Complete The Shair... :)

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«Reply #75 on: June 30, 2008, 07:53:12 AM »
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 Applause Applause nice one mahiya...

Kuch lamhe, jinki jarurat thi bahut"
kuch dua.en, jinki jarurat thi bahut,
gum-e-dariya me bhi duboya usi ne,
wo haath, jinki jarurat thi bahut,

start with:- ab ashq bhi bahayen to hasi aati hai
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«Reply #76 on: June 30, 2008, 08:45:06 AM »
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Thanks Sanjeev ji..
Aur.. Bahut achha likha hai aapne bhi.. Applause


Ab ashq bhi bahayein toh hansi aati hai,
Tabiyat tere bimaar ki aur bhi bigdi jaati hai..
Sochte hai ab na socheinge tere baare mein,
Shaam dhalte hi ye soch bhi badal jaati hai..
Dil-e-chirag se na puuch ki jalega kab talak,
Iske tamaam faisle hawayein hi sunaati hai..



Start With : "Khwaab ki chaadar par sir rakha jab bhi"
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«Reply #77 on: June 30, 2008, 09:25:03 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on June 30, 2008, 08:45:06 AM
Thanks Sanjeev ji..
Aur.. Bahut achha likha hai aapne bhi.. Applause


Ab ashq bhi bahayein toh hansi aati hai,
Tabiyat tere bimaar ki aur bhi bigdi jaati hai..
Sochte hai ab na socheinge tere baare mein,
Shaam dhalte hi ye soch bhi badal jaati hai..
Dil-e-chirag se na puuch ki jalega kab talak,
Iske tamaam faisle hawayein hi sunaati hai..



Start With : "Khwaab ki chaadar par sir rakha jab bhi"




jawab ke inzaar me jo waqt zaya hua usise mujhe andaaza to tha ki kuch behtar hi aane wala hai...lekin is kadar khoobsurat hoga ye sher..........maine nahi socha tha...bahooooooot umda.....likha aapne..... Applause

Khwaab ki chaadar par sir rakha jab bhi,
sukun-e-jaam ko mere lab ne chakha jab bhi,
laga jhootha jannton ka zikr bhi mujhe
sar teri god me rakha jab bhi

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jab kabhi tahai.yon ne ghera hai
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«Reply #78 on: June 30, 2008, 10:02:46 AM »
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Shukriya Sanjeev, Lekin, Aapke likhe se jyada umda nahin tha.. Usual Smile

Bahut pyaara likha hai aapne bhi.. lekin misra dena aap bhi bhool gaye... DOH
Chaliye.. Aapne jahan khatam kiya wahin se shuru karte hai..



Sir teri goud mein rakha jab bhi,
Apne aundhe muuh khayaalon ko,
Phir se muuh uthhate dekha..
Adhoori nazmo ne sir uthha ke khud,
Lafzon ki guhaar ki humse..
Humne ek nanhi si gazal ko
Apne hothon takk aate dekha..
Haan.. Sadiyon baad humne teri aankhon mein,
Khud ko bewajah hi muskuraate dekha..




Start with : "Sab usey dekhte hai.."
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«Reply #79 on: June 30, 2008, 10:23:00 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on June 30, 2008, 10:02:46 AM
Shukriya Sanjeev, Lekin, Aapke likhe se jyada umda nahin tha.. Usual Smile

Bahut pyaara likha hai aapne bhi.. lekin misra dena aap bhi bhool gaye... DOH
Chaliye.. Aapne jahan khatam kiya wahin se shuru karte hai..



Sir teri goud mein rakha jab bhi,
Apne aundhe muuh khayaalon ko,
Phir se muuh uthhate dekha..
Adhoori nazmo ne sir uthha ke khud,
Lafzon ki guhaar ki humse..
Humne ek nanhi si gazal ko
Apne hothon takk aate dekha..
Haan.. Sadiyon baad humne teri aankhon mein,
Khud ko bewajah hi muskuraate dekha..




