dhalti huyi shaam se chand nazar aata hai dekho.. charan..

by lovely_charan on November 28, 2012, 11:31:42 AM
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yeh waqt ki kahaani hai.. kuch yun humein sunani hai..
ki yaad mein kisiki gum rehte hain aksar..
koi kehta hai moti toh koi kehta hai ki aankhon mein pani hai..
Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile

kab subah ki garmi se pighalti huyi bahaar aa gayi..
kab roshni se jhilmil sitaron ki bauchaar aa gayi..
kuch kehna tha waqt ko humse ya kuch shikayat hamari thi kahein..
kab dhundhli si subah guzari aur suhani si shaam aa gayi..

kaise dil ki baaton mein nasha sa chhaa jata hai dekho..
badhte hain raahon mein toh raaste ka mazaa aata hai dekho..
kitni aasani se lamhon ne tarakki kar li kya bolun..
dhalti huyi shaam se chand nazar aata hai dekho..

is chand ki chandni mein kuch pal hamare bhi hain..
dil ki baaton se khilte huye vo kamal hamare bhi hain..
kabhi udhti thi titliyan jin phoolon pe kya kahiye..
un titliyon ke peeche kahin yaadon ke mahal hamare bhi hain..
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«Reply #1 on: November 28, 2012, 11:49:25 AM »
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Quote from: lovely_charan on November 28, 2012, 11:31:42 AM
yeh waqt ki kahaani hai.. kuch yun humein sunani hai..
ki yaad mein kisiki gum rehte hain aksar..
koi kehta hai moti toh koi kehta hai ki aankhon mein pani hai..
Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile

kab subah ki garmi se pighalti huyi bahaar aa gayi..
kab roshni se jhilmil sitaron ki bauchaar aa gayi..
kuch kehna tha waqt ko humse ya kuch shikayat hamari thi kahein..
kab dhundhli si subah guzari aur suhani si shaam aa gayi..

kaise dil ki baaton mein nasha sa chhaa jata hai dekho..
badhte hain raahon mein toh raaste ka mazaa aata hai dekho..
kitni aasani se lamhon ne tarakki kar li kya bolun..
dhalti huyi shaam se chand nazar aata hai dekho..

is chand ki chandni mein kuch pal hamare bhi hain..
dil ki baaton se khilte huye vo kamal hamare bhi hain..
kabhi udhti thi titliyan jin phoolon pe kya kahiye..
un titliyon ke peeche kahin yaadon ke mahal hamare bhi hain..

bohut khoob lovely ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #2 on: November 28, 2012, 11:52:09 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: November 28, 2012, 12:05:59 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on November 28, 2012, 11:49:25 AM
bohut khoob lovely ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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thanks a lot aqsh jee.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: November 28, 2012, 12:55:29 PM »
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waaahhhhhh kya mast mast poem hai charan ji .. bht badhia
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on November 28, 2012, 12:55:29 PM
waaahhhhhh kya mast mast poem hai charan ji .. bht badhia
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«Reply #6 on: November 28, 2012, 01:03:17 PM »
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waah boht khub charan ji
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thank u sahil ji Usual Smile
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wah...kya baat hai
bahut khoob Charan jee
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Quote from: lovely_charan on November 28, 2012, 11:31:42 AM
yeh waqt ki kahaani hai.. kuch yun humein sunani hai..
ki yaad mein kisiki gum rehte hain aksar..
koi kehta hai moti toh koi kehta hai ki aankhon mein pani hai..
Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile

kab subah ki garmi se pighalti huyi bahaar aa gayi..
kab roshni se jhilmil sitaron ki bauchaar aa gayi..
kuch kehna tha waqt ko humse ya kuch shikayat hamari thi kahein..
kab dhundhli si subah guzari aur suhani si shaam aa gayi..

kaise dil ki baaton mein nasha sa chhaa jata hai dekho..
badhte hain raahon mein toh raaste ka mazaa aata hai dekho..
kitni aasani se lamhon ne tarakki kar li kya bolun..
dhalti huyi shaam se chand nazar aata hai dekho..

is chand ki chandni mein kuch pal hamare bhi hain..
dil ki baaton se khilte huye vo kamal hamare bhi hain..
kabhi udhti thi titliyan jin phoolon pe kya kahiye..
un titliyon ke peeche kahin yaadon ke mahal hamare bhi hain..


wah wah it is really very very lovely.... Applause Applause
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very nice
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Quote from: prashad on November 29, 2012, 01:19:27 AM
very nice
thank you jee  happy3 happy3 happy3
Quote from: sksaini4 on November 29, 2012, 06:00:40 AM
beautiful
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