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Nikhaar
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Pal do pal ka ye kissa hai,
Lagta kyu zindagi ka hissa hai
Tujhse dur jana hai,
Rukna ka na koi bahana hai
Kya kare kya nahi tu bta de
Chup rehkar humko na tu saza de
Dekhe jo tujhko ,nazre tu churaaye
Puche jo khuch , tu dheere se muskuraaye
Kya hai dil mein tere tu hi bta de
Chup rehkar humko na tu saza de
Badhte kadmon ko roka hai
Taqdeer ne mujhko toka hai
Maangi dua jab tujhko paane ki
Raah dekhi saath tera nibhaane ki
Ishaara tha waqt ka ya tha wo ek sapna
Apna na hoke bhi Kyu lage tu apna
Waqt ka ishaara kya, tu hi samjha de
Chup rehkar humko na yu tu saza de
Aaj iss pal mein jo tujhko dekha hai
Lagta jaise haatho mein tere naam ki rekha hai
Par tere dil ki baaton ko bina jaane
Iss pal ko hum sach kaise maane
Dil ki baaton ko tu samjha de
Chup rehkar humko na yu saza de
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«Reply #1 on: November 26, 2010, 05:51:22 PM » |
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bhot khub Nikhaar ji ..
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«Reply #2 on: November 27, 2010, 06:17:54 AM » |
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Hayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy……… Nikhar Ji ………Gudgudi Ho Gayi Read Karke……..Actually Ek Baat Batau Apko Ki Aajkal Kafi Logo Ka Yahi Haal He …….Apne Kaha Na “Puche Jo Kuch Tu Dhire Se Muskaraye” Clear Nahi Hota Kuch Bhi Teenage Love Wali Theme Lagi Muji Isme……….Sach Bht Sweet And Cute Post He Aapne Jo Last Post Ki Thi Na Us Se Ekdum Fully Opposite He Mast Mast Wali Gudgudi Karne Wali…….”Pahle Pyar Ka Pahla Gum Pahli Baar He Ankhe Num Aa Bhi Ja Ab Warna Ro Denge Hum”…….Wo Wali Position He Is Post Me …..Superb Ji Superb……..Keep It Up………
Few Lines For Ur Post From Gajal Of Jagjit Singh Ji……
“Saja De Sila De Bana De Mita De
Magar Wo Koi Fialsa To Suna De
Agar Hum Kahe Aur Wo Muskra De
Kadmo Me Unke Zamana Luta De”
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«Reply #3 on: November 27, 2010, 06:32:33 AM » |
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ahaaa wah ji kya narm narm si baat kahi hai...
siharan si hoti ha padhke..man me..
kuchh pesh hai apne andaz me:
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yun tera palke jhuka kar hole se mujhe dekhte jana
kaatil koi jaise bade pyaaar se dil cheerta ho~
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«Reply #4 on: November 27, 2010, 08:30:06 AM » |
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bahaut hi khoobsurat nazm kahi nikhaar ji. lagata tha har lavz ashq o lahoo ki syaahi se likha hua hai.
ghalib ka ek sher yaad aayaa ...
dard-e-dil likhooN kab tak jaaooN unko dikhalaa dooN
uNgliyaaN figaar apnee khaamaa khooN chakaaN apna
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«Reply #5 on: November 27, 2010, 03:14:57 PM » |
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bhot khub Nikhaar ji ..
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thanx kb ji |
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«Reply #6 on: November 27, 2010, 03:19:35 PM » |
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Di, kya baat hai.. bahaut bahaut sunder.. Woh geet hai na 'mora piya moun se bolat nahin..' khamoshi wakei dard bhari hoti hai..  |
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«Reply #7 on: November 27, 2010, 03:20:29 PM » |
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Matrix Guy.. Kya lines share ki hai apne.. Wah..!  Abhi bhai, Shaer classic hai.. |
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«Reply #8 on: November 27, 2010, 03:37:39 PM » |
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Hayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy……… Nikhar Ji ………Gudgudi Ho Gayi Read Karke……..Actually Ek Baat Batau Apko Ki Aajkal Kafi Logo Ka Yahi Haal He …….Apne Kaha Na “Puche Jo Kuch Tu Dhire Se Muskaraye” Clear Nahi Hota Kuch Bhi Teenage Love Wali Theme Lagi Muji Isme……….Sach Bht Sweet And Cute Post He Aapne Jo Last Post Ki Thi Na Us Se Ekdum Fully Opposite He Mast Mast Wali Gudgudi Karne Wali…….”Pahle Pyar Ka Pahla Gum Pahli Baar He Ankhe Num Aa Bhi Ja Ab Warna Ro Denge Hum”…….Wo Wali Position He Is Post Me …..Superb Ji Superb……..Keep It Up………
Few Lines For Ur Post From Gajal Of Jagjit Singh Ji……
“Saja De Sila De Bana De Mita De
Magar Wo Koi Fialsa To Suna De
Agar Hum Kahe Aur Wo Muskra De
Kadmo Me Unke Zamana Luta De”
itna lamba hayyyyyy......bahut bahut shukrana ji.....bt ye teenage waali feelings kha aapne.....khuch samajh nahi aaya.....k aap kya kehna chahte hai..... aur aapne Jagjit Singh JI ki gazal ki lines iss post k liye likhi....iss se behtrin kya hoga....dil se shukriya |
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«Reply #9 on: November 27, 2010, 03:55:31 PM » |
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ahaaa wah ji kya narm narm si baat kahi hai...
siharan si hoti ha padhke..man me..
kuchh pesh hai apne andaz me:
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yun tera palke jhuka kar hole se mujhe dekhte jana
kaatil koi jaise bade pyaaar se dil cheerta ho~
bahut bahut shukriya abhi ji....aapke andaaz sach mein lajwaab hai...dil ka kaatil...wo bhi nazaren....bahut khoob.  |
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«Reply #10 on: November 27, 2010, 06:31:08 PM » |
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Nikhaar ji outstanding mujhe apki ye rachna bahut bahut pasand aayi..
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«Reply #11 on: November 28, 2010, 01:31:53 PM » |
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bahaut hi khoobsurat nazm kahi nikhaar ji. lagata tha har lavz ashq o lahoo ki syaahi se likha hua hai.
ghalib ka ek sher yaad aayaa ...
dard-e-dil likhooN kab tak jaaooN unko dikhalaa dooN
uNgliyaaN figaar apnee khaamaa khooN chakaaN apna
bahut bahut shukriya Zarra ji...aapne yha apna waqt diya..... mmafi chahugi lekin aapne jo sher likha uski dusri line mai samajh nahi paa rahi hu.... |
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«Reply #13 on: December 07, 2010, 05:40:09 AM » |
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good work Nikhar
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«Reply #14 on: December 08, 2010, 08:05:23 AM » |
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Bahut umda peshkash hai aap ki Nukhaar Ji
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on eTI community..
