------ /// Desh Mera Mahaan /// -----

by klaskar on August 15, 2010, 08:04:41 AM
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Ye poem maine bahut din pehle likha tha... aaj Independence Day ke awsar par fir se post kar raha hoon....!!!

bachpan me kabhi suna tha ki mera bharat mahaan hai,
aajkal koi ye nahi kehta ki sach mein desh mahaan hai,

bhool k jung san sattawan ki bhool gaye sab balidaan hai,
dharm k naam pe baant k aaj ek bharat ek pakistan hai,
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kal tak ye suna tha ki hamara ek hi hindustan hai,
aaj usi ke tukde hoke koi punjab koi rajasthan hai,

aaj dharm k naam pe uth raha har taraf toofaan hai,
koi hai hindu, koi hai sikh, koi hota musalman hai,

koi bible, koi bhagwat geeta , kisi ka naam quraan hai,
kehne ko sab kitaaben hain par sabka alag alag naam hai,

dharam k naam pe bhed bhaw q karta aaj insaan hai,
ek gagan k niche hi rehte, sabka ek bhagwaan hai,

insaano k khoon ka pyaasa ban gaya aaj insaan hai,
kal tak jisko nar kehte the aaj bana haiwaan hai,

kal tak naari maata thi, aaj karte uska apmaan hain,
zulm-o-sitam wo seh nahi paati, deti wo apne praan hai,

takshashila naalanda tha kal, aaj yahaan agyaan hai,
pita ki jama punji ko lutana aaj bachcho ki shaan hai,

chhote me kabhi suna tha humne maata pita bhagwaan hain,
aaj vriddhashram me rakhte hain unko aise to santaan hain,

bin vyaahe hi maa ban jaati aaj ki naari mahaan hai,
pyaar k naam pe chhal karna aaj k yuva ki pehchaan hai,

kahin pe chori, kahin pe loot, kahin pe qatl-e-aam hai,
aasmaan me khauff k baadal subah se lekar shaam hai,

kahin pe bhasha, kahin pe jaati, kahin dharm k naam hai,
aaj insaano k zulm ka shikaar hota sirf insaan hai,

kabhi kabhi to sochta hoon main ki badal gaya insaan hai,
itni nafrat, itna vinaash, usi ka to pramaan hai,

aaj nafraton ki aag me dekho jal raha hindustaan hai,
aap hi kaho main kaise kahun ki mera desh mahaan hai...


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«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2010, 08:12:14 AM »
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Its simply Awesome ! bahoot bahoot khoob likha hai aapne Kapil ji,.. Bahoot Bahoot Umda peshkas ...

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«Reply #2 on: August 15, 2010, 08:21:20 AM »
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chhaahe jo bhi ho klaskar ji...chahe jitne dange fasaad...bhrashtachaar ..nafrat...aatank ho....bhaarat me.

lekin....

jitna pyaar aur sanskaar bhaarat me hai utna kahin bhi nahin
jo pyaar bharatwasiyon k bich hai wo kahin bhi nahin...
jitni izzat yahan k bachche apne maa baap ki karte hain utni khain k nahin...

hum sab buri batein to yaad rakhte hain lekin achchi bhul jate hain...
yaad rakho india ki ahchcai aur use failoa jhaan me...
fir log bhi kahenge
k apna dekh mahaan hai....haan hamara bharat mahaan hai....
HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY
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«Reply #3 on: August 15, 2010, 09:55:22 AM »
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main aapka dil se shukriyaa adaa karta hoon Divya ji... bahut bahut shukriya...!!!

Quote from: Sophi on August 15, 2010, 08:12:14 AM
Its simply Awesome ! bahoot bahoot khoob likha hai aapne Kapil ji,.. Bahoot Bahoot Umda peshkas ...

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«Reply #4 on: August 15, 2010, 09:56:29 AM »
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Kasak ji.....

mujhe bhi apne desh se mohabbat hai,
main bhi iski khushhaali aur gungaan chaahta hoon,
main bhi apne desh ka naam poori duniya me sabse aage chaahta hoon,
main ye nahi kehta ki mere desh me sirf buraaiyaan hi hai,
par main apne desh ko saari buraaiyon se azaad chaahta hoon,

aaj mere desh ki azaadi ka chausathwaa saal hai,
par desh me ab bhi bhookmari se bura haal hai,
kahin koi karorpati hai to kahin koi kangaal hai,
kahin bhrashtachaar hai to kahin sab golmaal hai,
agar main bhi aankhen band kar lun to desh ka bhala kaise hoga,
agar koi kisi ki burai batayega nahi to uska sudhaar kaise hoga,

main ye nahi kehta ki mera desha bahut kharaab hai,
par kuch to kamiyaan hain yahan ke logo me aaj bhi,
agar meri ye kavita padhke kuch log sudhar jaaye,
to aap hi kaho Kasak ji isme kya kharaabi hai,
sach kahun to mujhe bhi mere desh se mohabbat hai,
main bhi dil se kehta hoon...MERA BHAARAT MAHAAN HAI...!!!

