Dard Hua Tha...............Kash

by Sanjeev kash on September 20, 2011, 07:47:58 AM
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                 Dard hua tha jab wo chod gaya tha hume
                 Zakham  par  koi nazar nahi aaya tha hume

                 Wo aapna tha jo tod gaya tha dil ko mere
                 Beganoo se to koi chot nahi aayi  thi hume

                 Aankhoo se aansoo beh gaye jab usne pucha haal mera
                 Jis ne kabhi pyaar se nahi  bulaya tha hume

                 Zindgi ki cahat hi zindgi ko  Barbaad  kar ke gayi
                 Nafrat ke sahare hi to jeena aaya tha  hume

                 Sang Dil Kehti HAi Ab ye Duniya Mujhay KAsh
                 Jab Tha Dildaar Tab Kisne Apnya Tha Hume
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #1 on: September 20, 2011, 08:40:35 AM »
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Kaash Jee Aadaab!

janab achche ahsaas O khayaal haiN... humari
daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Kafiye par aur thoda dhayan dijiye aap kareeb kareeb
samajh chuke hai ... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile         

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«Reply #2 on: September 21, 2011, 09:27:35 AM »
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wah waah sanjeev ji zindagi ki chahat hi zindagi ko barabaad kar gai. hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 :hello2:vaise poori ghazal hi achhi hai par ye line mujhe khaas pasand aai.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
                 Dard hua tha jab wo chod gaya tha hume
                 Zakham  par  koi nazar nahi aaya tha hume

                 Wo aapna tha jo tod gaya tha dil ko mere
                 Beganoo se to koi chot nahi aaya  tha hume

                 Aankhoo se aansoo beh gaye jab usne pucha haal mera
                 Jis ne kabhi pyaar se nahi  bulaya tha hume

                 Zindgi ki cahat hi zindgi ko  Barbaad  kar ke gayi
                 Nafrat ke sahare hi to jeena aaya tha  hume

                 Sang Dil Kehti HAi Ab ye Duniya Mujhay KAsh
                 Jab Tha Dildaar Tab Kisne Apnya Tha Hume

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«Reply #3 on: September 21, 2011, 09:28:57 AM »
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Kaash Jee Aadaab!

janab achche ahsaas O khayaal haiN... humari
daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Kafiye par aur thoda dhayan dijiye aap kareeb kareeb
samajh chuke hai ... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile          



PArwaz Saheb Aadab!

BAhut BAhut Shukriya Janab Aap Ne humesha Humara Husla BAdaya Hai

Uske Liye Bahut Bahut Shukriya icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

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«Reply #4 on: September 21, 2011, 09:34:21 AM »
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                 Dard hua tha jab wo chod gaya tha hume
                 Zakham  par  koi nazar nahi aaya tha hume

                 Wo aapna tha jo tod gaya tha dil ko mere
                 Beganoo se to koi chot nahi aaya  tha hume


                 Aankhoo se aansoo beh gaye jab usne pucha haal mera
                 Jis ne kabhi pyaar se nahi  bulaya tha hume

                 Zindgi ki cahat hi zindgi ko  Barbaad  kar ke gayi
                 Nafrat ke sahare hi to jeena aaya tha  hume

                 Sang Dil Kehti HAi Ab ye Duniya Mujhay KAsh
                 Jab Tha Dildaar Tab Kisne Apnya Tha Hume



ACHA LIKHA HAI .PER JISE HIGHLIGHT KIYA HAI USME CHOT AAYI THI HUME HOGA. IS LIYE IS MISRE KO PHIR SE BADAL KAR LIKHEIN KAFIYA EK SA HO
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«Reply #5 on: September 21, 2011, 09:42:43 AM »
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wah waah sanjeev ji zindagi ki chahat hi zindagi ko barabaad kar gai. hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 :hello2:vaise poori ghazal hi achhi hai par ye line mujhe khaas pasand aai.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Suresh Ji icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #6 on: September 21, 2011, 09:46:55 AM »
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ACHA LIKHA HAI .PER JISE HIGHLIGHT KIYA HAI USME CHOT AAYI THI HUME HOGA. IS LIYE IS MISRE KO PHIR SE BADAL KAR LIKHEIN KAFIYA EK SA HO

MB JI Bahut BAhut Shukriya Samjane KA, Abhi Hum KAche hai.

Issi Tarah Saath Dete Rahyega, Humne Aap Ka teh Dil Se Shukriya KArte HAi

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«Reply #7 on: September 21, 2011, 10:05:06 AM »
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A good one Sanjeev Ji
Keep it up
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«Reply #8 on: September 21, 2011, 10:28:24 AM »
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Bhut khoob likha hai aap ne...
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«Reply #9 on: September 21, 2011, 10:47:39 AM »
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Sanjeev Bhai
Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #10 on: September 23, 2011, 07:24:44 AM »
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A good one Sanjeev Ji
Keep it up

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«Reply #11 on: September 25, 2011, 09:52:02 AM »
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Bhut khoob likha hai aap ne...

Thanks. Gayati Ji icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #12 on: September 25, 2011, 10:03:38 AM »
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                 Dard hua tha jab wo chod gaya tha hume
                 Zakham  par  koi nazar nahi aaya tha hume

                 Wo aapna tha jo tod gaya tha dil ko mere
                 Beganoo se to koi chot nahi aayi  thi hume

                 Aankhoo se aansoo beh gaye jab usne pucha haal mera
                 Jis ne kabhi pyaar se nahi  bulaya tha hume

                 Zindgi ki cahat hi zindgi ko  Barbaad  kar ke gayi
                 Nafrat ke sahare hi to jeena aaya tha  hume

                 Sang Dil Kehti HAi Ab ye Duniya Mujhay KAsh
                 Jab Tha Dildaar Tab Kisne Apnya Tha Hume


wo apna tha jo tod gaya tha dil mera,
begaano se koi dard nahin payaa tha humne



acha likha hai kash ji
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«Reply #13 on: September 25, 2011, 10:54:52 AM »
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Sanjeev Bhai
Bahut khoob.

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«Reply #14 on: September 25, 2011, 12:04:51 PM »
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