Darr ka ehsas lekar jiti hu...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on April 04, 2011, 08:13:27 PM
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Main apne dil mein darr ka ek ehsas lekar jiti hu,
per sath uske tujhe paane ki aas lekar jiti hu,

wafa k dhango ki dor hamesha hamare darmiyan bandhi rahegi,
main terri ulfat terri mhbt ko hardum apne paas lekar jiti hu,

ye kehna behad mushkil hai ki hamari mhbt ka kya anjam hoga,
bus dil mein khwaish aur apne khuda pe pur wishwas lekar jiti hu,

tujhe dekhne ko ankhe tarsane lagti hai har guzarte din k sath,
sang bita har vo pal har vo din har vo lamha khaas lekar jiti hu,

baarish ki bundo ko chhune nhi deti apne badan ko,
apne har jazbaat mein terri pyas lekar jiti hu,

zinda jism hai per har dhdkan terre liye tarasati hai,
terre naam k aasre hi ab apni har sans lekar jiti hu.........
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«Reply #1 on: April 05, 2011, 02:25:58 AM »
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Kamaal Ka BrokenByLuv Ji .. Ehsaason koe bohout ache tarike say bayaan ki.. hai aap ne  Applause Applause Applause aeisa lagta hai k kuch humare dil koe bhi chu liya.. I Like the most is 4 & 6 .  Applause

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«Reply #2 on: April 05, 2011, 04:06:14 AM »
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bahut sundar geetji... bahut badiya....

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: April 05, 2011, 07:41:52 AM »
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Bahut shukriya sky ji aur manju mann ji..
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«Reply #4 on: April 05, 2011, 09:07:55 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 04, 2011, 08:13:27 PM



Main apne dil mein darr ka ek ehsas lekar jiti hu,
per sath uske tujhe paane ki aas lekar jiti hu,

wafa k dhango ki dor hamesha hamare darmiyan bandhi rahegi,
main terri ulfat terri mhbt ko hardum apne paas lekar jiti hu,

ye kehna behad mushkil hai ki hamari mhbt ka kya anjam hoga,
bus dil mein khwaish aur apne khuda pe pur wishwas lekar jiti hu,

tujhe dekhne ko ankhe tarsane lagti hai har guzarte din k sath,
sang bita har vo pal har vo din har vo lamha khaas lekar jiti hu,

baarish ki bundo ko chhune nhi deti apne badan ko,
apne har jazbaat mein terri pyas lekar jiti hu,

zinda jism hai per har dhdkan terre liye tarasati hai,
terre naam k aasre hi ab apni har sans lekar jiti hu.........





bahut khoob broken ji
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«Reply #5 on: April 05, 2011, 09:14:23 AM »
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geet ji ab kya kahu.........

it is just wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
apne jo lkiha he wo to samne dikh raha he but sach kahu to jo nahi likha he ya jis feel ko chupate huey likha he muje to wo bhi saaf saaf najar aa raha he ........ye jis ki bhi feel ho bahot hi gajab he ho sakta he apki khud ki ho ya kisi aur ki feel ko hi feel karke apne lafjo me uatara ho ..........is feel ke ehsaas me utar kar jis lajwab tarike se apne likha he kasam se dil loot liya apke is kalaam ne ........

baarish ki bundo ko chhune nhi deti apne badan ko,
apne har jazbaat mein terri pyas lekar jiti hu,

ab isko koi kya samje ....? gajab he bas aur kuch nahi kah sakta.....

well ek baar mene kahi pada tha ki "tere milne me wo maja nahi ata jitna ki teri yaad me tadap maja deti he" wo hi baat apki is puri poetry me dekh raha hu.........

bht khoob geet ji .........bas ab words nahi he mere paas........
amajing,,,,,,mindblowing.............wonderful........excellent........
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«Reply #6 on: April 05, 2011, 09:20:31 AM »
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Wah Geet ji,bahut pasand aayi aapke ye dard bhari kavita,great n midblowing creation.keep it up. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: April 05, 2011, 09:35:06 AM »
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Quote from: Matrix Guy on April 05, 2011, 09:14:23 AM
geet ji ab kya kahu.........

it is just wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
apne jo lkiha he wo to samne dikh raha he but sach kahu to jo nahi likha he ya jis feel ko chupate huey likha he muje to wo bhi saaf saaf najar aa raha he ........ye jis ki bhi feel ho bahot hi gajab he ho sakta he apki khud ki ho ya kisi aur ki feel ko hi feel karke apne lafjo me uatara ho ..........is feel ke ehsaas me utar kar jis lajwab tarike se apne likha he kasam se dil loot liya apke is kalaam ne ........