HAPPY 63rd INDEPENDENCE DAY OF INDIA....!!!
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«Reply #5 on: August 15, 2010, 10:01:59 AM »
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superbbbbbbbbb......

ab lag raha hai k aapne kaha hai....
negative kahiye par positive ka touch dekar...
kadwa sach agar mithe pyar me lapetke diya jaye to hi asar karta hai......

aapki ye kahi hui batein hamesha yaad rahengi mujhe......
its beautiful......
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«Reply #6 on: August 15, 2010, 10:07:28 AM »
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ji shukriya devi ji... mai kabhi apne desh ko bura nahi keh sakta .... achcha laga jaanke ki aapko hamaari baat achchi lagi aur sundar bhi lagi... thanx again...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: August 15, 2010, 01:15:27 PM »
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bahut bahut Khoob Kapil Ji..

Aapki iss peshaksh mein Mujhe Imaandari Nazar Aayi..Theek Hai Hum sab Bharat Desh Ke vaasi Hai,Agar Hum sab Bharat Ko Apna Desh Maante hai To iski Achaiyan Bhi Humari Hai Aur Iski Buraiyan Bhi Humari hai..Main Jaha Tak maanta Hoon Iss Desh Mein Agar Achaiyan Gini jaaye to shayad hum likh-likh kar thak jaayenge par achiyan khatam nahi hogi..

Aur Yeh jo buraiyan Hai Yeh Desh ki Nahi,Bharat desh Apne Aap mein Bahut mahaan Hai,par jin haathon Mein Hum Sab yeh Desh saumpte Hai Unhe Pehle Sudharna Hoga..Kehte hai Naa.."Nal Chaahe Kitna Bhi Saaf Kyon Naa Ho Agar Paani Ki Tankee Hi Gandi Ho to pani maila Hi Aayega.. Aap Mera Ishaara Samaj gaye Honge..

Happy Independence Day To All!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: August 15, 2010, 06:58:23 PM »
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Shukriyaa Khwaish ji...!!! Ji main aapka ishaara bilkul achchi tarha samajh paa raha hoon...!!!
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«Reply #9 on: August 15, 2010, 07:08:17 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 15, 2010, 01:15:27 PM
bahut bahut Khoob Kapil Ji..

Aapki iss peshaksh mein Mujhe Imaandari Nazar Aayi..Theek Hai Hum sab Bharat Desh Ke vaasi Hai,Agar Hum sab Bharat Ko Apna Desh Maante hai To iski Achaiyan Bhi Humari Hai Aur Iski Buraiyan Bhi Humari hai..Main Jaha Tak maanta Hoon Iss Desh Mein Agar Achaiyan Gini jaaye to shayad hum likh-likh kar thak jaayenge par achiyan khatam nahi hogi..

Aur Yeh jo buraiyan Hai Yeh Desh ki Nahi,Bharat desh Apne Aap mein Bahut mahaan Hai,par jin haathon Mein Hum Sab yeh Desh saumpte Hai Unhe Pehle Sudharna Hoga..Kehte hai Naa.."Nal Chaahe Kitna Bhi Saaf Kyon Naa Ho Agar Paani Ki Tankee Hi Gandi Ho to pani maila Hi Aayega.. Aap Mera Ishaara Samaj gaye Honge..

Happy Independence Day To All!!!!!

samjhdar log wakai me kaafi samjhdari ki batein karte ahin...

khwaish ji aap sab keh bhi gaye aur kuch kaha bhi nahin......

kaash hume bhi aise kehna aata.....
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«Reply #10 on: August 15, 2010, 08:10:02 PM »
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Waah Janab Wah.... !

Bus yehi kah sakta huN ek ek khayaal ko soch samajh ker kaha hai aapne...... Daad kabool kijiye janab

Kuch hum bhi araz karte hai......

KahiN izzat to kahiN imaan bikta hai
YahaaN har tarha ka samaan bikta hai

Mere muluk ki tehzeeb pe kurbaan jauN
MehmaaN nawazi ke liye mezbaan bikta hai


Likhate rhaiye Khush rahiye
Khuda hafez........
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«Reply #11 on: August 15, 2010, 08:12:27 PM »
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Main aapka tahe dil se shukriyaa karta hoon Parwaz ji jo aapne hamari is rachna ko apna waqt diya, padha aur pasand kiya... bahut bahut shukriya janaab.... aur aapke lekhni ka bhi jawaab nahi... bahut khoobsurat shabdon me aapne haqeeqat bayaan kiya hai... bahut khoob...!!!

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Waah Janab Wah.... !

Bus yehi kah sakta huN ek ek khayaal ko soch samajh ker kaha hai aapne...... Daad kabool kijiye janab

Kuch hum bhi araz karte hai......

KahiN izzat to kahiN imaan bikta hai
YahaaN har tarha ka samaan bikta hai

Mere muluk ki tehzeeb pe kurbaan jauN
MehmaaN nawazi ke liye mezbaan bikta hai


Likhate rhaiye Khush rahiye
Khuda hafez........
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