dil bhara bhara sa,khud mai ek khalipan..

by Pooja on May 23, 2008, 06:59:34 PM
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«Reply #45 on: August 05, 2008, 06:59:24 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on August 05, 2008, 06:45:45 PM

wah roja...ek baat tumahari kavita me maine specially note ki hai....wo hai shuruaat aur end... humesha dumdaar sher se hota hai
bahoot achche

Aapke dil tak yeh ehsaas paunche mera likhna safal ho gaya.
Bahut bahut shukhriya ji..
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«Reply #46 on: August 05, 2008, 06:59:46 PM »
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oye shabash kudiye......ye hui na baat ......chalo ab hum sone ja rahe hainnnnnnnn

Shukaria Bekarar ji!!

Ajj itne dino baad likhne ka mood bana aor app sone ja rahe hai sad5
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«Reply #47 on: August 05, 2008, 07:02:49 PM »
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Kayi baar rahon se bhatka kiye
Aankh mein zindagi ki katka kiye

Jab bi chaha unke baahon ka saya
Woh apna dhaman jadka kiye

Tha hum mein bi tufaan se takrane ka huner
Yeh alag baat ki aaina-sa chatka kiye

Log pyar ke Tajmehal tak pahunch gaye
Hum aksar be-rukhi ki sooli pe latka kiye

Woh hai ki gair ki mehfil mein shauk farma rahe
"Roja" jinke liye kahan-kahan bhatka kiye
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wow....bahoot khoob roja.....nice
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«Reply #48 on: August 05, 2008, 07:03:18 PM »
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Shukaria Bekarar ji!!

Ajj itne dino baad likhne ka mood bana aor app sone ja rahe hai sad5

Hum b yahi chahte ke yeh silsila zari rahe tongue3
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«Reply #49 on: August 05, 2008, 07:07:07 PM »
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Hum b yahi chahte ke yeh silsila zari rahe tongue3
subah paanch baje uth kar exercise koun karega? tum?
badi mushkil se to continue kiya hai fir se..
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«Reply #50 on: August 05, 2008, 07:12:44 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on August 05, 2008, 07:07:07 PM
subah paanch baje uth kar exercise koun karega? tum?
badi mushkil se to continue kiya hai fir se..

Exercise ... ufff subah mujhe b toh jana hai
okies ... mai b chali good night. Aap logo ke sang
waqt ka pata hi nahi chala... bye di, bye bhaiya
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«Reply #51 on: August 06, 2008, 04:18:55 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 05, 2008, 06:50:43 PM
Kayi baar rahon se bhatka kiye
Aankh mein zindagi ki katka kiye

Jab bi chaha unke baahon ka saya
Woh apna dhaman jadka kiye

Tha hum mein bi tufaan se takrane ka huner
Yeh alag baat ki aaina-sa chatka kiye

Log pyar ke Tajmehal tak pahunch gaye
Hum aksar be-rukhi ki sooli pe latka kiye

Woh hai ki gair ki mehfil mein shauk farma rahe
"Roja" jinke liye kahan-kahan bhatka kiye
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wah bahoot khoob Roja!!
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«Reply #52 on: August 06, 2008, 05:11:53 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob!!!
sab ne ek se badhkar ek lkha hai...

Bekararji, Pooja, Roja... Applause Applause Applause

Bahut Ache... Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #53 on: August 06, 2008, 05:31:43 PM »
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sabhi ki taraf se shukriya khwaish ji
sach me kal raat to is topic me ek ke baad ek dhadadhad reply ki bouchar si ho rahi thi...
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«Reply #54 on: August 06, 2008, 05:58:42 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 06, 2008, 05:11:53 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoob!!!
sab ne ek se badhkar ek lkha hai...

Bekararji, Pooja, Roja... Applause Applause Applause

Bahut Ache... Clapping Smiley

bahoot bahoot shukaria Khwaish ji!! kuch lines apki taraf se aa jaati to acha lagta!!
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«Reply #55 on: August 06, 2008, 05:59:21 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on August 06, 2008, 05:31:43 PM
sabhi ki taraf se shukriya khwaish ji
sach me kal raat to is topic me ek ke baad ek dhadadhad reply ki bouchar si ho rahi thi...

