deewar baat karti hai

by mohsin akhter on July 13, 2010, 09:06:26 AM
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Dosto wese to bahut waqt aya hoon magar phir bhi ummeed hai ki aap log mujhe bhoole nahi honge

ek choti si peshkash aapke liye

MERE GHAR KI
EK DEEWAR MUJHSE BAAT KARTI HAI
JAB KOI NAHI HOTA
WO AKSAR MUJHSE MULAKAT KARTI HAI
MERE GHAR KI
EK DEEWAR MUJHSE BAAT KARTI HAI

LOG PATHAR KAHTE HAI USE
MAA KE ANCHAL KI TARAH
WO DEEWAR MUJHE MAHFOOJ KARTI HAI
MERE GHAR KI
EK DEEWAR MUJHSE BAAT KARTI HAI

JAB BHI MAN UDAS HOTA HAI
JAB KOI AAS PASS NAHI HOTA HAI
MERE SAR KA SAYA BAN
WO MERE SAR PAR HATH RAKHTI HAI
MERE GHAR KI
EK DEEWAR MUJHSE BAAT KARTI HAI
JAB KOI NAHI HOTA
WO AKSAR MUJHSE MULAKAT KARTI HAI
MERE GHAR KI
EK DEEWAR MUJHSE BAAT KARTI HAI
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«Reply #1 on: July 13, 2010, 09:31:33 AM »
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HAAN HAR GHAR ME EK HISSA AISA HOTA HAI
JAHAN DIL AUR AATAMA KO SUKUN HOTA HAI
KUCH AISE LAMHEN AATE HAIN ZINDAGI ME
JAB INHI PATHARON SE SAAJAN JAISA PYAAR MILTA HAI
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«Reply #2 on: July 13, 2010, 10:01:09 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Mohsin ji..

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Par Yeh shayari Misc Poetry Mein Honi Chahiye..Isliye Move Kar raha hoon
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«Reply #3 on: July 13, 2010, 10:25:21 AM »
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good one mohsin ji
bahut hi umda khayalat hai aap ke
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«Reply #4 on: July 14, 2010, 04:39:41 AM »
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aap sab ka bahut bahut sukriya jo aap logo ne mera kalam padh kar meri itni hosla afjai ki

again thanks
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«Reply #5 on: July 14, 2010, 06:26:53 AM »
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Waah Mohsin ji... kya baat hai... bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: July 14, 2010, 08:33:56 AM »
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BAHUT HI BEHTAREEN SOCH KI GAWAAH HAI AAP KI YE TAKHLEEQ.
SACH HI HAI HUMARE SUKH DUKH ,AABADI OR BARBAADI KI MOUN GAWAAHI DETI HAIN YE DEEWARE.......
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«Reply #7 on: July 14, 2010, 09:33:32 AM »
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BAHUT BAHUT SUKRIYA MAMTA JI

DEEWAR HUMARI SABSE JYADA KAREEB HOTI HAI JO HUMARE GUM MAIN KHUSHI MAIN HUMARA SATH DETI HAI MAGAR HUM SHAYAD GUM MAIN TO USE YAAD KARKE USKE SAYE MAIN SO JATE HAIN MAGAR JAB BHI KHUSHI MILTI HAI TO USI DEEWAR KO TANHA CHOD JATE HAI.
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«Reply #8 on: July 14, 2010, 05:06:43 PM »
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AISA NAHI HAI MOHSIN JEEVAN KE BAHUT SE ROOMANI PALON KI DHADKAN BHI INHI ME QAID HAI. KILKARIYON OR KAHKAHE BHI INHI ME SAMAYE HUE HAIN.........
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«Reply #9 on: July 15, 2010, 10:31:14 AM »
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aapka apna andaze bayan hai merea apna

aap apni jagah sahi hai

chaliye sayari ke silsike ko age badate hai

ULJHI HUI MERI ZINDAGI KO SULJHA NA SAKA
DARD KAHAN HOTA HAI KISI KO BATA NA SAKA
ANKH NAM HO RAHI HAI DIL BHI YE RO RAHA HAI
MAGAR MAIN APNI ANKHON SE EK ANSU GIRA NA SAKA

MERE GHAR KI RAH MAIN RAKHE PATHAR NE ROKA RASTA MERA
MAIN ITNA KAMJOR THA KI US PATHAR KO HILA NA SAKA
MAIN ULJHA HI FAKAT APNE HI MASAILON MAIN
MERE APNO KE BEECH KA FASLA MAIN MITA NA SAKA

TAKLEEF ITNI SI THI MAIN JANTA THA GALTI MERI
MAGAR MERE WAZOOD KO MAIN KABHI JHUKA NA SAKA
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«Reply #10 on: July 16, 2010, 06:10:50 AM »
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mohsin ji....aapki sono hi rchnayen behad prbhav-shali hain...in behtreen rachnaon ke liye dad kabool karen
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«Reply #11 on: July 16, 2010, 11:57:52 AM »
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dhanyawad bekarar ji

jo aapko humari kruti itni pasand ayi
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