Darakht-just a sher

by tamanna.pt on June 03, 2010, 05:14:39 AM
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«Reply #15 on: June 09, 2010, 07:48:59 PM »
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       Doston 2-4 din se ek sher zehen me ghoom raha tha,pura kalaam banane ki koshish ki par jane kyun ban nahi paya to masoom ko tanha hi post kar rahi hoon. Aaj kal har taraf development k liye trees bahut tezi se kaate ja rahe hai usi par ye sher hai.
 
             
                   Kya kahoon k kaisi khudgarzi pasri hai hartaraf,
                   Basaane ko ghar insaano ka,parindo ka basera toot gaya.
                   Poochhte hai bachho k ye utre hue chehre,
                   Ek Buzurg to baaki tha yahan,uska bhi saya chhoot gaya.
 

                           

Logh ghanto is subject par behas kare par woh impact paida nahi kar sakte jo tumhari in char lines ne kiya hai........aur isi ko kehte hai effective shayri hai, likhne ko to sabhi likhte hai.
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«Reply #16 on: June 10, 2010, 12:55:09 AM »
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      Shukriya Sajid ji, meri khushkismati hai k aapne sher ko pasand farmaaya.  Usual Smile
Logh ghanto is subject par behas kare par woh impact paida nahi kar sakte jo tumhari in char lines ne kiya hai........aur isi ko kehte hai effective shayri hai, likhne ko to sabhi likhte hai.
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