Kuch boondabaandi ajj bhi ho jaaye, kaya kahte hai app Bekarar ji!!
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«Reply #56 on: August 06, 2008, 08:59:20 PM »
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pooja ji,

poora thread aaj hi padha.shuruat mein kaise nazar nahi gayi-naih jaanta.pur shayad sabr ka ful meetha hota hein.aapki kavitaayen is thread pur kaafi mehak rahi he...aur bhavnaaye atyant suchaaru roop se ujaagar hui he.aap ki kalam ne kamaal kiya hein yahan.

bekararji---aap se ek baat mein khule dil se keh dena chahta hu--agar kabhi meri 'waah waah' aapko aapki kisi likhi kavita pur na dikhe--to usey adrishya mode mein padhne ki cheshta kijiyega--kyonki sambhav nahi hein aapki kisi kavita ki taareef kiye bagair buch ke nikalna.

roja ji,

agar such bolu--to aapki rachnao ko maine pratham baar dhyaanpurvak padhaa hein...aur mujhe aapki saari kavitaayen behtareen lagi.aapki rachnaaye kaafi santulit hein aur sateek bhee.shukriya.

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«Reply #57 on: August 07, 2008, 02:46:38 AM »
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pooja ji,

poora thread aaj hi padha.shuruat mein kaise nazar nahi gayi-naih jaanta.pur shayad sabr ka ful meetha hota hein.aapki kavitaayen is thread pur kaafi mehak rahi he...aur bhavnaaye atyant suchaaru roop se ujaagar hui he.aap ki kalam ne kamaal kiya hein yahan.


Prateek

Bahoot bahoot shukaria Prateek ji, sahi kaha ki sabr ka phal meetha hota hai. Hum bhi sabr se apki rachna ka intzaar karege Usual Smile
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«Reply #58 on: August 07, 2008, 02:54:35 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on August 06, 2008, 08:59:20 PM
pooja ji,

poora thread aaj hi padha.shuruat mein kaise nazar nahi gayi-naih jaanta.pur shayad sabr ka ful meetha hota hein.aapki kavitaayen is thread pur kaafi mehak rahi he...aur bhavnaaye atyant suchaaru roop se ujaagar hui he.aap ki kalam ne kamaal kiya hein yahan.

bekararji---aap se ek baat mein khule dil se keh dena chahta hu--agar kabhi meri 'waah waah' aapko aapki kisi likhi kavita pur na dikhe--to usey adrishya mode mein padhne ki cheshta kijiyega--kyonki sambhav nahi hein aapki kisi kavita ki taareef kiye bagair buch ke nikalna.

roja ji,

agar such bolu--to aapki rachnao ko maine pratham baar dhyaanpurvak padhaa hein...aur mujhe aapki saari kavitaayen behtareen lagi.aapki rachnaaye kaafi santulit hein aur sateek bhee.shukriya.

Prateek
shukriya prateek ji mai bhi aapke kalam ke likhne ka intzaar kar raha hun...
aap jis mahfil me chale jaate hain rounak si cha jaati hai aate rahiye

Quote from: Pooja on August 07, 2008, 02:46:38 AM
Bahoot bahoot shukaria Prateek ji, sahi kaha ki sabr ka phal meetha hota hai. Hum bhi sabr se apki rachna ka intzaar karege Usual Smile

meri taraf se bhi prateek ji ko dhanywad de detin to aapke key board ghis nahi jaate... tongue3 tongue3 tongue3.maine bhi to sabhi ki taraf se khwaish ji ko thanks kaha na... Is it SO! Is it SO!
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«Reply #59 on: August 07, 2008, 03:07:04 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on August 06, 2008, 08:59:20 PM

roja ji,
agar such bolu--to aapki rachnao ko maine pratham baar dhyaanpurvak padhaa hein...aur mujhe aapki saari kavitaayen behtareen lagi.aapki rachnaaye kaafi santulit hein aur sateek bhee.shukriya.

Prateek

Aapne hamara likha pasand kiya iske liye shukraguzar hu.
Jaisa dil chaha aate rahiyega. Housla afsayi k liye shukriya ji.
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