daulat..sheba

by Sheba on August 23, 2011, 07:43:33 PM
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            so jaaein ya koi khawaab dekhein hum..,
            mita dein khud ko ya azaab dekhein hum..,

            ho qatl ameer ka aur shor bhi na machey,
            hai shauq ab kuch nayaab dekein hum,

            padh na sake aaina dil ki baatein ab,
            chehre pe apne aisa hijaab dekhein hum,

            rokte hain qadam jaane se maiqade mein,
            ho paaki jismein wo sharaab dekhein hum,

            hai haq unka bhi meri daulat pe sheba..!
            ghurbat ke shahar mein hisaab dekhein hum..!!

           
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«Reply #1 on: August 23, 2011, 08:07:10 PM »
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Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab!

Janab achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne daad Usual Smile
Ahsaas O khayaal khoob rahe.. Usual Smile
Aur ashaar bhi Usual Smile

Kul milaake kalaam achchi rahi daad Usual Smile

Kuch khamiyaaN hai, jaise rabte ki kami..
Jab do line meiN sher mukammal hota hai to
dono line's meiN gehra conection hota hai..
gar aisa nahi hua to shayad sher nahi hua ..
         


Quote from: Sheba on August 23, 2011, 07:43:33 PM


            so jaaein ya koi khawaab dekhein hum..,
            mita dein khud ko ya azaab dekhein hum..,

Matla behad khoob kaha hai daad Usual Smile         

            ho qatl ameer ka aur shor bhi na machey,
            hai shauq ab kuch nayaab dekein hum,

is sher meiN hume rabta banta nazar nahi aa raha hai.. waise aik nazar meiN ulaa misra ( paleli line..) se meiN kuch baat hai, par dusri line meiN nayaab" istemaal rabte ki kami ka sabab hua???

Humare zaheN meiN is sher ke liye aik surat bani hai ..

 ho qatl ameer ka aur shor bhi na machey,
chalo ab ameer e shahar ka hisaab dekheN hum         

            padh na saka aaina e dil ki baatein koi,
            chehre pe apne aisa hijaab dekhein hum,

Bahut khoob achcha sher hai daad .. Usual Smile
kuch tarmeem ki hai dekh lijiye..
         

            rokte hain qadam jaane se maiqade mein,
            ho paaki jismein wo sharaab dekhein hum,

Kia kahne .... Gar aisi sharaab mil jaaye to hume bhi bataiyeNga :D         

            hai haq unka bhi meri daulat pe sheba..!
            ghurbat ke shahar mein hisaab dekhein hum..!!

wah janab kia kahne achcha Maqta ataa kia hai daad Usual Smile         



           


Gar humari tanqee baateN buri lagi ho to baraaye mehrbaani zaheN O dil se naa lagaiyeNga.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Khush O aabaad rahiye.. Usual Smile

Aate rahiye.. Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         
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«Reply #2 on: August 23, 2011, 08:33:55 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 23, 2011, 08:07:10 PM
Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab!

Janab achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne daad Usual Smile
Ahsaas O khayaal khoob rahe.. Usual Smile
Aur ashaar bhi Usual Smile

Kul milaake kalaam achchi rahi daad Usual Smile

Kuch khamiyaaN hai, jaise rabte ki kami..
Jab do line meiN sher mukammal hota hai to
dono line's meiN gehra conection hota hai..
gar aisa nahi hua to shayad sher nahi hua ..
         


Gar humari tanqee baateN buri lagi ho to baraaye mehrbaani zaheN O dil se naa lagaiyeNga.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Khush O aabaad rahiye.. Usual Smile

Aate rahiye.. Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         


bahut bahut shukria parwaaz sahab.

jahan tak sawaal doosre sher ka hai . meri khund zehan se ye moqammal sher hai kyon ki pahli line mein jo baat maine kaha chha hai wo ek nayaab hadsaa hi ho sakta hai. uske liye zaruri nahin ki ameer ke hisaab ko waze kiya jaaye.
aap kamyaab sukhwar hain aap sahi ho sakte hain. per mujhe apne iss sher mein aisi kami mahsoos nahin hui
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«Reply #3 on: August 23, 2011, 08:41:25 PM »
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Sheba Sahibaa Aadaab!

janab sher aik mukhaam par mukammal hai daad... bus
humare khayaal meiN nahi ban paa raha hai ke sher
kaise kaha gaya hai... Huh?Huh???

            ho qatl ameer ka aur shor bhi na machey,
            hai shauq ab kuch nayaab dekein hum,

YahaaN aapne shauq ka bhi istemaal kiya hai??
pata nahi kyuN humare zaheN meiN nahi ban paa raha hai.. Usual Smile

khair aisa hota hai kabhi kabhi humare saath, kyuN ke padhne
ka aur sochne ka mood kuch hota hai aur kuch alag padhne mil
jaaye to zaheN samajh nahi pata Usual Smile

