Dedicated to Sleep Neend

by Ricky on May 05, 2008, 06:34:21 PM

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Ricky

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Few lines talking about the sleep.

Chalo so jayen,
Chalo kho jayen,
Bhool jayen Zindagi ki jaddhojahad,
Ankhen band kar,
Kuch derr k liye hi sahi,
Dooor dushwarion se,
Khwabon ki duniya mein,
Gum ho jayen,
Chalo So jayen
Chalo kho Jayen !!

I hope kuch zyada ya kam nahi !!


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Pooja

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Re: Dedicated to Sleep ~~Neend~~

«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2008, 06:41:08 PM »

Bahoot khoob Ricky..


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honeyrose

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Re: Dedicated to Sleep ~~Neend~~

«Reply #2 on: May 05, 2008, 06:42:15 PM »

Very nice Ricky ji bohat hi khoob likha hai.. Usual Smile


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syednaami

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Re: Dedicated to Sleep ~~Neend~~

«Reply #3 on: May 05, 2008, 11:18:54 PM »

Bas yahan par meri bhi yehi haalat hai,
Chalo so jaayen...


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Roja

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Re: Dedicated to Sleep ~~Neend~~

«Reply #4 on: May 06, 2008, 02:29:44 AM »

Quote from: Ricky on May 05, 2008, 06:34:21 PM

Few lines talking about the sleep.

I hope kuch zyada ya kam nahi !!

Bahut accha likha hai Ricky ji. toda zyada matlab 2/3 lines bada sakte the na.

Sapno main tum aa jayen
toda waqt pyar main kho jayen
chalo so jayen
aankhein band karke
tumhare yaadon me kho jayen..


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syednaami

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Re: Dedicated to Sleep ~~Neend~~

«Reply #5 on: May 06, 2008, 07:08:33 AM »

Quote from: Roja on May 06, 2008, 02:29:44 AM

Bahut accha likha hai Ricky ji. toda zyada matlab 2/3 lines bada sakte the na.

Sapno main tum aa jayen
toda waqt pyar main kho jayen
chalo so jayen
aankhein band karke
tumhare yaadon me kho jayen..

Oh, but not in my fate this sort of sleep.
Short but too good.
Bravo!!


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Ricky

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Re: Dedicated to Sleep ~~Neend~~

«Reply #6 on: May 06, 2008, 10:31:13 AM »

Thankyou Pooja and Honeyrose.

Thankyou Roja, well, I thought its better to be small, let people read it in no time and get reminded about importance of sleep.

Thankyou Syednami ji for your kind words !


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Roja

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Re: Dedicated to Sleep ~~Neend~~

«Reply #7 on: May 07, 2008, 08:21:19 AM »

Quote from: syednaami on May 06, 2008, 07:08:33 AM

Oh, but not in my fate this sort of sleep.
Short but too good.
Bravo!!

Arre koshish karoge to you will surely have a sound romantic sleep...

I think Mr Ricky just wanted us to read and go for a sound sleep without any dreams...hehehe


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Roja

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Re: Dedicated to Sleep ~~Neend~~

«Reply #8 on: May 07, 2008, 08:27:40 AM »

Quote from: Ricky on May 06, 2008, 10:31:13 AM

Thankyou Roja, well, I thought its better to be small, let people read it in no time and get reminded about importance of sleep.

Welcome Mr Ricky..... but i think each and every one should sleep with
some romanctic dreams... so that the mind will be fresh next day...
Dont get upset..... It is purely my view..


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syednaami

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Re: Dedicated to Sleep ~~Neend~~

«Reply #9 on: May 07, 2008, 10:48:25 AM »

Quote from: Roja on May 07, 2008, 08:21:19 AM

Arre koshish karoge to you will surely have a sound romantic sleep...

I think Mr Ricky just wanted us to read and go for a sound sleep without any dreams...hehehe

Jab romance man men ho to neend to yunhi ud jayige na, aur dreams to khuli aankh dekhte rahna padta hai phir.