baarish ki bundo ko chhune nhi deti apne badan ko,
apne har jazbaat mein terri pyas lekar jiti hu,

ab isko koi kya samje ....? gajab he bas aur kuch nahi kah sakta.....

well ek baar mene kahi pada tha ki "tere milne me wo maja nahi ata jitna ki teri yaad me tadap maja deti he" wo hi baat apki is puri poetry me dekh raha hu.........

bht khoob geet ji .........bas ab words nahi he mere paas........
amajing,,,,,,mindblowing.............wonderful........excellent........

Utkarsh ji itna kuch feel hua apko merri kavita mein aur jo lafzo mein nhi likha apne us chhupe ehsas ko bhi smjha mujhe behad khushi hui...bahut bahut shukriya pasand karne k liye...
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«Reply #8 on: April 05, 2011, 09:37:34 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on April 05, 2011, 09:07:55 AM
bahut khoob broken ji

Quote from: madhuwesh on April 05, 2011, 09:20:31 AM
Wah Geet ji,bahut pasand aayi aapke ye dard bhari kavita,great n midblowing creation.keep it up. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause

Madhu ji aur sheba ji aapka bhi bahut shukriya...
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«Reply #9 on: April 05, 2011, 09:41:46 AM »
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SACH ME GEETT.........SAME FEEL HAI...KAI WAQT SE KUCH NAHIN LIKHA LEKIN JO FEEL KAR RAHI THI WO SAB TUMHARI POETRY ME MIL GAYA.....

KYA KAHUN ISE HI USE DEDICATE KAR DETI HUN...SAMJHLENGE JAB PADHENGE......

THNX GEET FOR THIS LOVELY FEELING....JO EK KHAMOSH MAHOBBAT KO ZUBAAN DEDE.......
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on April 05, 2011, 09:41:46 AM
SACH ME GEETT.........SAME FEEL HAI...KAI WAQT SE KUCH NAHIN LIKHA LEKIN JO FEEL KAR RAHI THI WO SAB TUMHARI POETRY ME MIL GAYA.....

KYA KAHUN ISE HI USE DEDICATE KAR DETI HUN...SAMJHLENGE JAB PADHENGE......

THNX GEET FOR THIS LOVELY FEELING....JO EK KHAMOSH MAHOBBAT KO ZUBAAN DEDE.......

Bahut shukriya kasak ji...
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«Reply #11 on: April 05, 2011, 01:21:48 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 04, 2011, 08:13:27 PM



Main apne dil mein darr ka ek ehsas lekar jiti hu,
per sath uske tujhe paane ki aas lekar jiti hu,

wafa k dhango ki dor hamesha hamare darmiyan bandhi rahegi,
main terri ulfat terri mhbt ko hardum apne paas lekar jiti hu,

ye kehna behad mushkil hai ki hamari mhbt ka kya anjam hoga,
bus dil mein khwaish aur apne khuda pe pur wishwas lekar jiti hu,

tujhe dekhne ko ankhe tarsane lagti hai har guzarte din k sath,
sang bita har vo pal har vo din har vo lamha khaas lekar jiti hu,

baarish ki bundo ko chhune nhi deti apne badan ko,
apne har jazbaat mein terri pyas lekar jiti hu,

zinda jism hai per har dhdkan terre liye tarasati hai,
terre naam k aasre hi ab apni har sans lekar jiti hu.........






Bahut Bhaut Khoob Geetji...

Kin Lafza Naal tareef Kara Iss Kalaam Di..

Bahuttttttttt Hi khoobsurat Aur Seedha Dil To Nikle Hue Lafz Ne..

Bahut Ache Yaar!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: April 05, 2011, 03:53:03 PM »
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bht umda peshkesh geet ji...
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«Reply #13 on: April 05, 2011, 06:40:12 PM »
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geet…
aapke post ko parhkar jo kuch feel mene kia wo sbkuch to matrix yara ne likh dia…
wo baris wali line jiska kayal me hua unhone b wai kaha.
ab islie mene cmnt hi nai dia tha…
bas aapko duayen dene ko aa gaya me.
khus rahiye ji…
god bless u dear.

““
khuwabon ki rangat kho na jaayen kahin

ab palken jhapkaane se bhi darta hun………
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khus rahiye …
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«Reply #14 on: April 05, 2011, 07:06:53 PM »
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Bahut Khub Geet JI
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