Sanjeev kash
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Dard hua tha jab wo chod gaya tha hume Zakham par koi nazar nahi aaya tha hume
Wo aapna tha jo tod gaya tha dil ko mere Beganoo se to koi chot nahi aayi thi hume
Aankhoo se aansoo beh gaye jab usne pucha haal mera Jis ne kabhi pyaar se nahi bulaya tha hume
Zindgi ki cahat hi zindgi ko Barbaad kar ke gayi Nafrat ke sahare hi to jeena aaya tha hume
Sang Dil Kehti HAi Ab ye Duniya Mujhay KAsh Jab Tha Dildaar Tab Kisne Apnya Tha Hume
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #2 on: September 21, 2011, 09:27:35 AM » |
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marhoom bahayaat
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«Reply #4 on: September 21, 2011, 09:34:21 AM » |
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Dard hua tha jab wo chod gaya tha hume Zakham par koi nazar nahi aaya tha hume
Wo aapna tha jo tod gaya tha dil ko mere Beganoo se to koi chot nahi aaya tha hume
Aankhoo se aansoo beh gaye jab usne pucha haal mera Jis ne kabhi pyaar se nahi bulaya tha hume
Zindgi ki cahat hi zindgi ko Barbaad kar ke gayi Nafrat ke sahare hi to jeena aaya tha hume
Sang Dil Kehti HAi Ab ye Duniya Mujhay KAsh Jab Tha Dildaar Tab Kisne Apnya Tha Hume
ACHA LIKHA HAI .PER JISE HIGHLIGHT KIYA HAI USME CHOT AAYI THI HUME HOGA. IS LIYE IS MISRE KO PHIR SE BADAL KAR LIKHEIN KAFIYA EK SA HO
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Sanjeev kash
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«Reply #6 on: September 21, 2011, 09:46:55 AM » |
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Rajah rohan
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«Reply #7 on: September 21, 2011, 10:05:06 AM » |
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A good one Sanjeev Ji Keep it up
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gaytri gupta
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«Reply #8 on: September 21, 2011, 10:28:24 AM » |
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Bhut khoob likha hai aap ne...
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mkv
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«Reply #9 on: September 21, 2011, 10:47:39 AM » |
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Sanjeev Bhai Bahut khoob.
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sbechain
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«Reply #12 on: September 25, 2011, 10:03:38 AM » |
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Dard hua tha jab wo chod gaya tha hume Zakham par koi nazar nahi aaya tha hume
Wo aapna tha jo tod gaya tha dil ko mere Beganoo se to koi chot nahi aayi thi hume
Aankhoo se aansoo beh gaye jab usne pucha haal mera Jis ne kabhi pyaar se nahi bulaya tha hume
Zindgi ki cahat hi zindgi ko Barbaad kar ke gayi Nafrat ke sahare hi to jeena aaya tha hume
Sang Dil Kehti HAi Ab ye Duniya Mujhay KAsh Jab Tha Dildaar Tab Kisne Apnya Tha Hume
wo apna tha jo tod gaya tha dil mera, begaano se koi dard nahin payaa tha humneacha likha hai kash ji
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awais_007
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«Reply #14 on: September 25, 2011, 12:04:51 PM » |
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bahut khoob
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