dekh maula aaj main tere dar par aa gaya

by salil2002 on September 19, 2009, 04:24:27 AM
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ek mujrim kii kahaani jo maula k paas aaya hai aapne aakhiri waqt main


dekh maula aaj main tere dar par aa gaya
tera bachcha tujhse milne door kitna aa gaya
kho gaya main gunaho kii andheri raah par
dekh mere maula ab main roshni main aa gaya

thak gaya hoon main bahut meri palkon ko aaraam de
lag raha hai dar mujhe kaahin koi na ilzaam de
hai nahin ab jaan bhi mujhme tu aa kar thaam le
mere dil kii dhadkano, de de bas aaraam thay

dekh maula tera banda tujhse kucch hai keh raha
dil main jo bhi mail tha, woh ashqon main hai beh raha
dekh khanjar haath ka ab ban k gul gulshan hua
aaja maula ab toh aaja, door hai kyun reh raha

ab tak na aaya tu toh maula,dekh main toh aa gaya
tere dar par e MUHAMMed sar jhukaane aa gaya
ab gale se laga le mujhko,ab toh jaane na de mujhko
phir na kehna tu mujhe kyun haath khanjar aa gaya
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«Reply #1 on: September 19, 2009, 04:26:49 AM »
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Waah Waah Bahoot Khoob saahil !

Ak bande ki fariyaad ko Allah Tak pahunchane ka aapka yea andaaz bahoot khoob hai !
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salil2002
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«Reply #2 on: September 19, 2009, 11:11:49 AM »
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thanks a lot sophi dear
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #3 on: September 19, 2009, 11:15:31 AM »
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Wah Saahil ji , :icon_salut:kamaal ke likhte ho,great creation,excellent. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: September 19, 2009, 12:34:51 PM »
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SAHILJI waqt jab aata hai..jalim se jalim aadmi bhi khuda ki sharan mai chala aata hai...nice words... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

ek mujrim kii kahaani jo maula k paas aaya hai aapne aakhiri waqt main


dekh maula aaj main tere dar par aa gaya
tera bachcha tujhse milne door kitna aa gaya
kho gaya main gunaho kii andheri raah par
dekh mere maula ab main roshni main aa gaya

thak gaya hoon main bahut meri palkon ko aaraam de
lag raha hai dar mujhe kaahin koi na ilzaam de
hai nahin ab jaan bhi mujhme tu aa kar thaam le
mere dil kii dhadkano, de de bas aaraam thay

dekh maula tera banda tujhse kucch hai keh raha
dil main jo bhi mail tha, woh ashqon main hai beh raha
dekh khanjar haath ka ab ban k gul gulshan hua
aaja maula ab toh aaja, door hai kyun reh raha

ab tak na aaya tu toh maula,dekh main toh aa gaya
tere dar par e MUHAMMed sar jhukaane aa gaya
ab gale se laga le mujhko,ab toh jaane na de mujhko
phir na kehna tu mujhe kyun haath khanjar aa gaya
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«Reply #5 on: September 19, 2009, 01:03:09 PM »
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Bahoot khoob Saahil ji....hamesha ki tarah lajwaab....har baar aap khuch naya hi likhte hai.....Bahut bahut accha likha aapne Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: September 19, 2009, 01:36:00 PM »
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Wah Saahil ji , :icon_salut:kamaal ke likhte ho,great creation,excellent. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
shukriya madhu dear
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«Reply #7 on: September 19, 2009, 07:00:41 PM »
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bahoot khoob saahil bro
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salil2002
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«Reply #8 on: September 20, 2009, 06:15:49 AM »
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SAHILJI waqt jab aata hai..jalim se jalim aadmi bhi khuda ki sharan mai chala aata hai...nice words... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut shukriya smardia ji
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«Reply #9 on: September 20, 2009, 06:16:47 AM »
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Bahoot khoob Saahil ji....hamesha ki tarah lajwaab....har baar aap khuch naya hi likhte hai.....Bahut bahut accha likha aapne Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahoot khoob saahil bro
bahut bahut shukriya pooji ji and pooja di
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«Reply #10 on: September 20, 2009, 06:23:45 AM »
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Saahil bhaa'ii:

Aadaab!

aapne apnii koShiSh ke saath pooraa iNsaaf kiyaa haii! bahot hi Khoob aNdaaz-e-bayaa.n! liKhate raheN yuuNhi! KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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«Reply #11 on: September 20, 2009, 04:35:14 PM »
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Saahil Bhaiiiiiii... Aapme Yeh Khoobi hai ki aap Jis Bhi Topic Par Likhte Hain.. Usme Khud Ko Dhaal kar Mehsoos Karte Hain.. aur Unhi Ehasaason Ko aur Jazzbaaton Ko Kaagaz Par bikher Dete Hain...!! Isliye aapki Har Rachna Succhaai se Bhari Hoti hai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob dost.. Kisi Kisi Ko Upar wala yeh Hunar Bakhshta Hai..!! Applause Applause

Daad Kubool karen is Dost Ki..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #12 on: September 23, 2009, 06:22:51 AM »
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Saahil bhaa'ii:

Aadaab!

aapne apnii koShiSh ke saath pooraa iNsaaf kiyaa haii! bahot hi Khoob aNdaaz-e-bayaa.n! liKhate raheN yuuNhi! KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval

shukriya dhaval bhai
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«Reply #13 on: September 23, 2009, 06:24:53 AM »
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Saahil Bhaiiiiiii... Aapme Yeh Khoobi hai ki aap Jis Bhi Topic Par Likhte Hain.. Usme Khud Ko Dhaal kar Mehsoos Karte Hain.. aur Unhi Ehasaason Ko aur Jazzbaaton Ko Kaagaz Par bikher Dete Hain...!! Isliye aapki Har Rachna Succhaai se Bhari Hoti hai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob dost.. Kisi Kisi Ko Upar wala yeh Hunar Bakhshta Hai..!! Applause Applause

Daad Kubool karen is Dost Ki..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**
bahut bahut shukriya mann bhai
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«Reply #14 on: October 01, 2009, 07:43:49 AM »
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bahut khoob sahil ji..... Clapping Smiley
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