dil bhara bhara sa,khud mai ek khalipan..

by Pooja on May 23, 2008, 06:59:34 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 05, 2008, 04:06:13 PM »
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Kuch palo ka sukh, umar-bhar ka gum
Na jaane kis tarah, insaan, insaan ko de jaate hai

Khud main kaha tak samete koi yah dard
Kitna bhi ro lo, yah dard ander he kahi rah jaate hai

bahoot khoob pooja ji..
kuch aapki nazar...............ye ashar


jo diya tumhe khushi samajh kar,
usne dil tumhaara dukhaya,
naseeb ki mere kavaten to dekho,
boya phool aur kanta paya
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«Reply #16 on: August 05, 2008, 04:32:27 PM »
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Finally after Read 210 times, ek jawab to ayya  icon_salut

kaya khushi, kaya gum
sab ke arth kho gaye
kaya phool, kaya kantein
her Ehsaas be-arth ho gaye!!
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«Reply #17 on: August 05, 2008, 04:41:15 PM »
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Good 2 Pooja jee,

Aaj khushi kal gham,
Arth bhi vyast ho gaye,
Aaj pyar kal bekaar,
Ahsaas saare jal gaye. -
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«Reply #18 on: August 05, 2008, 05:06:46 PM »
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Nice Lines Sami!!
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«Reply #19 on: August 05, 2008, 05:50:58 PM »
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Quote from: syednaami on August 05, 2008, 04:41:15 PM
Good 2 Pooja jee,

Aaj khushi kal gham,
Arth bhi vyast ho gaye,
Aaj pyar kal bekaar,
Ahsaas saare jal gaye. -

ahsaas kabhi marte nahi badal jaate hain,
kuch log girne se pahle sambhal jaate hain,
mano to har raat subah hone ka ishaara hai,
hum to pyaar ko bekar kah ke nikal jaate hain
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«Reply #20 on: August 05, 2008, 05:55:33 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 05, 2008, 04:32:27 PM
Finally after Read 210 times, ek jawab to ayya  icon_salut

kaya khushi, kaya gum
sab ke arth kho gaye
kaya phool, kaya kantein
her Ehsaas be-arth ho gaye!!

ab chupa chupa ke likhoge to ye to hona hi tha....fir bhi badkismati hai humari ..ki hum dekh na paaye..ise maafi chahunga...

ye mousam ka takaza hai, na udaas hona tum,
baharon ko aana hota hai, har patjhad ke baad hi
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«Reply #21 on: August 05, 2008, 05:56:26 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on August 05, 2008, 05:50:58 PM
ahsaas kabhi marte nahi badal jaate hain,
kuch log girne se pahle sambhal jaate hain,
mano to har raat subah hone ka ishaara hai,
hum to pyaar ko bekar kah ke nikal jaate hain

bahoot sahi kaha.. bas Bekara ji apki last line se sehmat nahi!!

Jo na mila payar ke badle pyar
To pyar ko kaise hum bhula de
Kar gaya jo wo daga humse
Kaise apne ehsaas hum bhula de

Jo mehsoos kiya usne, wo hum pa gaye
Jo mehsoos kiya humne, hum wo jata (mehsoos karana) gaye
Na bana sake thori si bhi jagah uske dil main
Jo umarbhar ke liye, humare dil mai ghar bana gaye
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«Reply #22 on: August 05, 2008, 05:58:58 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 05, 2008, 05:56:26 PM
bahoot sahi kaha.. bas Bekara ji apki last line se sehmat nahi!!

Jo na mila payar ke badle pyar
To pyar ko kaise hum bhula de
Kar gaya jo wo daga humse
Kaise apne ehsaas hum bhula de

Jo mehsoos kiya usne, wo hum pa gaye
Jo mehsoos kiya humne, hum wo jata (mehsoos karana) gaye
Na bana sake thori si bhi jagah uske dil main
Jo umarbhar ke liye, humare dil mai ghar bana gaye


Wah wah simply good
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«Reply #23 on: August 05, 2008, 05:59:16 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on August 05, 2008, 05:55:33 PM
ab chupa chupa ke likhoge to ye to hona hi tha....fir bhi badkismati hai humari ..ki hum dekh na paaye..ise maafi chahunga...

ye mousam ka takaza hai, na udaas hona tum,
baharon ko aana hota hai, har patjhad ke baad hi

wah kaya baat kahi hai apne!! bahoot khoob!! do line mai zindagi ka itna gahra Arth!!