Wel likhate rahiye..
khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda hafez Usual Smile
         
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«Reply #4 on: August 24, 2011, 05:31:18 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on August 23, 2011, 07:43:33 PM


            so jaaein ya koi khawaab dekhein hum..,
            mita dein khud ko ya azaab dekhein hum..,

            ho qatl ameer ka aur shor bhi na machey,
            hai shauq ab kuch nayaab dekein hum,

            padh na sake aaina dil ki baatein ab,
            chehre pe apne aisa hijaab dekhein hum,

            rokte hain qadam jaane se maiqade mein,
            ho paaki jismein wo sharaab dekhein hum,

            hai haq unka bhi meri daulat pe sheba..!
            ghurbat ke shahar mein hisaab dekhein hum..!!

           

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«Reply #5 on: August 29, 2011, 12:46:55 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 23, 2011, 08:41:25 PM
Sheba Sahibaa Aadaab!

janab sher aik mukhaam par mukammal hai daad... bus
humare khayaal meiN nahi ban paa raha hai ke sher
kaise kaha gaya hai... Huh?Huh???

            ho qatl ameer ka aur shor bhi na machey,
            hai shauq ab kuch nayaab dekein hum,

YahaaN aapne shauq ka bhi istemaal kiya hai??
pata nahi kyuN humare zaheN meiN nahi ban paa raha hai.. Usual Smile

khair aisa hota hai kabhi kabhi humare saath, kyuN ke padhne
ka aur sochne ka mood kuch hota hai aur kuch alag padhne mil
jaaye to zaheN samajh nahi pata Usual Smile

Wel likhate rahiye..
khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda hafez Usual Smile
         


shukria
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«Reply #6 on: September 08, 2011, 07:33:27 AM »
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on August 24, 2011, 05:31:18 AM
nice


thank you manoj
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«Reply #7 on: September 08, 2011, 07:45:23 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on August 23, 2011, 07:43:33 PM


            so jaaein ya koi khawaab dekhein hum..,
            mita dein khud ko ya azaab dekhein hum..,

            ho qatl ameer ka aur shor bhi na machey,
            hai shauq ab kuch nayaab dekein hum,

            padh na sake aaina dil ki baatein ab,
            chehre pe apne aisa hijaab dekhein hum,

            rokte hain qadam jaane se maiqade mein,
            ho paaki jismein wo sharaab dekhein hum,

            hai haq unka bhi meri daulat pe sheba..!
            ghurbat ke shahar mein hisaab dekhein hum..!!

           


"Rokhte Hai Qadam Jaane Se Maiqade mein
Ho Paaki Jismein Woh Sharaab Dekhein  Hum

Hai Haq Unka Bhi Meri Daulat Pe Sheba..!
Ghurbat ke Shahar mein hisaab Dekhein Hum..!! Waah Waah Waah

Kya Kehne Sheba Ji..lajawaab!!!! Humari itni Haisiyat To nahi ke aapko Daad de sake Par Vaakai Aap Ke Lekhni Shandaar hai..

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«Reply #8 on: November 20, 2011, 09:54:15 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on September 08, 2011, 07:45:23 AM
"Rokhte Hai Qadam Jaane Se Maiqade mein
Ho Paaki Jismein Woh Sharaab Dekhein  Hum

Hai Haq Unka Bhi Meri Daulat Pe Sheba..!
Ghurbat ke Shahar mein hisaab Dekhein Hum..!! Waah Waah Waah

Kya Kehne Sheba Ji..lajawaab!!!! Humari itni Haisiyat To nahi ke aapko Daad de sake Par Vaakai Aap Ke Lekhni Shandaar hai..

Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


thank you khawaish ji
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«Reply #9 on: November 20, 2011, 10:03:43 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on August 23, 2011, 07:43:33 PM


            so jaaein ya koi khawaab dekhein hum..,
            mita dein khud ko ya azaab dekhein hum..,  Applause Applause

            ho qatl ameer ka aur shor bhi na machey,
            hai shauq ab kuch nayaab dekein hum,

            padh na sake aaina dil ki baatein ab,
            chehre pe apne aisa hijaab dekhein hum,  Applause Applause

            rokte hain qadam jaane se maiqade mein,
            ho paaki jismein wo sharaab dekhein hum,  Applause Applause

            hai haq unka bhi meri daulat pe sheba..!
            ghurbat ke shahar mein hisaab dekhein hum..!! Applause Applause

           

Bahut khoob sheba ji
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«Reply #10 on: November 20, 2011, 10:14:55 AM »
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Bahut khoob,Sheba ji.Keep it up !!
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«Reply #11 on: April 03, 2013, 03:10:15 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on November 20, 2011, 10:03:43 AM
Bahut khoob sheba ji


shukria......!
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on November 20, 2011, 10:14:55 AM
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Bahut khoob,Sheba ji.Keep it up !!

shukria icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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