Dhonu Raza Ka Baz Gaya Baza

by songwriter_123 on August 17, 2013, 10:12:53 PM
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Band tha darwaja
Todd ke aaya ek raza

Naam tha uska dhonu
Shakal se tha ghodu
Akal se to lacchar tha
Gaalo pe mucho ka janjaal tha

Darwaje ke piche baithi thi
Haye ek sundar kanya
Dhonu se socha
Ban jauga main sabzi aur banegi ye meri dhaniya

Laga wo patane
Kudi ke aake chakkar khane
Par kudi kaha kamjor thi
Dhonu ka pakka todh thi

Rakhi shart dhonu ke saamne
Ki ek sawaal puchu gi
Jawaab tujhko dena hai
Jeet gaya to mere sang phir zindagi bhar khelna hai

Dhonu to khush ho gya
Bola budhimaan main bhaya
Pucho meri maharaani
Sunao apni kahaani

Pehla sawaal jab aaya to dhonu muskyaya
Sawaal tha bol dhonu tere kitne baal
Pagdi jo Dhonue ne uthayi
Wo to taklu nikla bhai

Jawaab ye aaya ek bhi nahi bhaaya
Larki muskrayi ,boli dhonu tum to haar gaye bhai
Head pe se dhayan hathao
Niche ke bhi baal to geenao

Itne keh ke wo bhaagi
Dhonu ko de gayi daagi
Rone laga dhonu bhai
Ab kya kare hum sai


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«Reply #1 on: August 17, 2013, 10:22:22 PM »
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 Giggle Giggle Giggle
full of humour........vry vry nice..
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«Reply #2 on: August 17, 2013, 11:53:29 PM »
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thanks for ;liking shraddha
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«Reply #3 on: August 17, 2013, 11:57:20 PM »
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kahani hai sir ye to poem nahi hai.... achhi koshish hai... Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: August 18, 2013, 12:13:23 AM »
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yes abhi bhai .. ye poem nahi , bus koshish th majakia karne ki
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«Reply #5 on: August 18, 2013, 02:38:37 AM »
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nice
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nice one...
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Thanks for liking it friends
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