Patjhar mai ek ek pata jab girta hai
dil ka lahu tap tap kar ankhon se rista hai
maana bahar ayegi her ek patjhar ke baad
per her bahar ka jaana, umarbhar yaadon mai sisakta hai!!

last line wo bani nahi jo banana chah rahi thi sad5
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«Reply #24 on: August 05, 2008, 06:00:42 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 05, 2008, 05:58:58 PM
Wah wah simply good

Thanks Roja!! wasie ajj apki kalam abhi tak kaise kuch nahi likh kar gai!!
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«Reply #25 on: August 05, 2008, 06:02:07 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on August 05, 2008, 05:55:33 PM
ab chupa chupa ke likhoge to ye to hona hi tha....fir bhi badkismati hai humari ..ki hum dekh na paaye..ise maafi chahunga...

ye mousam ka takaza hai, na udaas hona tum,
baharon ko aana hota hai, har patjhad ke baad hi

Nice lines Bhaiya
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«Reply #26 on: August 05, 2008, 06:04:56 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 05, 2008, 06:00:42 PM
Thanks Roja!! wasie ajj apki kalam abhi tak kaise kuch nahi likh kar gai!!

Welcome Didi... arre aaj bahut logo ka padne ka mauka mila hame.
Sab ka padne k baad aap sab k samne hamara likha kuch b nahi sa laga ..
You all so good... I like the way you reply pooja di [/color]
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«Reply #27 on: August 05, 2008, 06:06:11 PM »
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Apka likha kaisa lagta hai yah app hum per chor de
uthaye apni kalam, shabdo ko thora sa app ab jord de!!
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«Reply #28 on: August 05, 2008, 06:07:54 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 05, 2008, 05:56:26 PM
bahoot sahi kaha.. bas Bekara ji apki last line se sehmat nahi!!

Jo na mila payar ke badle pyar
To pyar ko kaise hum bhula de
Kar gaya jo wo daga humse
Kaise apne ehsaas hum bhula de

Jo mehsoos kiya usne, wo hum pa gaye
Jo mehsoos kiya humne, hum wo jata (mehsoos karana) gaye
Na bana sake thori si bhi jagah uske dil main
Jo umarbhar ke liye, humare dil mai ghar bana gaye

nice reply pooja ji....
lekin meri aakhiri line se aap sahmat nahi hain mai bhi nahi hun...wo line maine sami ke likhe hue par ek tanz (/ ek vyangy / ek taana )ke tour par likhi hai....kyonki unhone pyaar bekar likha hai
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«Reply #29 on: August 05, 2008, 06:14:10 PM »
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Quote from: syednaami on August 05, 2008, 04:41:15 PM
Good 2 Pooja jee,

Aaj khushi kal gham,
Arth bhi vyast ho gaye,
Aaj pyar kal bekaar,
Ahsaas saare jal gaye. -

waise Sami ji ajj app jo bhi likh rahe hai wo mujhe mere kuch Fav. songs ki yaad dil arahe hai, yah line parr kar yah gana yaad aa gaya:

Yeh jo mohabbat hai, yeh unka hai kaam
Arre mehboob ka jo bas lete hue naam
Mar jaaye, mit jaaye, ho jaaye badnaam
Rehne do chhodo bhi jaane do yaar
Hum na karenge pyaar

  waise apki lines ko parr kar yah gana yahi ruk jaata hai... magar agge ki lines meri bahoot fav. hai:

Toote agar saagar naya saagar koi le le
Mere khuda dil se koi kisi ke na khele
Dil toot jaaye to kya ho anjaam

back to you:

Yeh jo mohabbat hai, yeh unka hai kaam
Arre mehboob ka jo bas lete hue naam
Mar jaaye, mit jaaye, ho jaaye badnaam
Rehne do chhodo bhi jaane do yaar
Hum na karenge pyaar
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