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Dard mit_ta hee naheeN laakh dawaayeN de do
neeNd se jaagooN naheeN aisee duaayeN de do
mujhko darr lagne lagaa apnee hee parchhaayeeN se
jo mujhe khud me chhupaa le woh kabaayeN de do
aag bhaRkee hai jo baarish me to kyaa keejiyegaa
jo use raakh banaa de woh hawaayeN de do
thak ke khaamosh hui meri zubaaN kyaa keeje
lout aayeN woh unheN aisee sadaayeN de do
naam ulfat kaa rahe duniyaa me sadiyoN tak
ho karam mujh pe mujhe aisee wafaayeN de do
Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #2 on: November 14, 2010, 04:05:34 PM » |
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«Reply #3 on: November 14, 2010, 06:42:57 PM » |
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bahaut acchhaa mamata ji. virah ki peerha aur soz e firaq ka evocative bayaan.
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«Reply #4 on: November 14, 2010, 10:30:58 PM » |
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Parvez jee!ek muddat baad aap ko yahaaN dekh dil khushee se bhar gayaa...is beech humaare kuchh kalaam aap kee raah dekhte rah gaye...wahaaN aap kee gair-haazijiri darz hai......
aaiye gazal ke sahan me aate haiN...'lo'kee jagah 'le' honaa tha..is jagah spl mistake hai...baaqee aap kaa mashwaraa achchha lagaa.Shukriya!
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«Reply #5 on: November 14, 2010, 11:07:04 PM » |
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Shukriya Manoj jee!
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«Reply #6 on: November 14, 2010, 11:11:33 PM » |
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Shukriyaa Zarra jee! aap kee sameeksha ka hume intezaar rahtaa haikyoNki kam shabdoN me aap sab kuch kahne me samarth haiN.
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«Reply #7 on: November 15, 2010, 04:41:47 AM » |
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dard jo mit jaye dawaaon se,
kya hum bedard na kahlayenge fir hawaon se...
neend se gar jo na jaage hum,
kya bharosa na uth jayega fir humara duwaon se...
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Mamta jee aapki ek aur peshkash jiski tareef ke liye alfaaz nhi mere pass...
Subhash ki taraf se dher saari daad kubool kijiye or likhti rahiye yun hi***
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«Reply #8 on: November 15, 2010, 05:42:42 AM » |
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Ulfat par nahin hai zore tera mera hona ye to shola hai bas jal k fanna hona.... Dard mit_ta hee naheeN laakh dawaayeN de do
neeNd se jaagooN naheeN aisee duaayeN de do
mujhko darr lagne lagaa apnee hee parchhaayeeN se
jo mujhe khud me chhupaa le woh kabaayeN de do
aag bhaRkee hai jo baarish me to kyaa keejiyegaa
jo use raakh banaa de woh hawaayeN de do
thak ke khaamosh hui meri zubaaN kyaa keeje
lout aayeN woh unheN aisee sadaayeN de do
naam ulfat kaa rahe duniyaa me sadiyoN tak
ho karam mujh pe mujhe aisee wafaayeN de do
Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #9 on: November 15, 2010, 07:47:20 AM » |
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mamta di....chaliye no comments bas likh deta hun~
apne sare sitam mere naam kar e khuda
mere hisse meri duayen mere mehboob ko de do
ek mujhe de do thodi si jhalak uski
chand or taron ke khwaab mere mehboob ko de do
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«Reply #10 on: November 15, 2010, 08:29:19 AM » |
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Sushash jee kalaam ko izzat bkshane ke liye dil se shukrguzaar hooN........
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«Reply #11 on: November 15, 2010, 08:32:17 AM » |
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Shukriyaa Abhi !aap kee meharbaanee ....khushee hui ...bahut achchha likhaa aap ne ...humaari or se bhee aap ko dher see badhai.....
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«Reply #12 on: November 15, 2010, 08:40:12 AM » |
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Shukriyaa Prince!
karam hee karnaa hai to ye karam kar de
mere Khudaa tu meri khwahishoN ko kam kar de
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«Reply #13 on: November 15, 2010, 08:44:39 AM » |
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Shukriyaa Abhi !aap kee meharbaanee ....khushee hui ...bahut achchha likhaa aap ne ...humaari or se bhee aap ko dher see badhai.....
apka shukriya mamta di...waise hi chhota hun ...meherbani bolke ..or chhota na kijiye...hehehehe |
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«Reply #14 on: November 15, 2010, 02:14:13 PM » |
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Abhi bade saahas kaa kaam hai kisee kee prashnsaa karnaa...or woh kaam tum karte ho...iske liye shukriyaa ada karnaa humaaraa farz bantaa hai ........
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