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«Reply #15 on: November 18, 2010, 11:02:33 AM » |
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aapki rachna wakai taarif-e-kabil hai kilbill ji... or aap likhna nahi jante...eisa mujhe nahi laga.. infact aap isi tarah comment karte rahe...to mujhe yakeen hai bahut jald hume aapka likha hua kalam padhne ko milega... take care of urself.... hahaha...
manzile ishq ji aapne meri tareef kr di waah!!:)
mujhe nai aata kuch likhna bas comnt karna aata h mujhe...Aapki peshkash bahut achhi thi to kuch lines mene bhi Add kar di thi bas.
AAP LIKHTI RAHIYE BAS
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«Reply #16 on: November 18, 2010, 11:04:15 AM » |
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thanx alot anaamika ji..... Manzil-e-ishq ji....achhaa kalaam hai aap ka..... 
Mazaar par teri uggti hari-hari ghaass dekhti hu
Maut se bhi panpe mein aysi zindagi dhundhati hu
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«Reply #17 on: November 18, 2010, 12:27:45 PM » |
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dhanyabaad Manzilen ishq ji..
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tamaam bewafaon me ik wafadaar dhundta hun ,
jo kathputli na ho wo kirdaar dhundta hun !!!
thanx Manzile ishq:)
aapka naam jaanne ki Chahat me...Subhash
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«Reply #18 on: November 19, 2010, 06:51:43 AM » |
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not bad... not bad subash ji..... jo kathpuli na ho wo kirdar dhundhta hu.... kya kahne janab...... now i m feelin jealous... ki ye line maine kyu nahi likhi.... hats off to u... priya... dhanyabaad Manzilen ishq ji..
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tamaam bewafaon me ik wafadaar dhundta hun ,
jo kathputli na ho wo kirdaar dhundta hun !!!
thanx Manzile ishq:)
aapka naam jaanne ki Chahat me...Subhash
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«Reply #19 on: November 19, 2010, 07:16:59 AM » |
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Manzilen ishq ji..
aap ne mera hausala badhaya iske liye bahut bahut shukriya.
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hazaar nagme hum kya likhte ik nagma hi kaafi tha,
ku talaste hum kisi dusre ko,
dil lzalaane ko ik hi chehra kaafi tha....
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«Reply #20 on: November 19, 2010, 07:28:20 AM » |
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you are most welcome subash ji... keep writing...... Manzilen ishq ji..
aap ne mera hausala badhaya iske liye bahut bahut shukriya.
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hazaar nagme hum kya likhte ik nagma hi kaafi tha,
ku talaste hum kisi dusre ko,
dil lzalaane ko ik hi chehra kaafi tha....
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«Reply #21 on: November 19, 2010, 09:44:37 AM » |
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ohhoo aap Priya ji hain... itna khoobsurat naam Chupaiye mat. .... thanx Priya ji:) aapko aapki manzile ishq mil jaye...  |
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«Reply #22 on: November 19, 2010, 11:12:42 AM » |
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Lo tumne bulaaya Priya-di mein chalee aayee
Manzil-e-ishq paane ko mein daudi chalee aayee...
Pathar ki tarah jeeney ki jab se tujhe sakhee ye kalaa aa gayi
Meel-ka-pathar ban tu rahgeer ko Manzil tak pahuncha gayi thanx li'l sis.......
tum bahut accha likhti ho...
do keep coming.....
& take care of yourself....
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«Reply #23 on: November 21, 2010, 07:38:26 AM » |
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bahaut badhiya manzil e ishq ji. riswaaee aur beqaraari ke ehsaas ko bahaut hi sateek aur compact tareeke se bayaan kiya hai.
ghalib ka ek sher yaad aataa hai ....
dhotaa huN jab maiN peeney ko us seem tan ke paaNv
rakhtaa hai zid se kheNchkar baahar lagan ke paaNv
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«Reply #24 on: November 22, 2010, 06:34:41 AM » |
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thanx subash ji.... or insha allah... manzil-e-ishq hume jald hi naseeb ho... ohhoo aap Priya ji hain... itna khoobsurat naam Chupaiye mat. .... thanx Priya ji:) aapko aapki manzile ishq mil jaye... |
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«Reply #25 on: November 22, 2010, 06:35:31 AM » |
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thanx sweetheart.... Lo tumne bulaaya Priya-di mein chalee aayee
Manzil-e-ishq paane ko mein daudi chalee aayee...
Pathar ki tarah jeeney ki jab se tujhe sakhee ye kalaa aa gayi
Meel-ka-pathar ban tu rahgeer ko Manzil tak pahuncha gayi |
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«Reply #26 on: November 22, 2010, 06:36:16 AM » |
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ijjat afjai ka shukrai zarra ji.... bahaut badhiya manzil e ishq ji. riswaaee aur beqaraari ke ehsaas ko bahaut hi sateek aur compact tareeke se bayaan kiya hai.
ghalib ka ek sher yaad aataa hai ....
dhotaa huN jab maiN peeney ko us seem tan ke paaNv
rakhtaa hai zid se kheNchkar baahar lagan ke paaNv
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