-----/// Dastoor zamaane kaa ///----- Hriday

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sadiyon se zamaane kaa bas yahi dastoor rahaa
kisi  ne  qatl  kiyaa  aur   kisi  kaa  kasoor rahaa

mahalon kaa  khwaab to dekhaa gareeb ne bhi
magar  haalaat ke haathon woh majboor rahaa

nahi   fursat   thi,  kisi   ko   khaanaa   khilaaye
raees   daulat   ke  nashe  mein  hi choor rahaa

sirf  mehnat  ke  dum  par  kyaa  kartaa bhalaa
betaa  majdoor  kaa   bhi  aksar majdoor rahaa

jis  bete  ko  seene  se  lagaa  kar  badaa kiyaa
woh   betaa  hi maa baap se bahut door rahaa

bas  meri  hi ghazal thi jis ko bas  thokrein mili
warnaa  har  shaayar yahaan mash-hoor rahaa

jo  maa  ki  mamtaa  ko  kabhi samjhaa hi nahi
aisaa  betaa  maa  ki  aankhon  kaa noor rahaa

*****HRIDAY*****



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«Reply #1 on: September 13, 2013, 11:57:31 PM »
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Kya kahne,bahut khoob.Hridayji.
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«Reply #2 on: September 14, 2013, 12:36:12 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahut khoob....
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«Reply #3 on: September 14, 2013, 01:04:48 AM »
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bahut khhob hriday jee..happy9
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«Reply #4 on: September 14, 2013, 03:16:55 AM »
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sadiyon se zamaane kaa bas yahi dastoor rahaa
kisi  ne  qatl  kiyaa  aur   kisi  kaa  kasoor rahaa

mahalon kaa  khwaab to dekhaa gareeb ne bhi
magar  haalaat ke haathon woh majboor rahaa

nahi   fursat   thi,  kisi   ko   khaanaa   khilaaye
raees   daulat   ke  nashe  mein  hi choor rahaa

sirf  mehnat  ke  dum  par  kyaa  kartaa bhalaa
betaa  majdoor  kaa   bhi  aksar majdoor rahaa

jis  bete  ko  seene  se  lagaa  kar  badaa kiyaa
woh   betaa  hi maa baap se bahut door rahaa

bas  meri  hi ghazal thi jis ko bas  thokrein mili
warnaa  har  shaayar yahaan mash-hoor rahaa

jo  maa  ki  mamtaa  ko  kabhi samjhaa hi nahi
aisaa  betaa  maa  ki  aankhon  kaa noor rahaa

*****HRIDAY*****





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wah wah wah , nahin lagta ki tumne likha hai hriday agar waqayi tumne hi likha hai to gazab ke sher hain ji bahut bahut khoob..............!
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«Reply #5 on: September 14, 2013, 05:05:32 AM »
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mahalon kaa  khwaab to dekhaa gareeb ne bhi
magar  haalaat ke haathon woh majboor rahaa

sirf  mehnat  ke  dum  par  kyaa  kartaa bhalaa
betaa  majdoor  kaa   bhi  aksar majdoor rahaa

jis  bete  ko  seene  se  lagaa  kar  badaa kiyaa
woh   betaa  hi maa baap se bahut door rahaa

jo  maa  ki  mamtaa  ko  kabhi samjhaa hi nahi
aisaa  betaa  maa  ki  aankhon  kaa noor rahaa
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«Reply #6 on: September 14, 2013, 08:45:39 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: September 14, 2013, 11:24:51 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: September 14, 2013, 02:17:06 PM »
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sadiyon se zamaane kaa bas yahi dastoor rahaa
kisi  ne  qatl  kiyaa  aur   kisi  kaa  kasoor rahaa

achchaa sher hai.....aur ye misra bhi bahut khaas lagaa

betaa  majdoor  kaa   bhi  aksar majdoor rahaa..

daad qabool kare...
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«Reply #9 on: September 15, 2013, 01:54:39 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Ravi ji....!!!

Kya kahne,bahut khoob.Hridayji.
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«Reply #10 on: September 15, 2013, 01:57:43 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Ambalika ji....!!!

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahut khoob....
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Ashwani ji.....!!!

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bahut khhob hriday jee..happy9
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thank u soooooo much Sheba ji.....!!!

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wah wah wah , nahin lagta ki tumne likha hai hriday agar waqayi tumne hi likha hai to gazab ke sher hain ji bahut bahut khoob..............!
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You'er Welcomeji
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Ravi ji....!!!

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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Iqtedar ji.....!!!

mahalon kaa  khwaab to dekhaa gareeb ne bhi
magar  haalaat ke haathon woh majboor rahaa

sirf  mehnat  ke  dum  par  kyaa  kartaa bhalaa
betaa  majdoor  kaa   bhi  aksar majdoor rahaa

jis  bete  ko  seene  se  lagaa  kar  badaa kiyaa
woh   betaa  hi maa baap se bahut door rahaa

jo  maa  ki  mamtaa  ko  kabhi samjhaa hi nahi
aisaa  betaa  maa  ki  aankhon  kaa noor rahaa
lajawaaab Hriday ji boleto ek dam chakaaas  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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