DEDICATED TO ETERNAL GOD...............

by dolly on June 19, 2005, 03:50:11 AM
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Naa main akeli aayi,naa akeli jaaongi,
Hey ISHWAR! aapke saath aayi,aapke saath jaaongi.


Yeh mann hai sabke karmon ka darpan,
Yeh mann hi kiya hai aapko arpan.

Mushkilein kitni hi aayein,koi dukh nahi hai,
Inn mushkilon main hi to aapko yaad kiya hai.

BHAGWAN kitni khudgarz hoon main,
Fir bhi aapki beti hoon main.

Jab jab yeh mann roya hai,
Inn ashruon se aapke charno ko dhoya hai,
Par laga hai maano aapko khoya hai,

Jab yeh jeewan khud ko sambhal nahi paaya hai,
Aapne hi aakar iska maatha sehlaaya hai,
Aur har baar mera vishwaas badaya hai.

Aap ho iss duniya mein har insaan ke saath,
Iss murkh beti par bhi rakhan sadaa apna haath.

Moksh ki abhilasha nahi rakhta ye mann,
Jab tak naa bita doon aapke charnon mein saara jeewan.
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«Reply #1 on: June 19, 2005, 03:53:43 AM »
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Buhat khoob


it`s for you  Dolly for ur avatar i hope u like it

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v739/fakharenaveed/images.jpg


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«Reply #2 on: June 19, 2005, 03:57:23 AM »
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Thanx Naveed..for appreciation...n for avtar.......really nice........
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«Reply #3 on: June 19, 2005, 04:00:15 AM »
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Thanx Naveed..for appreciation...n for avtar.......really nice........
You Wel Come
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«Reply #4 on: June 19, 2005, 07:38:49 AM »
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Its simply beautiful Dolly.............!!! bohot hi achha likha hai.........!!!
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«Reply #5 on: June 19, 2005, 07:41:49 AM »
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Its simply beautiful Dolly.............!!! bohot hi achha likha hai.........!!!


Thank you......Talat Diiiiiiiiiii......... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: June 19, 2005, 07:42:10 PM »
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Aadi bana kar lazzat-e-aazaar ne mujhey
Gham ki khalish ko dil ki tamanna bana diya
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«Reply #7 on: June 20, 2005, 04:25:26 AM »
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Naa main akeli aayi,naa akeli jaaongi,
Hey ISHWAR! aapke saath aayi,aapke saath jaaongi.


Yeh mann hai sabke karmon ka darpan,
Yeh mann hi kiya hai aapko arpan.

Mushkilein kitni hi aayein,koi dukh nahi hai,
Inn mushkilon main hi to aapko yaad kiya hai.

BHAGWAN kitni khudgarz hoon main,
Fir bhi aapki beti hoon main.

Jab jab yeh mann roya hai,
Inn ashruon se aapke charno ko dhoya hai,
Par laga hai maano aapko khoya hai,

Jab yeh jeewan khud ko sambhal nahi paaya hai,
Aapne hi aakar iska maatha sehlaaya hai,
Aur har baar mera vishwaas badaya hai.

Aap ho iss duniya mein har insaan ke saath,
Iss murkh beti par bhi rakhan sadaa apna haath.

Moksh ki abhilasha nahi rakhta ye mann,
Jab tak naa bita doon aapke charnon mein saara jeewan.


gr8 dolly,jitni taareef ki jaaye kam hai,excelent work dear.
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«Reply #8 on: June 20, 2005, 05:05:05 AM »
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Ab mann ki judai na hogi bardast,

e mere mehboob ab to kuchh kar khas.

Meri har saans tujhe pukarati hai,

Fir bhi tum samajhte ho ise bakwaas.
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«Reply #9 on: June 20, 2005, 05:06:00 AM »
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Ab mann ki judai na hogi bardast,

e mere mehboob ab to kuchh kar khas.

Meri har saans tujhe pukarati hai,

Fir bhi tum samajhte ho ise bakwaas.
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«Reply #10 on: June 20, 2005, 05:16:22 AM »
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tere dil ki gahrai ne sagar ko sokh liya.

tere mann ki uchai ne parvat jhakjhor diya.

ab or kitna keher barsayegi.

keechad me reh k kitane kamal khilayegi.
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«Reply #11 on: June 20, 2005, 05:22:00 AM »
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akeli hi aayi thi , akeli hi jaogi

na kuchh le ke aayi thi, na kuchh le ke jaogi,

Ishwar ne bheja tha yudhha me , akeli hi ladi thi,

Akele hi karm kiya akele hi bhogogi.
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Quote from: "dolly"
Naa main akeli aayi,naa akeli jaaongi,
Hey ISHWAR! aapke saath aayi,aapke saath jaaongi.


Yeh mann hai sabke karmon ka darpan,
Yeh mann hi kiya hai aapko arpan.

Mushkilein kitni hi aayein,koi dukh nahi hai,
Inn mushkilon main hi to aapko yaad kiya hai.

BHAGWAN kitni khudgarz hoon main,
Fir bhi aapki beti hoon main.

Jab jab yeh mann roya hai,
Inn ashruon se aapke charno ko dhoya hai,
Par laga hai maano aapko khoya hai,

Jab yeh jeewan khud ko sambhal nahi paaya hai,
Aapne hi aakar iska maatha sehlaaya hai,
Aur har baar mera vishwaas badaya hai.

Aap ho iss duniya mein har insaan ke saath,
Iss murkh beti par bhi rakhan sadaa apna haath.

Moksh ki abhilasha nahi rakhta ye mann,
Jab tak naa bita doon aapke charnon mein saara jeewan.


gr8 dolly,jitni taareef ki jaaye kam hai,excelent work dear.
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dolly
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«Reply #12 on: June 20, 2005, 08:24:14 AM »
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Thank u Nidhi...thanx for appreciation......n nice one Naveed....n Rohit.............................
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«Reply #13 on: June 20, 2005, 09:28:57 AM »
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Naa main akeli aayi,naa akeli jaaongi,
Hey ISHWAR! aapke saath aayi,aapke saath jaaongi.


Yeh mann hai sabke karmon ka darpan,
Yeh mann hi kiya hai aapko arpan.

Mushkilein kitni hi aayein,koi dukh nahi hai,
Inn mushkilon main hi to aapko yaad kiya hai.

BHAGWAN kitni khudgarz hoon main,
Fir bhi aapki beti hoon main.

Jab jab yeh mann roya hai,
Inn ashruon se aapke charno ko dhoya hai,
Par laga hai maano aapko khoya hai,

Jab yeh jeewan khud ko sambhal nahi paaya hai,
Aapne hi aakar iska maatha sehlaaya hai,
Aur har baar mera vishwaas badaya hai.

Aap ho iss duniya mein har insaan ke saath,
Iss murkh beti par bhi rakhan sadaa apna haath.

Moksh ki abhilasha nahi rakhta ye mann,
Jab tak naa bita doon aapke charnon mein saara jeewan.


wah dolly bohot hi acha likha tumne, bohot hi pyara likha hai!!  :D
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«Reply #14 on: June 20, 2005, 02:55:18 PM »
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Thank u.....Meena sis.............................................. .......
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