DHUAN HEE DHUAN.....SOUDAGAR

by soudagar on February 20, 2013, 09:20:39 AM
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Dekhta hoon ab jahan najar aata hai dhuan hi dhuan
har taraf jal rahi hai bastiyan aur jal rha hai insan

ab to lahu luhan ho rahi hai zamin yeh devtaon kii
 har taraf faili haiwaniyat raaj kar rha hai haiwan

na shunkh ki sadein hain na ab sada azaan ki
ab to bas pujaa ja raha das sir wala raavan hi yahan

najar meri zamin ko lagi hai aaj aasman kii
hai dar badar log kyun  kyun jal rhe hai makan

 dekho likha hua hai zindgi yahan har ek lash par
koi jee rha hai lachar ho koi jee rha hai bezubaan

takht ki ladai hai yeh huqumat ki ho rahi jung hai
yeh begunahon ka khoon bhi siyaston ka rang hai yahan

apno ko apno ka dushman bna khel rhe hai khel kaisa
lakeer khench di gai hai dilon ke darmiyan
 
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«Reply #1 on: February 20, 2013, 09:30:09 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: February 20, 2013, 09:51:06 AM »
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bahut khoob
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bahut khoob
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Bohat Khub!!!

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«Reply #6 on: February 20, 2013, 10:48:35 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
kya baat hai soudagar ji. bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: February 20, 2013, 11:51:37 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on February 20, 2013, 09:20:39 AM
Dekhta hoon ab jahan najar aata hai dhuan hi dhuan
har taraf jal rahi hai bastiyan aur jal rha hai insan

ab to lahu luhan ho rahi hai zamin yeh devtaon kii
 har taraf faili haiwaniyat raaj kar rha hai haiwan

na shunkh ki sadein hain na ab sada azaan ki
ab to bas pujaa ja raha das sir wala raavan hi yahan

najar meri zamin ko lagi hai aaj aasman kii
hai dar badar log kyun  kyun jal rhe hai makan

 dekho likha hua hai zindgi yahan har ek lash par
koi jee rha hai lachar ho koi jee rha hai bezubaan

takht ki ladai hai yeh huqumat ki ho rahi jung hai
yeh begunahon ka khoon bhi siyaston ka rang hai yahan

apno ko apno ka dushman bna khel rhe hai khel kaisa
lakeer khench di gai hai dilon ke darmiyan
 


very good.....!
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wha wha ji
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Bahut khoob saudagar jee
Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Shukriya saini sir
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shukriya nandbahu ji
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