Dhram (Ek Vichaar)

by NETRAPAL on July 17, 2008, 04:26:47 AM
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Dharm thaa mai
Geetaa or kooraan
Kee jubaan thaa mai
Goonjtaa tha girjaaghar
Kee ganhtoo ke saath
Nikaltaa thaa guruduare se,
Guru kee wanee ke saath
Bahtaa hooaa chahoo disha me
Dharm tha  mai…..

Insaan ne banyaa tha mujhe,
Bahoot hee shraadha ke saath
Kitaabo me likha jane  waalaa
Ek granth tha mai
Dharma tha mai……….

Geetaa me janm hooa tha  mera
Baaibil se kooraan me hokar
Guru granth me simtaa hooa
Dharm tha mai……..   

Aaaj majhab kee dookano
Bambo ke dhamaako
Poojaree mollao kee jubaano
me rahane waalaa
masoom ke koon se sana hooa
begunaho kee lasho se liptaa hoaa
mahaj ek bharam hoo mai

mandiro me masjido me
girijaghar, gurudwaro me
tlaash me bhatakte rahe sab
mai to yhee hoo yahee tha
ek baar jhank to lete tunm
apne antarman me
to paate tumhare man me hoo mai
dharm hoo mai....

netra…
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«Reply #1 on: July 17, 2008, 04:30:59 AM »
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bahoot khoob netrpal ji.....dharm ki sahi paribhasha dee hai aapne..
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«Reply #2 on: July 17, 2008, 04:35:46 AM »
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netrapal ji,

sashakt kavita,sacchi kavita,sampoorn kavita.dhanywaad.

Prateek
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«Reply #3 on: July 17, 2008, 05:23:07 AM »
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bohut khoob netra ji
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«Reply #4 on: July 17, 2008, 05:38:00 AM »
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Netra

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Hats off to you!
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«Reply #5 on: July 17, 2008, 05:57:43 AM »
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wah Netra ji... humesha ki tarah bahut hi khoobsurat kavita...great..
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«Reply #6 on: July 17, 2008, 07:03:24 AM »
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thanks bekrar ji, bhawana ji, prateek ji, rajbir ji, prateek ji
for reply........

netra.....
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«Reply #7 on: July 17, 2008, 07:40:54 PM »
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Bohot khoob Netra Ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: July 17, 2008, 07:56:18 PM »
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 Hats off to you!   wah wah wah!! bahoot khoob Netra je.. pad kar dil khush ho gaya!!! Good Creation!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 18, 2008, 04:09:35 AM »
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thanks pooja ji or clemeria ji for reply....

netra.....
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