*~*Daag Lag Jane Diye*~* -Panna 2:Miscellaneous Shayri

pandit

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«Reply #15 on: February 25, 2009, 06:10:19 PM »

Quote from: Roja on February 25, 2009, 05:04:37 PM

Shukriya Pandit ji, and nice lines Applause

Thanks Roja jee..
aapko humari lines pasand aayi..........


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Re: *~*Daag Lag Jane Diye*~*

«Reply #16 on: February 25, 2009, 06:11:09 PM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on February 25, 2009, 05:23:01 PM

WAH PANDIT, wah

jasbir singh

Thanks Singh saaheb..........


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pandit

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Re: *~*Daag Lag Jane Diye*~*

«Reply #17 on: February 25, 2009, 06:11:40 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on February 25, 2009, 05:49:53 PM

bahoot, bahoot, bahoot khoob Roja!! bahoot achi Rachna ki hai apne... good work, good creation!!!

Pandit ji apne acha sath diya hai Roja ki rachna ko!!!

Shukriya pooja jee.......


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smardia

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Re: *~*Daag Lag Jane Diye*~*

«Reply #18 on: February 25, 2009, 06:12:31 PM »

Bahut he rachnatmak kavita he aapki...
Bahut he bhav purn... Applause

oh ye tune kya kiya jindegi ki chader pe daag lag jaane diya
Lag gye jo daag tou fir nahi mitte,ye aysi safed chaader hai
Kisne behka diya tujhe, kisne salah di aysee tujhe
Logo ka kya,khud aaine mai daag nazar aayenge tujhe

Quote from: Roja on February 25, 2009, 05:49:08 AM

Jab bi chidiyon ko bhulakar pyar se dane diye,
Is nayi tehjeeb ne is per kayee taane diye.

Jin ujalon ne kiya andhi gufaon se riha,
Bediyan pehnake humne unko tehkhane diye.

Humne mangi thi, zara si roshni ghar ke liye,
Aapne jalti huyi basti ke nazrane diye.

Hadse bhi guzre unke aur mere darmiyan
Lab rahe khamosh aur aankhon ne afsane diye.

Zindagi khushbu se ab tak isliye mehroom hai,
Humne jismon ko chaman, roohon ko veerane diye

Zindagi chadar hai dhul ke saaf ho jayegi fir,
Isliye humne bhi ismein daag lag jane diye

Haat mein tezab ke faahe they merhum ki jagah
Doston ne kab hamare zakham murjane diye.

Zindagi ka gam nahi, gam hai hame is baat ka,
Usne murde bhi nahi kabron mein dafnane diye


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pandit

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Re: *~*Daag Lag Jane Diye*~*

«Reply #19 on: February 25, 2009, 06:18:59 PM »

Gud lines smardia...........


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Roja

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Re: *~*Daag Lag Jane Diye*~*

«Reply #20 on: February 27, 2009, 02:15:44 AM »

Quote from: smardia on February 25, 2009, 06:12:31 PM

Bahut he rachnatmak kavita he aapki...
Bahut he bhav purn... Applause

Shukriya Smardia ji....
Bahut khoob likha aapne


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