DEE SHARAR KO ACHAANAK HAWAA..........SAINI

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Dee sharar ko achaanak hawaa.
Aur khud ho gayaa laapataa.

Kaun saa esaa rastaa bachaa.
Jis pe ghar ek bhee n jalaa.

Ehmiyat vo samajhte naheeN.
Kaisaa rishtaa hai kaisee vafaa.

Khauf hee khauf har simt hai.
Kaash ho koi mushkil kushaa.

Odh kar sab libaas-e-dharam.
Baantne chal pade haiN khudaa.

Laut kar aayegaa phir yaheeN.
Aap chun len koi raastaa.

Amn kee baat ‘saini’ kare.
Kab shuru ho magar silsilaa.

Dr.Surendra Saini


दी शरर को अचानक हवा ।
और ख़ुद हो गया लापता ॥

कौन सा एसा रस्ता बचा ।
जिस पे घर एक भी न जला ॥

एहमियत वो समझते नहीं ।
कैसा रिश्ता है कैसी वफ़ा ॥

ख़ौफ़ ही ख़ौफ़ हर सिम्त है ।
काश हो कोई मुश्किल कुशा ॥

ओढ़ कर सब लिबास-ए -धरम ।  
बांटने चल पड़े हैं ख़ुदा ॥

लौट कर आयेगा फिर यहीं ।
आप चुन लें कोई रास्ता ॥

अम्न की बात 'सैनी' करे ।
कब शुरू हो मगर सिलसिला ॥

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी            
 
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«Reply #1 on: October 15, 2013, 06:42:29 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on October 15, 2013, 06:16:40 PM
Dee sharar ko achaanak hawaa.
Aur khud ho gayaa laapataa.

Kaun saa esaa rastaa bachaa.
Jis pe ghar ek bhee n jalaa.

Ehmiyat vo samajhte naheeN.
Kaisaa rishtaa hai kaisee vafaa.

Khauf hee khauf har simt hai.
Kaash ho koi mushkil kushaa.

Odh kar sab libaas-e-dharam.
Baantne chal pade haiN khudaa.

Laut kar aayegaa phir yaheeN.
Aap chun len koi raastaa.

Amn kee baat ‘saini’ kare.
Kab shuru ho magar silsilaa.

Dr.Surendra Saini


दी शरर को अचानक हवा ।
और ख़ुद हो गया लापता ॥

कौन सा एसा रस्ता बचा ।
जिस पे घर एक भी न जला ॥

एहमियत वो समझते नहीं ।
कैसा रिश्ता है कैसी वफ़ा ॥

ख़ौफ़ ही ख़ौफ़ हर सिम्त है ।
काश हो कोई मुश्किल कुशा ॥

ओढ़ कर सब लिबास-ए -धरम । 
बांटने चल पड़े हैं ख़ुदा ॥

लौट कर आयेगा फिर यहीं ।
आप चुन लें कोई रास्ता ॥

अम्न की बात 'सैनी' करे ।
कब शुरू हो मगर सिलसिला ॥

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी             
 


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Waah waah waah.. behad khoooooooooob.. bahut hi achchi peshkash saini sir.. dil se hazaron daad qubool kijiye..
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«Reply #4 on: October 15, 2013, 08:12:32 PM »
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"एहमियत वो समझते नहीं ।
 कैसा रिश्ता है कैसी वफ़ा ॥"

Waaaaah Saini Sahib.....bahut khoob...mubaarak baad qubool farmaayen....Raqeeb
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«Reply #5 on: October 15, 2013, 08:14:52 PM »
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दी शरर को अचानक हवा ।
और ख़ुद हो गया लापता ॥

कौन सा एसा रस्ता बचा ।
जिस पे घर एक भी न जला ॥

एहमियत वो समझते नहीं ।
कैसा रिश्ता है कैसी वफ़ा ॥

ख़ौफ़ ही ख़ौफ़ हर सिम्त है ।
काश हो कोई मुश्किल कुशा ॥

Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Saini sir,
Bahut umdaa khyalon se labrej ghazal kahi hai.Really beautiful.
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waaahhh Saini saahab.. waaahhhh
purkhulooss ghazal hui, bahot nazzauk se ehsaason se saraabor hai aapki ye ghazal. ise hamaara salaam....

