dil bhara bhara sa,khud mai ek khalipan..

by Pooja on May 23, 2008, 06:59:34 PM
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«Reply #60 on: November 12, 2008, 10:11:17 PM »
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shukriya prateek ji
meri taraf se bhi prateek ji ko dhanywad de detin to aapke key board ghis nahi jaate... tongue3 tongue3 tongue3.maine bhi to sabhi ki taraf se khwaish ji ko thanks kaha na... Is it SO! Is it SO!

sabhi ko mera aor bekarar ji ki taraf se dhanywaad
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«Reply #61 on: November 13, 2008, 02:56:54 AM »
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sabhi ko mera aor bekarar ji ki taraf se dhanywaad

sabhi ne bahut accha likha hai..

(bekarar bhaiya and pooja didi, yeh kis baat ke liye dhanyawad ki jaa rahi hai.. zara mujhe b batlana na tongue3)
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«Reply #62 on: November 13, 2008, 05:25:56 PM »
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Shukaria Sonia rani... ab yah to Bekarar ji he bataye, hukum hua tha, humne poora kar diya tongue3
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«Reply #63 on: November 25, 2008, 07:40:01 PM »
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Dil bhara bhara sa, khud main ek khalipan
Kaya likhein ajj pooja, bas main nahi uska deewanapan
Rone ki chaht main ashaq sare sukhaye hai
Her ek rishte se hua jaise koi anjanapan

Socha than a hoga ab dukh, dil mera majboot hai
Phir kyun chaya hai ajj dil main itna soonapan
Dil bhara bhara sa, khud main ek khalipan
Kaya likhein ajj pooja, bas main nahi uska deewanapan
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«Reply #64 on: April 10, 2009, 09:25:21 PM »
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pooja ji,

poora thread aaj hi padha.shuruat mein kaise nazar nahi gayi-naih jaanta.pur shayad sabr ka ful meetha hota hein.aapki kavitaayen is thread pur kaafi mehak rahi he...aur bhavnaaye atyant suchaaru roop se ujaagar hui he.aap ki kalam ne kamaal kiya hein yahan.

Prateek

Bahoot bahoot shukaria Prateek ji, sahi kaha ki sabr ka phal meetha hota hai. Hum bhi sabr se apki rachna ka intzaar karege Usual Smile
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«Reply #65 on: April 10, 2009, 09:31:21 PM »
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Dil bhara bhara sa, khud main ek khalipan
Kaya likhein ajj pooja, bas main nahi uska deewanapan
Rone ki chaht main ashaq sare sukhaye hai
Her ek rishte se hua jaise koi anjanapan

Socha than a hoga ab dukh, dil mera majboot hai
Phir kyun chaya hai ajj dil main itna soonapan
Dil bhara bhara sa, khud main ek khalipan
Kaya likhein ajj pooja, bas main nahi uska deewanapan


bhar ayye dil to neer baha lena
apne he ghutano per rakh sir, khud ko samjha lena

deewanapan na dikhana kabhi is dunia ko
khud ko aor lootane se tum, bacha lena

ho jaaye kitna bhi majboot, dil to phir bhi dil hai
majbooti parkhane ke chakkar main, na ise todva lena

dil bhara bhara hai to ro le Pooja
per galati se bhi apne ashaq na is dunia ko dikha dena
apne he ghutano per rakh sir, khud ko khud he samjha lena!!
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«Reply #66 on: July 06, 2009, 09:14:06 PM »
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Such kaha hai waqat se bad kar malhum nahi
toota hai na jurega, per mehsoos hota ab wo dard nahi
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«Reply #67 on: July 06, 2009, 11:36:26 PM »
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Wow kamaal ka thread open ki aapne pooja ji,mindblowing,very beautiful lines by
Bekarar ji,Pankuri ji,Sarthika ji,Syednaami ji,Roja ji,Persant Roy ji,
excellent,keep it up. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #68 on: July 07, 2009, 10:12:07 PM »
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Wow kamaal ka thread open ki aapne pooja ji,mindblowing,very beautiful lines by
Bekarar ji,Pankuri ji,Sarthika ji,Syednaami ji,Roja ji,Persant Roy ji,
excellent,keep it up. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

 Thankyou ! Hats off to you! Madhuwesj JI!!
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