**Dard hota hai** by Rahim

by dead heart on April 25, 2010, 11:33:13 AM
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Mana hum sadiyon se tanha hai dost,
Ehsaas dilaya mat karo; dard hota hai...

~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: April 25, 2010, 12:02:37 PM »
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mere dost yeh jalwa do lines main mazaa aa gaya kasam se do lines aapki mehfil main
dard ka kya hai, tadpaayega aur chala jaayega
mere zakhmon k daayre main ek nisha chhod jaayega
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«Reply #2 on: April 25, 2010, 12:24:20 PM »
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Shukriya...Bahaut gehri baat kehdi apne bhi...
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salil2002
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«Reply #3 on: April 25, 2010, 12:30:10 PM »
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jab baat kehdi hai toh mere bhai yeh aage badni chahiye


mera aana teri mehfil tujhe yoon NAAGWAAR gujrega
mujhe maloon hota toh tere dar k nishaan bhi mita deta
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«Reply #4 on: April 25, 2010, 12:31:50 PM »
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Kya baat hai...bahaut khoob..

Uski yaadein aksar teri palkein bheega deti hai Rahim,
Ab toh jhoot ka muskurana chorr de...
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«Reply #5 on: April 25, 2010, 04:49:34 PM »
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Rahim ji one aftr othr jst beautiful creation .
Bhut hi khoob
& Saahil Very gud Yaar .......jst too gud ..

Muskara ke bi Jakham yeh kum nahi hote
Rone se bi dard yeh kum nhi hote
Duriya to yun hi bani rehi
sadiyaan hum chalte rehe fir bi fasle kyon  yeh kum nhi hote
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«Reply #6 on: April 25, 2010, 04:51:25 PM »
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Too Gud  Applause Applause Applause

]Sadiyan beet gaye iss dard main youn hi
Kushi kya hoti hai aab to Ehsas bi bhool gaya hai

Quote from: -Rahim- on April 25, 2010, 11:33:13 AM
Mana hum sadiyon se tanha hai dost,
Ehsaas dilaya mat karo; dard hota hai...

~Rahim~
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neelgold
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«Reply #7 on: April 25, 2010, 04:54:17 PM »
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Saahil... Too Gud ......

Dard to dard hai fir bi kum jaynga
Par Yeh Nisaan
Umar beet jayngi par yeh mit nahi paynga
Quote from: -Saahil- on April 25, 2010, 12:02:37 PM
mere dost yeh jalwa do lines main mazaa aa gaya kasam se do lines aapki mehfil main
dard ka kya hai, tadpaayega aur chala jaayega
mere zakhmon k daayre main ek nisha chhod jaayega
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«Reply #8 on: April 25, 2010, 06:04:43 PM »
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Quote from: neelgold on April 25, 2010, 04:49:34 PM
Rahim ji one aftr othr jst beautiful creation .
Bhut hi khoob
& Saahil Very gud Yaar .......jst too gud ..

Muskara ke bi Jakham yeh kum nahi hote
Rone se bi dard yeh kum nhi hote
Duriya to yun hi bani rehi
sadiyaan hum chalte rehe fir bi fasle kyon  yeh kum nhi hote
Shukriya yaar...
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«Reply #9 on: April 25, 2010, 06:05:15 PM »
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Quote from: neelgold on April 25, 2010, 04:51:25 PM
Too Gud  Applause Applause Applause

]Sadiyan beet gaye iss dard main youn hi
Kushi kya hoti hai aab to Ehsas bi bhool gaya hai

Shukriya..

Bahaut acha likha hai apne...
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«Reply #10 on: April 25, 2010, 06:05:57 PM »
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Quote from: neelgold on April 25, 2010, 04:54:17 PM
Saahil... Too Gud ......

Dard to dard hai fir bi kum jaynga
Par Yeh Nisaan
Umar beet jayngi par yeh mit nahi paynga
Bahaut khoob...
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«Reply #11 on: April 25, 2010, 06:26:33 PM »
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Thanx ThanX thanXxxxx
Quote from: -Rahim- on April 25, 2010, 06:05:57 PM
Bahaut khoob...
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #12 on: April 26, 2010, 05:27:14 AM »
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Achchhi mehfil jamai hai aap logon ne

Dard jab hota hai to vaidh ko dikha lo
Aur rahis na mile to maut ko batla do
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«Reply #13 on: April 26, 2010, 12:49:04 PM »
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Wah wah bahot achha likha hai Abdul Rahim ji.
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dead heart
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«Reply #14 on: April 27, 2010, 09:25:06 AM »
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Bahaut shukriya Riyaz jee aur Rajesh jee..

Nice one Rajesh jee... Applause
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