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waah waah sir bahut hi umda, matla zordaar raha, dheroN daad aur ek Rau meri taraf se.
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«Reply #9 on: October 15, 2013, 10:49:17 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on October 15, 2013, 06:16:40 PM
Dee sharar ko achaanak hawaa.
Aur khud ho gayaa laapataa.

Kaun saa esaa rastaa bachaa.
Jis pe ghar ek bhee n jalaa.

Ehmiyat vo samajhte naheeN.
Kaisaa rishtaa hai kaisee vafaa.

Khauf hee khauf har simt hai.
Kaash ho koi mushkil kushaa.

Odh kar sab libaas-e-dharam.
Baantne chal pade haiN khudaa.

Laut kar aayegaa phir yaheeN.
Aap chun len koi raastaa.

Amn kee baat ‘saini’ kare.
Kab shuru ho magar silsilaa.

Dr.Surendra Saini


दी शरर को अचानक हवा ।
और ख़ुद हो गया लापता ॥

कौन सा एसा रस्ता बचा ।
जिस पे घर एक भी न जला ॥

एहमियत वो समझते नहीं ।
कैसा रिश्ता है कैसी वफ़ा ॥

ख़ौफ़ ही ख़ौफ़ हर सिम्त है ।
काश हो कोई मुश्किल कुशा ॥

ओढ़ कर सब लिबास-ए -धरम । 
बांटने चल पड़े हैं ख़ुदा ॥

लौट कर आयेगा फिर यहीं ।
आप चुन लें कोई रास्ता ॥

अम्न की बात 'सैनी' करे ।
कब शुरू हो मगर सिलसिला ॥

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी             
 
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Ehmiyat vo samajhte naheeN.
Kaisaa rishtaa hai kaisee vafaa.

Bahut khoob Sir
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ओढ़ कर सब लिबास-ए -धरम । 
बांटने चल पड़े हैं ख़ुदा ॥

bahut achha sher hai , saini saheb.
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Waah sirjee maza aa gaya padh ke..

Kya behatareen likha hai..

Behad umda rahi ye ghazal..

Dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #13 on: October 16, 2013, 04:24:18 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on October 15, 2013, 06:16:40 PM
Dee sharar ko achaanak hawaa.
Aur khud ho gayaa laapataa.
ye tumhaari harkat hai aag lagaa kar bhaag jaate ho aur khaas taur se aurato.n ke beech Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Kaun saa esaa rastaa bachaa.
Jis pe ghar ek bhee n jalaa.
apni kaarastaani bayaa kar rahe ho. her ghar mein ghusne ki tumhaari aadat ne saare mohaale ko hi jalaa dala hai BangHead BangHead BangHead BangHead BangHead BangHead
Ehmiyat vo samajhte naheeN.
Kaisaa rishtaa hai kaisee vafaa.
paise ki baat karo paise ki roti oosolon se nahin pakti pet mohabbat aur wafa se nahin bharta icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch
Khauf hee khauf har simt hai.
Kaash ho koi mushkil kushaa.
ye musibat jo hai azaab ki shakal mein ye aaj ke insaano.n ke apne kirdaar ka phall hai ji Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
Odh kar sab libaas-e-dharam.
Baantne chal pade haiN khudaa.
mazahab ki politics bahut buri hai  tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed
Laut kar aayegaa phir yaheeN.
Aap chun len koi raastaa.
bade jaadugar ho ji her raaste ko apni hi or kheen liya hai wah bhai wah icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Amn kee baat ‘saini’ kare.
Kab shuru ho magar silsilaa.
baat se nahin karne se hota hai ji icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Dr.Surendra Saini


दी शरर को अचानक हवा ।
और ख़ुद हो गया लापता ॥

कौन सा एसा रस्ता बचा ।
जिस पे घर एक भी न जला ॥

एहमियत वो समझते नहीं ।
कैसा रिश्ता है कैसी वफ़ा ॥

ख़ौफ़ ही ख़ौफ़ हर सिम्त है ।
काश हो कोई मुश्किल कुशा ॥

ओढ़ कर सब लिबास-ए -धरम ।  
बांटने चल पड़े हैं ख़ुदा ॥

लौट कर आयेगा फिर यहीं ।
आप चुन लें कोई रास्ता ॥

अम्न की बात 'सैनी' करे ।
कब शुरू हो मगर सिलसिला ॥

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी            
 

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