Start with : "Sab usey dekhte hai.."





Applause Applause wah ji wah....subhanallah.......lagta hai tumhaare andar "galib sahab" ki aatma aa gayi hai........ek se badhkar ek alfaz aur sher....
lagta hai mujhe ab bhagna padega....

sab use dekhte hain, aur wo bejar hai sabse,
rukhsaar pe likha kisine labon ko hi gaya,
kitane bane hai shyar, anjaan hai sabse

start with chalo ab aa bhi jao, dil dukhane ko

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«Reply #80 on: June 30, 2008, 03:23:17 PM »
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chalo ab aa bhi jao, dil dukhane ko
mujhko ek baar phir se rulaane ko
kash bhool jaate hum sari baatein
shuru kar paatein ek baar phir se apne afsaane ko

start with: kyun kabhi tujhko mujhse pyar na hua
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«Reply #81 on: June 30, 2008, 03:32:45 PM »
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kyun kabhi tujhko mujhse pyar na hua
kyun kabhi mujh pe, tujhe aitbaar na hua
aaj lagta hai, aag tere dil me bhi hai
kyun kabhi mujhse kisi ka intzaar na hua

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kya kharidoge bolo bik raha hun mai
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«Reply #82 on: June 30, 2008, 03:49:43 PM »
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kya kharidoge, bolo bik raha hun mai
duni ake bazar main, dardo se ris raha hu mai
mol mera teri najar main kaya, jaan chuka hu mai
AA dekh le tamsha, tere pyar mai, tamsha ban chuka hu mai

Start with: Mere dil ke manjar, tum bhi dekh jao
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«Reply #83 on: July 01, 2008, 06:23:52 AM »
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mere dil ke manjar, tum bhi dekh jaao,
sookhe hue samandar, tum bhi dekh jaao,
ummeedon ki machliyon ko dum todate dekho
sukhe hue dariaya ka hashar, tum dekh jaao

start with:- koi bhi mujhe ab satata nahi hai
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«Reply #84 on: July 01, 2008, 05:34:42 PM »
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koi bhi mujhe ab satata nahi hai
dard tera, ashqo ko la paata nahi hai
sukh kar kahin dafan ho gaye mere ander
Lubo se ab kuch bhi baher atta nahi hai!!

Next Line: dil he dil mai tujhse pyar hai
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«Reply #85 on: July 01, 2008, 05:57:19 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause great effort...pooja ji

dil hi dil me tujhse pyaar hai
tagaful husn ka hathiyaar hai,
mai bolun pahle ke tu samajhe,
ab bas isi baat ka intzaar hai..
start with:- dosti aur pyaar do alag chees hai
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«Reply #86 on: July 01, 2008, 06:05:39 PM »
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dosti aur pyaar do alag chees hai
dunia ne banai yahi reet hai
dosti bin pyar, pyar bin dosti
baat yah bahoot gambhir hai

Next Line: dil ki dhadkan, dekh tumjhe muskaye
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«Reply #87 on: July 03, 2008, 03:14:16 AM »
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dil ki dhadkan, dekh tujhe muskaye...
Palken jhukeen, dekh tujhe sharmaayen...
jhunjhun payaliya, Rimjhim kuchh batlayen...
Bas karden hamen deevana dekh teri adaayen...

Next Line :: Jo pyar kar chuke ab rote kyun ho...
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«Reply #88 on: July 03, 2008, 04:12:32 AM »
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Jo pyar kar chuke ab rote kyun ho
jab sab jante ho puchte kyun ho
bolo aaj tum udaas kyun ho
mujh se dil ki baat chupate kyun ho..

Next line...mujhe aaj tanha hi rehne do...
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«Reply #89 on: July 03, 2008, 02:21:27 PM »
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mujhe aaj tanha hi rehne do
mere zakhmo ko ashqo main bahne do
yaad aa raha hai ajj phir koi
mujhko, mujhi main, khone do

Next Line: Dil mai ho tum, tum mai main hu
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