Chupp mein rahoon to log kahein mose be-waqoof - Beete palon ke saye-1998

by Ram Saraswat on July 18, 2013, 03:19:51 AM
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 1518 times)
Ram Saraswat
Khususi Shayar
*****

Rau: 26
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
10 days, 7 hours and 12 minutes.

Posts: 999
Member Since: Apr 2008


View Profile
Reply with quote
Dosto yeh kavita Brij Bhashaa (Hindvi) mein hai, ummeed hai pashand aayegi.  


Chupp  mein  rahoon  to  log, kahein mose*  baabro** hai,         *To me, **insane

               baat mein karoon  to  kahein,  bado baachaal* hai. *Talkative

saji kein chaloon to kahein, shaan mein dikhai rahyo,

               sada  vesh  dekhein,  to  kahein  ji kangaal  hai.

Tej  neik   boloon   kahein,   sher   gurrai   rahyo,
               
               hasi  boloon  kahein  ji zaroor  koi  chaal   hai.

galati  koon  maaf  kari ,  miljuli rahoon   kahein,  
               
              Ghauduaa* nei odhi leeni naher** ki khaal   hai.   *Jackal, **Lion  
             
neik*  jhoot  boloon kahein,reeti** khaandaan ki hai.            *Little, **Tradition

              sanchii kahoon kahein, ji bajai*rahyo*gaal* hai.  *Boasting

kachhu daal mein hai kala shuroo se sunat aaye,

              'Ram' jag laage  jaisein, kali saari  daal  hai.


 

Logged
Iftakhar Ahmad
Guest
«Reply #1 on: July 18, 2013, 04:32:02 AM »
Reply with quote
waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Sir excellent, bahut maza aaya brij bhasha meiN kuch padh kar aur kaafi achha likha hai aapne.
Logged
Sapna Pandit
Guest
«Reply #2 on: July 18, 2013, 04:45:18 AM »
Reply with quote
good one
Logged
Sudhir Ashq
Khususi Shayar
*****

Rau: 108
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
16 days, 19 hours and 27 minutes.

Posts: 1813
Member Since: Feb 2013


View Profile WWW
«Reply #3 on: July 18, 2013, 11:14:07 AM »
Reply with quote
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
sksaini4
Ustaad ae Shayari
*****

Rau: 853
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
112 days, 8 hours and 51 minutes.
Posts: 36414
Member Since: Apr 2011


View Profile
«Reply #4 on: July 18, 2013, 12:30:08 PM »
Reply with quote
bahut pyaaree kawitaa aaj lagaa ki chaawal puranaa hee mazaa detaa hai dheron daad
Logged
aqsh
Guest
«Reply #5 on: July 18, 2013, 01:28:21 PM »
Reply with quote
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah. bahut khoob...
Logged
premdeep
Guest
«Reply #6 on: July 18, 2013, 01:50:41 PM »
Reply with quote
 icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Logged
F.H.SIDDIQUI
Guest
«Reply #7 on: July 18, 2013, 02:15:28 PM »
Reply with quote
bahut khubsurat . braj bhasha ka bhi apna
suroor hai,padh kar bahut maza aaya.
Logged
KavitaKavita
Guest
«Reply #8 on: July 18, 2013, 05:52:49 PM »
Reply with quote
khoob likha aapne
Logged
Ram Saraswat
Khususi Shayar
*****

Rau: 26
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
10 days, 7 hours and 12 minutes.

Posts: 999
Member Since: Apr 2008


View Profile
«Reply #9 on: July 18, 2013, 07:17:45 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on July 18, 2013, 04:32:02 AM
waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Sir excellent, bahut maza aaya brij bhasha meiN kuch padh kar aur kaafi achha likha hai aapne.
Bahut bahut shukriya Iftikhar ji
Logged
Ram Saraswat
Khususi Shayar
*****

Rau: 26
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
10 days, 7 hours and 12 minutes.

Posts: 999
Member Since: Apr 2008


View Profile
«Reply #10 on: July 18, 2013, 07:21:43 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: Sapna Pandit on July 18, 2013, 04:45:18 AM
good one
Bahut bahut shukriya
Logged
Ram Saraswat
Khususi Shayar
*****

Rau: 26
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
10 days, 7 hours and 12 minutes.

Posts: 999
Member Since: Apr 2008


View Profile
«Reply #11 on: July 18, 2013, 07:29:10 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on July 18, 2013, 11:14:07 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut bahut shukriya Sudhirji
Logged
Ram Saraswat
Khususi Shayar
*****

Rau: 26
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
10 days, 7 hours and 12 minutes.

Posts: 999
Member Since: Apr 2008


View Profile
«Reply #12 on: July 18, 2013, 07:31:11 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: sksaini4 on July 18, 2013, 12:30:08 PM
bahut pyaaree kawitaa aaj lagaa ki chaawal puranaa hee mazaa detaa hai dheron daad
Bahut Bahut Dhanyabaad Dr. Saini
Logged
nandbahu
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 122
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
20 days, 4 hours and 11 minutes.
Posts: 14553
Member Since: Sep 2011


View Profile
«Reply #13 on: July 18, 2013, 07:32:57 PM »
Reply with quote
very nice
Logged
Ram Saraswat
Khususi Shayar
*****

Rau: 26
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
10 days, 7 hours and 12 minutes.

Posts: 999
Member Since: Apr 2008


View Profile
«Reply #14 on: July 18, 2013, 07:33:52 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: aqsh on July 18, 2013, 01:28:21 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah. bahut khoob...
Bahut bahut shukriya Aqsh ji
Logged
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Miscellaneous Shayri > Topic: Chupp mein rahoon to log kahein mose be-waqoof - Beete palon ke saye-1998
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 08, 2024, 07:40:43 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
woh muj se mere khamoshi ...
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]
HUME KAHAN ,,,,, SAAHILL
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:08 AM]
savaaloN ke hal kya javaa...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]
Kal halki halki barish th...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]
कवि और कविता
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]
parhezz ,,,, saahill
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]
mere lafzh kabhi,,,, saah...
by saahill
[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]
Geraft - (Sequel to "Beda...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Hifazat - a thriller love...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:55:06 AM]
INTEQAM - A sequel to "Hi...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 06:58:58 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.114 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8505 Real Poets and poetry admirer