dekhaa........(K_A)

by khamosh_aawaaz on September 08, 2011, 09:38:20 AM

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khamosh_aawaaz

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   mustaqbil pe maa'zi ka asar dekha....!
   tabdeel hotaa apnaa shahar dekha....!!

   rah kar saat bhi rootha raha umr bhar,
   zindagi mein humne aisa humsafar dekha,

   mitaa dey sard aanko.n ki taap se jo,
   nigaah mein uski aisa qahar dekha,

   takti rahi uss raah ko wo boodhi aankein.
   ek mehboob mein aisa sabr dekha,

   hai mokhalif per ehtraam bahut kartaa khamosh..!
   jahaan mein hamne aisa ek bashar dekha...!


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ParwaaZ

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Re: dekhaa........(K_A)

«Reply #1 on: September 08, 2011, 11:20:43 AM »

Khamosh Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab aapke Takhallus ko behad pur asar si kavish
hai " Dekha "

Achche ahsaas O khayaal ko bayaaN kiye hai aapne ..
Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe daad ...

Par Khabar " kafiye dekha maiN nahi dekhi meiN adaa
hoNga aisa hume lagta hai...

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye
Khuda Hafez


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: dekhaa........(K_A)

«Reply #2 on: September 10, 2011, 07:46:04 AM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 08, 2011, 11:20:43 AM

parwaaz sb aap ne duroost kaha . iss sher mein mujhe bhi shak tha ki dekhi hi hoga. is liye maine sher hi tabdil kar diya.thanx for the valuable comment Usual Smile


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khujli

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Re: dekhaa........(K_A)

«Reply #3 on: September 13, 2011, 07:53:58 AM »


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: dekhaa........(K_A)

«Reply #4 on: September 26, 2011, 07:52:02 AM »

Quote from: qalb on September 13, 2011, 07:53:58 AM

thanx


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marhoom bahayaat

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Re: dekhaa........(K_A)

«Reply #5 on: October 03, 2011, 12:09:08 PM »

Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on September 08, 2011, 09:38:20 AM

mustaqbil pe maa'zi ka asar dekha....!
tabdeel hotaa apnaa shahar dekha....!!

rah kar saat bhi rootha raha umr bhar,
zindagi mein humne aisa humsafar dekha,

mitaa dey sard aanko.n ki taap se jo,
nigaah mein uski aisa qahar dekha,

takti rahi uss raah ko wo boodhi aankein.
ek mehboob mein aisa sabr dekha,

hai mokhalif per ehtraam bahut kartaa khamosh..!
jahaan mein hamne aisa ek bashar dekha...!

acha hai