  Usual Smile

Bahut bahut thanks dear divya  Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: August 21, 2009, 05:19:09 PM »
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Wow.. Kya baat hai Roja.. Bahut Hi Pyara Likha hai aapne. Lajawab Likha hai.. Beautiful words.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**

Thanks for reading me bhaiya
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«Reply #9 on: August 21, 2009, 05:21:26 PM »
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Wah wah Roja ji,bahut khoob,very beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent

Thanks dear Madhu

Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahot hi achi ghazal likhi hai aapne
awesome

Bahut bahut shukriya @Kaash ji aapne hame pada aur tarif ki  notworthy
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«Reply #10 on: August 21, 2009, 05:22:32 PM »
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KYA BAAT HAI    ROJA JI..........

AB TAK JO DIL MAIN NA LAGI THI,WOH AAG LAG GAYI,
BE DAAG THI CHUNARI MERI,PIYA KE HAATHON DAAG LAG GAYI.

NAADAN THI, KAMSIN THI, NA SAMAJH THI AB TAK,
PIYA NE JO LIYA APNI BHAHON MEIN MUJHKO,MAIN JAWAAN HOGAYI.

THANDE PADE THEY JO DIL AUR JIGAR AB TAK,
PIYA NE JO CHUME MERE HONTH,HUL-CHAL SI MACH GAYI.

JO AB TAK NA SAMAJH PAYI THI "ROJA",
PIYA SE MILNE KE BAAD,BAURON KO SAMAJH GAYI.


hahaha... Nice ... Applause esp last two lines mujhe bahut accha laga aur hassi aagayi Cara ji... Thanks for this beautiful shayari  Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: October 02, 2009, 10:38:27 AM »
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Simply Beautiful Applause Applause
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #12 on: October 02, 2009, 10:40:18 AM »
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Nice excellent Applause Applause Applause
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Roja
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«Reply #13 on: November 01, 2009, 02:57:00 AM »
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Thank you friends
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