-----/// Dastoor zamaane kaa ///----- Hriday

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«Reply #15 on: September 15, 2013, 02:03:38 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Saini ji....!!!

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«Reply #16 on: September 15, 2013, 02:04:55 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Miraj ji....!!!


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«Reply #17 on: September 15, 2013, 02:06:49 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Ufaq ji....!!!

Quote from: ufaq on September 14, 2013, 02:17:06 PM
sadiyon se zamaane kaa bas yahi dastoor rahaa
kisi  ne  qatl  kiyaa  aur   kisi  kaa  kasoor rahaa

achchaa sher hai.....aur ye misra bhi bahut khaas lagaa

betaa  majdoor  kaa   bhi  aksar majdoor rahaa..

daad qabool kare...
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«Reply #18 on: September 15, 2013, 02:07:32 AM »
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«Reply #19 on: September 15, 2013, 08:21:47 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on September 13, 2013, 11:51:38 PM


sadiyon se zamaane kaa bas yahi dastoor rahaa
kisi  ne  qatl  kiyaa  aur   kisi  kaa  kasoor rahaa

mahalon kaa  khwaab to dekhaa gareeb ne bhi
magar  haalaat ke haathon woh majboor rahaa

nahi   fursat   thi,  kisi   ko   khaanaa   khilaaye
raees   daulat   ke  nashe  mein  hi choor rahaa

sirf  mehnat  ke  dum  par  kyaa  kartaa bhalaa
betaa  majdoor  kaa   bhi  aksar majdoor rahaa

jis  bete  ko  seene  se  lagaa  kar  badaa kiyaa
woh   betaa  hi maa baap se bahut door rahaa

bas  meri  hi ghazal thi jis ko bas  thokrein mili
warnaa  har  shaayar yahaan mash-hoor rahaa

jo  maa  ki  mamtaa  ko  kabhi samjhaa hi nahi
aisaa  betaa  maa  ki  aankhon  kaa noor rahaa

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Hriday Ji, Meri Nazar mein Yeh Ghazal Aapki One Of the Best Creations mein Ek Rahegi......

Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khooob....!!!!!

Har Ek Ashaar lajawaab


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«Reply #20 on: September 15, 2013, 08:26:20 PM »
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sach kahun to is post par main aap hi ke comment ka wait kar rahaa thaa, maine aapko aksar aise poems likhte dekhaa hai, aap jaisa achchaa to nahi likh paayaa magar haan ek koshish zaroor ki hai, sikhne ki koshish kar rahaa hoon aap logon ke poems padh padh ke, jaankar bahut bahut achchaa lagaa ki aapko pasand aayaa... thank you soooooooooooooooooo much Khwahish ji...!!!



Quote from: khwahish on September 15, 2013, 08:21:47 PM

Hriday Ji, Meri Nazar mein Yeh Ghazal Aapki One Of the Best Creations mein Ek Rahegi......

Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khooob....!!!!!

Har Ek Ashaar lajawaab


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«Reply #21 on: September 15, 2013, 08:29:20 PM »
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i agree wid khwaish ji........ 1 of ur bestesttt creation
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«Reply #22 on: September 15, 2013, 08:38:40 PM »
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thank you sooo much hai ji....!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 15, 2013, 08:29:20 PM
i agree wid khwaish ji........ 1 of ur bestesttt creation
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