dil karta hai..

by Amarjeet Kaur on August 30, 2013, 01:50:23 AM
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Tere lie bahut kuch karne ka dil karta kai,
Halaat ijaazat nahi dete, per man larajta hai.

Vaqt badlega ye to yakeen hai mujhe,
Per vaqt ke saath ahsaas na badal jaaye, dar lagta hai.

Aaj hum saath hai, per iski qadar nahi humain.
Jab tak ahsaas ho, hum saath ho, dil duaa kartaa hai.

Ai, khuda dekhna chahti hoon kuch achaa vaqt mai yaar ke saath,
Cheen le meri sab bachi saanse, gar tujhe ye bhi zyaada lagta hai.
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«Reply #1 on: August 30, 2013, 01:55:01 AM »
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wah boht umda waah waah
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«Reply #2 on: August 30, 2013, 01:56:38 AM »
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Thanks sahil g...ur signature is really nice
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

very very nice amarjeet jee..happy9
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Amerjit Ji Tussi Wot Wadhiya Likhya.Nice One.
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«Reply #5 on: August 30, 2013, 02:58:54 AM »
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Quote from: Amarjeet Kaur on August 30, 2013, 01:50:23 AM
Tere lie bahut kuch karne ka dil karta kai,
Halaat ijaazat nahi dete, per man larajta hai.

Vaqt badlega ye to yakeen hai mujhe,
Per vaqt ke saath ahsaas na badal jaaye, dar lagta hai.

Aaj hum saath hai, per iski qadar nahi humain.
Jab tak ahsaas ho, hum saath ho, dil duaa kartaa hai.

Ai, khuda dekhna chahti hoon kuch achaa vaqt mai yaar ke saath,
Cheen le meri sab bachi saanse, gar tujhe ye bhi zyaada lagta hai.
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Bahut bahut Khooob Amarjeet Ji...Khoobsurat jazbaat...

Maine isse edit kar ke Har ashaar ke Beech ek Line Ki Space di hai ke padhne aur khoobsurat lage..Gar accha Na Lage To Gustaaki Muaaf..

Bhaut Vadhiya Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: August 30, 2013, 04:14:42 AM »
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Thankyou very much...Naswani g, Ravi g and Khwahish g.
AUR HAAN KHWAHISH G I REALLY APPRECIATE THE CHANGES U MADE...they were required really...thanku
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«Reply #7 on: August 30, 2013, 04:15:47 AM »
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Thankyou very much...Naswani g, Ravi g and Khwahish g.
AUR HAAN KHWAHISH G I REALLY APPRECIATE THE CHANGES U MADE...they were required really...thanku
Ur Welcome Ji.
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«Reply #8 on: August 30, 2013, 05:24:59 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: August 30, 2013, 08:35:45 AM »
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changa ji icon_flower
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«Reply #10 on: August 30, 2013, 09:57:39 AM »
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nice one..after a long time.
god bless you
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Thanku vry much... icon_salut...nandbahu and mkv g happy3 happy3 angel11
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bht hee vadhiya likhya tussi
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 :icon_salut:Thanks ripan g
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 Applause Applause bahut khoob
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